Penname: neneburge [Contact]

Real name: Anita Brown

Member Since: March 03 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

40+ year old mother of two..married 20years to same fella...who is extremely patient with me and loves it when you girls right the naughty cause it makes me amourous as he puts it..I just say horney..rotfl!

I am currently taking care of our neices who are 4yrs and 8yrs my (my kids: daughter is 21 and my son is 23) and it makes me feel young!!

I love to read. I love meeting new people. I love talking (as you can tell).

I work too hard but I am extremely grateful to have a job at this time!

I am very active in my church and with organizations I believe in because I believe that actions speak louder than words!!

I put God first in my life, my family second , my friends third and everything else falls into place!!

I am very happy I found this place and you wonderfully talented ladies!!! You make me smile, laugh, cry (rarely) and enjoy reading again!!

  

 




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To Last a Lifetime by intellectual titmouse
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 478]
Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78831
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016

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Title: Chapter 7: Waking Dream

Ok Moli should not allow 7 weeks to stop her from telling Sinon how much she obviously cared for him....she is too smart and mature fro that and Simon needs to let Amber go because I do believe she has probably le him go already since she is screwing his best friend!!

These two are so hawt together..intense and sexy...but they are already making the stupid mistakes most couples do..not saying and doing the things that should to ensure their relationship grows.

I really like this story sweetie..is not simplistic but just complicated enough to hold your interest and care what happens to Moli and Simon..I love aunt mae and even wondr about Cooper...I cannot wait for more ...excellent job sweetie!!!

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Date: April 17 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Maybe Not

Moliere is afraid of being hurt..I don't blame her..Cooper has been missing in action for awhile and she was left hanging!!

Cooper is going to have a do a little work to help her understand she is his choice ..baby or not...noy crazy Amber but her!! He has a great start telling off that kook Amber.

Amber was about to bust Cooper I believe...he better be glad aunt Mae took her behind out of the room..,lol!!

I really like this story..I hope you updt soon!!!

 

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Date: May 28 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Limit to Your Love

Ok I am all caught up and in love wih another of your stories darn it IT. I was gonna wait till this endd and read it all at once but I could not wait ..so here I am loving each character in all their uniqueness..and longong for more...

I love love love aunt mol and Simon..Molli frustrates me but I know he is scared,,Cooper not sure of him yet though I am sure he care about Simon...I can hardly wait for more.

I love how you craft your stories sweetie..you are an expert story teller..you get us involved and lost in your stories from the first few words and we can't help but to clinge to each word till the tale has been completed!!

BRAVO SWEETIE..MORE MORE MORE!!

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Date: April 11 2011
Title: Chapter 8: In Dreams

Ok I was all set to be pissed at Simon until he told stupid Amber teh deal!! Aunt Mae is rough..how old is she..I want her on my side in any fight for sure..now that cat is out the bag...nxt Cooper can tell his best friend he slept with his fiance and Aunt Mae can let them all know she is dyinng!!

Mo and Simon love each other ..time they make it official!!

Excellent story sweetie...excellent updt as well!!

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Date: April 23 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Keep Holding On

wow wow wow ..that was intense!! Why did Cooper decide to come clean now...is it because of Amber's threats?? Whatever the reason..it is going to be hard for him to be friends with Simon again...if that is possiblee...maybe after all is said and done..all skeletons out the closet , they may be able to regain some of the friendship they had before...I don't know...I am happy Cooper told Simon the truth but I am afraid it may have done permanent damage tp their friendship.

I wanted to reach out and hug Moliere....this is going to be hard for her and aunt mae!

Excellent writing as usual sweetie..intense and emotional....you always leave us wanting more!!

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Date: November 23 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Man Eater

You are on a roll talented lady!!

So there is another man  captured by Moliere...that makes at least three..poor Simon...he is a wonderful man to her and now h has gained eveen more competition..

Even pregnant Moliere can pulll with the best of them w/o even trying..lol.

I feel sad for Simon and Moliere...for different reasons...bit what is clear they need each other more than ever!!

I hope aunt Mae will listen and do what she can to get better...it would kill Moliere to lose her!

Great job sweetie!!

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Date: November 26 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Bad Medicine

Great updt sweetie...I love looking into the thoughts and emotion of Cooper. He really does care about Simon and love him and Moliere in his way.

I am not sure what he is going to do wth Amber to make amends with Simon but I think he deserves another chance at their friendship!

Great job sweetie!!

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Date: February 06 2012
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The Demon Seed by Happy2bNappy
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 276]
Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 50639
Published: March 29 2011
Updated: September 04 2013

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I could cry for Charly..what a mess she has gotten herself into..this man is worse than Satan!! How can she get out of this mess!! Poor Charly si so innocent and naive...she was just trying to get over her heartache from that jerk!!

It will take divine intervention to help her escape this one...she will need God to send his angels to rescue her!!

My heart aches for her...she has no friends..no one she can depend on..but good has to triumph over evil!! Even the baby is evil!!! Lawd Lawd Lawd!!

Child you got me caught up in this one!!! great job!!

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Date: May 21 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Wow poor Charly..somebody will need to explain to her what's up quickly!!

This baby is working on poor Charly and Nick finds it all amusing (btw new plcture of Nic ...finesss!!)..something tells me though Charly is not the strinking violette they think she will be at all and once she finds out the whole truth it will be on and she will take it all laying down.

Ok crazy behind Anastasia has found them and I am sure is there to start trouble bbut I know Laz and Nic ain't just going to let her hurt the demon baby are Charly...so she better watch out!!

I don't know how Charly's frinds will react to her pregnancy but this is about to get very interesting In deeed!!!

I love the twist and turns...cannot wait to see what happens next!! Great job sweetie..more more more!!

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Date: April 17 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Girl this darn story is too good to be a quickie and too exciting too wait..lol!! It is exciting and suspenseful..as I read I hoping it is not going to end...

I feel so bad for Charlie but I so want to know what is going to happen next..Nic is a monster and Laz I so love..I neeed to know how poor Charlie is going to deal with her demon seed!!!

great job!

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Date: May 07 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

OK Happy..I decided to take a chance on this scarey tale..though I don't like scarey.but I am loving this one!! I love the mystery and the supernatural elements..I love the hawtness very much!

It would appear Charly has bitten off more than she can chew  but how will that all play out..we will se!!

Ok bloody and gore I will run away but for now..I am lovimg this story..great work sweetie!!

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Date: April 10 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Poor Charly even the priest would not help her..so sad!! I was hoping that sticky stuff she felt was the baby coming out since the priest said demon be gone!! Poor Charly!!

Well Anna got what she deserved and needed atthe hands of the baby she was trying to destroy..goodie goodie!!

Now what ..is poor little Charly stuck with no escape..I hope not!!!

Love this story sweetie..need more..excellent job!!

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Date: September 03 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I love this story..I have missed it!

It is getting so exciting..I am so afraid for Charly how will she get out of this.how!! No one to trust..plz Anabel help her plz!!...That little mean baby even kicked her from the womb....lol

I cannot wait for more....Great job sweetie..more more more...

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Date: July 13 2011
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Bright Ōsaka Star by puertaobierta
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 373]
Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 168297
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012

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Title: Chapter 13: Jyuu ni (12)

Ok needless to say I was KNEW when Karou accepted Kamir's request for drinks ..something was gonna happen...I just did not think it would be sex so quickly..and no shame at all by Karou..matter of fact no shame by Karou...she is even spending the night!! I am shocked..

I pictured Karou as sweet and innocent but hardly..momma is hawt sister..lol..wow

I new Kamir was not right for Sara I am more than sure now..he just wanted some tail...anybody's apparently...married or not..pig!

I knew Sara would not sleep with Yuki...She has wayy too much self respect and respect for Karou plus I don't think she would want to risk the possible heartache.

Funny thing Yuki and Karou dont sleep together and he does not seem to be worried about her not being home either!!

Sweetie this updt was off the chain good and full of surprises!!! Excellent excellent excellent!!



Author's Response:

Thanks nene! It does seem that Kaoru has kind of done a 180, but I figure its to be expected. You know the old addage 'give em and inch, they'll take a mile?' I think this applies to Kaoru. She had an open and just flew with it. Not recommended but everyone has to find their own way. 

As to Kamir. I kind of think of him as a typical man. Its not that he is bad or good, the question is if he is good for Sara. We will see!

And of course Sara and Yuki would not sleep together, though Yuki scared me a bit there. Emotions and desires are powerful things I think. Who knows what would have transpired if Sara had been awake. But Yuki calmed down when he found her the same as always. At least that is what I was going for.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

:)

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Date: December 31 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Jyuu kyu (19)

Yuki is so freaking sexy in this chapter...I am so ready for him and Sarah to begin their romance!!! 

I want a Shouda..so mature and loving...he is a prefect child..he needs a sister wink wink!!

I think he is so accepting of his dad because his wonderfully classy mom never stopped loving Yuki and that love is extremely evident in how she has raised her son!!

Shouda has all their best qualities..he will be a great big brother!!

They are going to be a wonderful family..soon I hope!!

I love Karou..I am glad she and Sarah are remaining friends..I do not blame Karou for reaching out to someone else...she knew Yuki did not love her and could not love her because his heart has always belonged to Sarah!!

Excellent excellent excellent!!

 

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Date: June 29 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Hachi (8)

Ok I feel sorry for Yuki..I love all of them together..I am like Shouda sadly..I want them to be a family!

I love Karou but Yuki does not and she does not love him...Karou is coming into her own and Ithink she will be just fine!!

Kamir is fine, fun and all that but he does have Sara's heart..I think Yuki still does and btw he is ubber fine and just as rich but just married..yikes!! lol

I don;t know I really disliked Yuki at first but now I kinda really want him (now that he has grown some balls) and Sarah to try again...

anyway I love Darren Percy..I love that two people sahe one name that is so cute and sweet...Darren is my favorite ..though Percy reminds me of me..lol.

They are just perfect..a little disrespectful of the culture but especially Yuki but that is to be expected when he broke their baby's heart..

I cannot wait for the grandparents to meet..I think the grandpas will be just fine but the grandmas that is another story altogther.

Shouda is in kid heaven..I am so happy eh is happy!! BTW sweetie what does his name mean??

Great job..loving this story!!

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Date: May 08 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Sichi (7)

Karou checking out other men..hummm!!!

I actually like Yuki and Sara together with Shouda as a family ...but however that turns out I think I am ok with it becuase Karou is finding her own way anyway!!

I don't trust Yuki's mom..but I am so glad she got that director straight...but her inviting Darren/Percy to her home might be wayy more than she bargained for..but we will soon find out!!

I love Shouda ..such a man fro his mommy..Shouda Richards he says...love it!!

Great job sweetie..such a wonderful story!!



Author's Response:

Only two people mention Kaoru's wondering eye. I must have downplayed it too much. Yuki's mom and Sara's mom. A possible explosion! Thank you nene!

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Date: May 06 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Jyuu hachi (18)

I wrote a really long review and it disappeared...aww well!!

I loved this chapter ...I love the parents plotting and what seems like kids are going to find their way back to each other.....Shouda gonna get his family after all I hope...and the right way too!! Love this story sweetie!



Author's Response:

I asked Jacci if it could be retrieved and she said no. I was very sad. I wanted to read it. Well, thanks for leaving another one for me anyway.

Seems everyone is plotting at one time or another, except Sara. Hmmmmmm

Thanks for the comments as usual.

:}

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Date: May 06 2012
Title: Chapter 18: Jyuu sichi (17)

I am so sick of Kamir...I thought Karou was so funny when she asked him if he was having a tantrum...I LOL......he is like a child...and attacking uki was definitely not winning any prizes with Sarah.

 

I think Karou is using Kamir just as much as he is using her..I am ppretty sure soon as she gets her thrills over she will move on to something real...meantime I am not mad at her for getting her jollies..lol

I love Sarah and Yuki together but he is going to have to confidence and fight for his woman....he thinks she would let Kamir back in her life after all this ....why...he really does not know Sarah at all...but even if he feels that way he needs to fight for our girl....not sit back and let it happen!!

Ok the mothers are putting their heads together to get the kids together...I love it...watch out now...this is gonna be good!!! 

I love this story sweetie...your writing is spot on...perfection!!!



Author's Response:

Poor Kamir, he's a man! What can he say? They are often silly creatures I think. Yuki has been down for a while now. Its no wonder his confidence in matters of the heart is pretty low. Here's hoping he gets it together. Thank you for your kind words!

:)

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Date: April 26 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Ichi (1)

Nooo please dont end there..I do despise spineless Yuki but I would like moree..I love your style of writing and this story was excellent in the emotions it displayed as well as hide..excellent job sweetie!!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes Yuki was very spineless, maybe he will experience a change. Thanks again! 

:)

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Date: April 10 2011
Title: Chapter 4: San (3)

Sara is all woman and a wonderful person ..and Karou is a good person to see the sweetness and charm of Sara..it is neither of their faults they are in this situation....However,,Yuki is 100% to blame..had he had some spine and stood up to his oarents letting them know he was going to be the woman he loved neith Sara or Karou would be in this situation..he is the one to be mad at,,,

Yuki mother is poison and I never want my child around her..maybe Sara's parents can come in and get her straight..parent to parent!!

I really like this story sweetie..excellent job!!



Author's Response:

I agree that Sara is one cool cat. I don't know how I would be in her place. You are right, they both suffer to some degree, but who to blame really. Oh, you already answered that. I agree, Yuki needs to get it together.

As to the parent to parent...just hold that thought!

Thank you for reading and your encouragement!!

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Date: April 13 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Yon (4)

Nice long updt sweetie....BTW what does Mon_san mean..?? Why the blank space?

Ok  I love Shouda so innocent and sweet..but wants to kow why his dad just left his mom..that is right young man..mom comes first ..rotfl!!

I actually like Yuki's interactions with Shouda and his respect of what Sara has done and her as the primary parent...and his recognition his mom is a pig..too bad it took him so long to come to that reality!!

However I was kinda mad at Yuki for kissing Sara...he disrespected her and his wife..both ladies I like very much with very good hearts!! Men!!!

Love love love Sara and she does deserve some happienss..she had a hrd time by herself pregnant and heart broken..now that Yuki is spending time getting to know his son it is time for her to find some love for her life and that gorgeous Indian man might be the answer.

I love the international vibe in this story sweeetie...you are doing an exceptional job..excellent!!



Author's Response:

Hey there! Sorry I explained in one of my other stories. I often use this method when the character is unimportant. I put the first letter of a name than the the space. It means they aren't important. (ex. M___ ) I don't want you to waste the space trying to remember or imagine anything for them. He's like an extra that gets a little more camera time.

Yes I thought that a child in Shouda's situation would be curious about this, especially one that was open. Plus, he and Yuki already had a good relationship so I felt he would free to express himself.

Yuki, I don't know what to say. He is conflicted. 

International love is great! I think everyone should give it a try. Glad you like it!

Thanks nene. :)

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Date: April 21 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Go (5)

Sara is the stuff..she told that cow off with such dignity and strength..wow I was proud of her and she brought that old hussy down.

I almost cried for little Shouda , he had to be scared and hungry..Yuki mom is ridiculous..how on earth do you have nerve enough to just pick up someone's child ypu jusyt met..I dont care if he is related to you..heck his dad is just getting to know him hissself..who do u think you are..but Sara let her know...I loved!!

I love Karou..I dont care what happens between Yuki and Sara..though I am all about staying married..I don;t want Karou to be hurt. Sara will be just fine no matter what..and if Yuki keeps growing some balls he might be alright too!

I like granpa as well..he did the right thing standing up for his grandson and Sara!!

You are writing the heck out of this story sweetie..so unique and excellently written..I grasp of other cultures is excellengt and vivdly portrayed through every word and nuiance..excellent!!



Author's Response:

Nene,

Sorry for being late, but I do have a reason I hope you will enjoy (see end notes in current chapter). It took me a while to get things together.

I felt for Shouda too, I can't imagine what it would be like to be in that kind of situation. He's a sweet boy though. Sara is def strong, but everyone has a breaking point. I feel for her. As to Yuki, its about time he gets his act together! He's ticking me off. Kaoru is a special character, I wish her well too. Gramps is a bit of a wild card I think. He did a good deed there, but how far will he go?

Thank you Nene, glad you are enjoying it and hope you like my present!

Take care! :)

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Date: April 22 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Roku (6)

Sweetie this story if possible, seems to get better and better.

I love Sara's parents and her brother. They love her a lot and it is clear right now she really needs it. Karoud is becoming quite a friend to Sara and both ladies need it. Yuki is standing up finally and becoming the man he should have been a long time ago in his family. Shouda is LOVE, he is the perfect son..what an excellent job his mom has done with raising him. But like Sara's parents I am worried about her too..everybody seems to getting what they want and growing at her expense. She is strong but even the strongest person needs someone to lean on sometimes...so I am glad her parents are coming..she needs their support and I hope she finds some to love and care for her.  Who knows what may happen betweeen Yuki and Karou but Sara should not have to wait and see...she is too special for that...she needs someone to be head over heels for her too...someone to love her!!

To think this was almost a one shot! You writing is exceptional sweetie! Your grasp of the culture and the way you make it come alive to us the readers with each word is extraordinary!! Even before the beautiful video..and it was beautiful...I could visualize this place and the thinsg they were living through so perfectly. I have never such an excellent first view of the Japanes culture, in all it's formality before but it is the richness and excellence of your writing that enable the reader to do just that .....

Great job sweetie...I cannot wait for more....here comes the parents..that will be quite interesting to say the least!!



Author's Response:

Yay for Yuki! He's getting props now, though very few. Your observations about Sara are very accurate, however I think things are in place for her to get the love and support she needs. I know, you comment about his almost being a one shot kind of blew me away too. Its been fun writing it.

Thank you for all your support!

:)

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Date: April 30 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Kyu (9)

Darren/Percy are hysterical...I love the questioning and anwering doubleteaming..they are too much!! But it is obvious they love their children very much and that Kamir and Yuki better come right or have heck to pay!!

Kamir is too much for me..,,He seems to be into games...I don't like that..though I agree that the Yuki is to stuffy ..afraid to go after what he truely deires..

It is pretty obviois Karou is eyeing other men and it is just a matter of time before their farce of a marriage is over,,,I want so badly for Yuki and Sarah to get back together...they are suppose to be a family..now yuki needs to get on his knees and beg to have Sara back'''

 

This story gets better and bettter..I love!

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Date: May 15 2011

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