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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111872
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 28: My Decision

Update soon!! PUHLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: March 19 2017

Title: Chapter 17: Movers and Antics

These two are something else. One minute they are happy and everything is going well and the are outside forces that impede there progressing relationship. I know that's not Jamie's baby. He seems to careful to let a lying, manipulative, she-devil trick him into a pregnancy.I bet he has had people watching her during the time the were together jsut to make sure she was on the straight and narrow. But, if she were up to something his people would have alerted him to it. However, if it is, I know he'll do the right thing and make sure the child is his before providing for the child. Although that would mean that witch would still be in their lives. He doesn't want her he wants Elise and lets keep it that way. As for the Mason situation, she tried putting her foot down and it didn't work, so Jamie made need to step in and assist with the situation. If that doesn't work, then he can handle the situation in his own way.  Hey, hey, ho ho, those skeezers have got to go!!  I'm excited for them, but even more excited for Lance and Nina's impending baby...and update :)

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Date: February 23 2015

Title: Chapter 18: Before the Ball

I'm glad your back!! But why oh why must you tease me like this? 1. I bet the meeting between Elise and Jamie's parents will go fantastically...probably because she's got depth, compassion and a personality. 2. It's that crazy ex of a hag of Jamies and man ho that's trying to get into Elise's pants. 3. I hope Jameson puts the that little  prick texting Elise and his father in check with a quickness. Update soon. I love this story, but I still love Lance more....



Author's Response:

Thanks. Dont worry Lance is coming soon. 

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: May 22 2015

Title: Chapter 21: Breakdowns

Update, update, update!!! I can't wait to see what they hash out in this new contract. Jamie needs to be a tad bit more secure in Elise's love for him. Just a smidge.

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Date: October 06 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Birthday Woes

Aww Elise. I know your pain sweetie. Just wanting to do stuff  that reminds you of the good times and best memories you had with your dad. I'm glad she has nosey, yet caring people around her enough to tell Jamie what's going on.  I bet when he returns she's going to be taken to a new and improved Velvets and that's where they're going to talk about the contract and either get rid of it all together or make significant  changes to it like "we'll continue to support and love each other and sooner rather than later..." I know they still have this  issue to sort out about Dr. Douchebag and his father.  Loved the update!! When are the others and their significant others going to show up? 

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Date: October 17 2015

Title: Chapter 24: New Friends

I hope everything is going well. Please tell me that you are going to upate soon. I'm missing Jameson and Elise, along with their friends.

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Date: March 20 2016

Title: Chapter 31: Lazy Day

Update? 

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: January 30 2018

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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215324
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

I loved that chapter. There is something amazing about a man loving svc casting for his child that always makes me smile. Hiram and Savannah made me smile smile. Camile needs to be informed about what's going on with Debbie and the kluelss klan doo she can be prepared for whatever chimes her and the baby's way. And she needs to tell Hiram Scott her plan to move. They need to have a serious conversation about everything with the social worker and a judge. Usually, a judge is the one that decides about custodial issues and social workers do visits and follow-ups. Great story. May I inquire as to why it is set in the 90s? Update soon.

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Date: October 17 2014

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 27

Ugh!!! I wish this story was set today. If a child misses so many days of school the school administrator and the resource officer will go check on the child if they don't respond when called or letters are sent. These excuses for humans need to be beaten just like they hurt little Stevie, by someone bigger ad's meaner. I hope Stevie runs away and finds Hiram and his new family.

 

On a happier note, I'm glad those two are growing closer. Savvy is too cute and it's going to be spoiled rotten with love, but not in a had way. I want them to get Stevie and go away, far away.

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Date: December 28 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
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Summary: Modern Love Story
Zane was just hitting his stride in the modeling world. He had good friends and family and he enjoyed being able to support himself. However he didn't have one inkling of how hard it was to maintain happiness and good fortune in a world of sycophants and envious frenemies until that fateful night. Yet on that same night he discovered that there were still good people in the world, one person in particular in whom he may have found paradise. Although both of them have their struggles they will soon discover through passion and turmoil how to make love thrive in a modern world.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9914
Read Count: 4153
Published: October 14 2014
Updated: October 29 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please indicate on  your story this is a Member's Only story that way other readers will know. Thanks :)

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: October 17 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I apologize for the previous comment. I did not realize I clicked on the wrong story. Now to my review. It is a tad confusing the way you switched doesn't points of view during the chapters. There were a some grammatical and punctuation errors, but that can easily be rectified if you read your story  aloud. Zane, I don't quite like him just yet. I get that he's a model, but all models aren't vain. I know it is a,part of his job to have a perfect body, but he seems juvenile and shallow for someone that few up with a hard life, but maybe that's how you want him to seem. He reminds me of Zack from "Saved by the Bell" . His Hoodie Hero seems like a cool chick. 

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Date: October 17 2014

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Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69611
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Hot diggity!! Dominant Dean is in the house..and Elle.  Mean muggin people at the restaurant was greatness making it known to others that Elle is his. Those quiet, yet buff, nerds are the ones you need to look out for.  I'm glad they finally got down to business. I am eager to see how this changes their relationship...mainly Elle. I'm sure Randall is going to have some craziness to say if/when he figures out Elle and Dean are together and I'm sure he'll effect her job in some way. I am eagerly awaiting the next update. 



Author's Response:

They both were a little edgier this chapter. But I think Dean took the cake. I agree those are the ones you need to be lurking for.

Now as for that Randall situation…

That’s for a whole other chapter.

Thanks for reviewing Mavs0515.

CG

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Date: February 23 2015

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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather.  Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11832
Read Count: 40499
Published: November 06 2014
Updated: June 17 2015


Title: Ezekiel Black

I absolutely loved that Mama Rosa raised Zeke to be an amazing man. He is more of a man in his 18 years than the elder Wiloughby. I mean, he understands that despite as much as he wants LaDonna, he is waiting to make love with her. Additionally, he is letting her grow into herself, gain confidence, and experience life before  having faith that she is the one for him and making a life-long commitment. Hopefully Mama Rosa could make a friend/companion while Zeke is away and Zeke can put Wiloughy in his place sooner rather than later. Lovely update and update soon!!

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Date: November 09 2014

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Summary:

He wasn't Romeo and She wasn't Juliet. However it was a Love Story Nonetheless.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8126
Read Count: 2276
Published: February 23 2015
Updated: February 23 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Beau Ryan

This was an absolutely beautiful story!! It would be interesting to know what Beau's perspective was. Great work!!

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Date: February 25 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 54]
Summary:

It had been five years.  Cynthia had moved on with career and her life after not hearing from Caleb, her drug addict mess of a rock star boss, for four of those years.  When Caleb returns from Ireland, she faces her feelings for him while trying to survive a new strained relationship with another man.  Will Caleb be clean and will he find his way back into her life and her heart?

 

Sequel to Foolish



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 56219
Read Count: 30794
Published: March 01 2015
Updated: April 24 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wonderful update. I absolutley was in love with these two. I'm glad you brought them back!! I can't wait to see how her relationships evolve with these two men. Excellent.

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Date: March 01 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Lia Mariani and Dominic MacCleod were two up and coming leading actors who'd met on set and immediately struck up a friendship.  As the friendship blossomed, they both realized they'd fallen in love with each other.  They were just two chickenshit to admit it because of the differences in their races and his families outdated ideas about black people.  HER parents were afraid of their daughter getting hurt if Dominic decided to bow to the pressure of his families disdain for Lia.  

And hiding in the shadows is a man obsessed with possessing Lia.  Will these outside forces bond them together or tear them apart?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:No
Word count: 40900
Read Count: 138997
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: May 26 2015


Title: Chapter 11: Shaking Hands with the Devil

I am really enjoying your story. Eric is some kind of messed up is Seamus barked at him on two separate occassions. Lia needs to be careful around him and now that she knows his name, she needs to tell Dom and have Eric investigated and followed by a P.I. I'm sure he will without telling Lia...if she's tells him creepo's name. I'm glad she got to meet Dom's sister and they get along very well. I can't wait unti they meet in person!! Update soon.



Author's Response:

Oh, she IS gonna tell her man...AND her brothers.  Them Mariani boys ain't no joke when it comes to they're little sis.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

submissive: adjective

 

1. inclined or ready to submit or yield to the authority of another;unresistingly or humbly obedient: submissive servants.

 

2. marked by or indicating submission or an instance of yielding to the authority of another



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11086
Read Count: 1870
Published: May 11 2015
Updated: May 27 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Two

I'm not usually into Domme/sub stories, but for some reason I like this one. Drinking out of a dog bowl and slapping him in the face isn't for me, but I can look past that since this is your story. I'm intrigued by Alexa and Jamie and can't wait to read more about their past. When you mentioned Ft. Worth, I smiled a kool-aid smile. I love it when authors mention places I've been to/lived :) Great start to an intriguing story update soon!!



Author's Response:

You know, I feel like Dallas/Ft. Worth is extrememly overlooked as a big city! I'm from Texas and have spent the majority of my years here, so I wanted to show her a little love! I really wanted to do something different with this one, and all through its not exactly my thing either, this is some people's thing. Why not explore it? Thanks for reading!

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Date: May 28 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Clark E. has always been the mysterious one out of all of his friends. With a new company on the rise and heartbreak in his past he has many doubts about women. Taking a chance and from the suggestion of his good friend he goes online and starts a romance with Katrina.

Katrina is the ugly duckling that has been named in her family. Living in the shadows of her older sister and cousin she becomes closed off from the outside world. Her only escape is the internet that gives her confidence. She makes a fake profile pretending to be someone else but then starts to develop feelings for Clark.

What happens when these two get to meet in the real world?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 8175
Read Count: 13733
Published: May 23 2015
Updated: August 03 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Sound Familiar

I have reread this chapter several times. Oh Kat is going to get herself in a world of trouble. Who's picture did she take? I understand her reason for using someone else's picture.  I went through the same thing at one point when I was on differing dating websites. People on the internet are mean. However, I learned it also depends on what dating websites you're on. I can't wait to meet the sister and cousin to figure out when she is having panic/anxiety attacks. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Clark may surpass Lance as my favorite :) Marco seems like a good boss, will he get a story after this one? Update soon!!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed
Date: July 16 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Nights like this

What in the world happened to make her cousin and sister treat her so badly? The fact that they hooked her up with Bree's ex and that his was a loser is beyond repair. They've done a lot of damage to her self-esteem. Maybe Clark (in person or online) or his brother will help bring it out in her after being around them in the office. I love it. probably more than I love Jamie...

Will Clark's brother be getting a story?



Author's Response:

Yeah I know they treat her so bad. As for Clark's brother getting his story I'm thinking about it not sure yet. haha I know you love some Jamie ooohh Clark's the new bae.

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Date: August 12 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Nights like this

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDAAAAAAAAAAAATE...please. I'm begging you. Puhlease!!!I want to know more about Kat & Clark.

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Date: September 19 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Diggers & Dates

Why must you tease me like that. I'm eagerly awaiting Kat and Clark's meeting. I want Clark's brother to put those two hussies in their place and rebuke any advances they make. I cannot wait for the mishaps, mayhem, sparks/fireworks and love in the upcoming chapters. I can't wait for Kat to meet Nina & Elise because she needs some good girl friends in her life that don't tear her down. Update ASAP because...well, I said so :)

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Date: October 04 2015

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Alexis went to work expecting a boring and uneventive day, little did she know, a certain redhead was about to change that. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3737
Read Count: 3100
Published: May 29 2015
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Left Jacket

Excellent read!!! I enjoyed the way the two connected with each other. If you choose not continue beyond Red's perspective. That's your choice, but if you want to continue that's your choice as well. I am  intrigued by Red's situation and cannot wait to discover why he dined and ditched and why he's so attached to his dad's jacket. Maybe his father is deceased or left and that's the only thing he has of him, or maybe Red is lying about that too. either way,  Great job!

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Date: May 29 2015

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Summary:

Nathaniel Hendricks lived alone in his lakehouse on Lake Michigan spending his days remebering the young son he tracgically lost and the wife who left him when he needed her the most. The only thing that kept him remotely happy was the lake he lived by boating and fishing. He already failed as a father and a husband so why would God give him another chance?

Eden Wilson spent most of her life running from abuse and now as a young adult she finds herself running from an obsessive abusive ex-boyfriend. Not wanting the child she's carrying to be in danger she spends most of her pregancy running until she tries to get in contact with her uncle for help. Eden finds herself with her uncle's friend a lonely handsome man Nathaniel who gives her shelter in a snowstorm. 

Little did either of them know how close the baby would bring them together or how much this little bundle of joy would help them learn about secound chances.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 28561
Read Count: 37469
Published: June 16 2015
Updated: June 14 2016


Title: Chapter 11: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

Sol knows that Nate is his dad in all the ways that count. I can't wait until Eden realizes it too. They're already a cute family. Maybe Eden needs to go back to Nate's so she and Sol can sleep well every night :) That busybody Charlotte and wench Wendy are going to have karma bite them in the butt. I'm trying to figure out why Wendy wants Nate to be so miserable is she's happily married to that other douchebag? I will never understand why miserable people want to bring others down and be miserable with them. Nate has suffered enough and is finally getting back to life. Oh the small town life. Great update!

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Date: July 27 2015

Title: Chapter 13: MARCH 6TH 1990

Awww, I love that Baby Sol. He is going to bring them all together as one loving family. I'm glad that Eden finally admitted how Sol was conceived and that Nathan was so encouraging towards her. I love how their bond is being cemented by doing little things together, while their attraction acknowledged as well. Great update!

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Date: August 12 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Who knew Montana had so many temptations?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5577
Read Count: 5088
Published: June 21 2015
Updated: June 23 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't know where Camilla is from, but it's illegal for somene to stick something where no consent was given no matter how handsome or gorgeous they are. Where are her friends? I thought was always a rule amongst females arrive together, check on each other, leave together. Maybe something was slipped in her drink or they've got some kind of scent or chemical pumping through the AC. I don't know, but I'm intrigued to see where you take this. 

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Date: June 22 2015

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