Aha, so Alicia and Darryll once dated, as well as his new squeeze, Vanessa, used to be friends with Alicia and Regina. Okay, I see things have gotten quite a bit messed up. Blame it on the Alcohol doesn't actually work as a valid excuse, eh? Who knew, lol. Regina is all about kicking butt and taking names I see, I like that. I know more than my fair share of women with her outlook on life. I cannot wait to see more of Jeremy. Blue eyes, I'm a goner for 'em.

Ta. 

I really wish I could have seen more of him falling for her. It seems that quite a bit has happened in the passing two months, including him falling for her, and it would have been cool to see it unfold for myself.

I wonder how things are progressing between Gina and Benji. Maybe she has finally given in to him. That would be sweet.

How very contradictory of Jeremy to accuse her of behaving like she was raised with some sort of manners simply because he is a Harrington, as opposed to actually being a polite person. Only to then list his last name as the sole reason a teacher wouldn't give him less than a passing grade. Oh, really, bro? Cute or not, the dude is pretentious, condescending and just entirely too up his own ass. I'd have had him escorted off the grounds, would have taken him down a peg or two.

I don't know how I feel about this petty beef Ms. Birchman has with the Dean. It's trivial and she is supposed to be an educator. However, Junilee is a bad-ass and I've grown rather fond of her.

Benji and Jeremy, it seems to be the start of a beneficial friendship. Showing the contrast between Jeremy's relationship and Alicia's relationship with their Fathers was a nice bit of the chapter. I enjoyed the clearcut differences between the two, but you can also see that neither of them gets along entirely with their Dads. It feels like Alicia's Dad is pushing her toward Yale, which is a brilliant college, but if you're going to Yale for medicine than it should be because you want to be practice medicine. If she enjoys dancing, which it seems she does, I wonder if she shouldn't be majoring in that.

Eh.

That moment between Jeremy and his Dad was one I didn't quite understand but I want to. Oh, I almost forgot! Gina is so damn rude! Lol, I get it; she didn't want to tutor in the first place and of course she doesn't want to like Bejni, but damn, woman!

Bonjour! I've been greeting my family that way for the past week, I have no idea why, so that made me chuckle. Before that it was the coming and going Aloha.

Are Grace's parents separated or divorced? He wasn't at the house in the last chapter and Grace asked if he had seen her. Which has lead me to my belief that they are no longer together in some form or other.  

I love this cast and Henri's after photo is a step up. I like it.

Lovely. I was reading this story over on FictionPress, but I'd much rather read it here, I think. It was such a wonderful read and I'm restarting it now.

*Ta. 

The story seems to be progressing quite nicely. Jalena is making friends and she may have found her all-important nemesis in Justin's girlfriend. However, I think reviewing your grammar might enrich the chapters quite a bit. I don't know about everyone else, but I get caught up in that when I'd rather be totally engrossed in your character's lives.

I hope this helps as you continue to write more.

Peace.

Caleb said Patting his hair. - I hope this is a caricature of how pretty boys behave. I know not if I have known any, but if ever I do, they better not behave like this. Preening and the like, it is not attractive. And who told Caleb he was pretty anyway?

KrisIko, Krista & Niko, are they together? I really hope so, but then I do not know. If Niko is all over Jalena, that is the very meaning of uncool.

Sam surely is a hunky piece of pie, now he could definitely be a pretty boy. Okay, he already is one.

Krista seems a bit insane for no reason. But people usually have no reason, I suppose, just genetic predisposition.

That had to be the shortest class ever. Way to bolt Jalena, though it is quite obvious that he has a girlfriend.

-Peace.

So, OK, there was a lot going on this chapter. I really don't like that Justin cheated on his girlfriend so soon. I mean, I had a feeling it was going to happen, but so soon? That was not a good look, he doesn't exactly look like a five-star dude now, does he? He just looks like a cheater.

I really didn’t know this guy but I trusted him. It was just a knowing feeling I had, that he wouldn’t hurt me or put me in danger. I am almost absolutely sure that Ted Bundy's victims didn't think he would hurt them either, right before he snatched and killed them. Justin has been leering at her all day, a bit like a stalker (a creepy little weird-o) and Jalena trusts him? I do not understand this, it makes no sense at all.

™Peace.

I love her transformation through the years! Zora is very beautiful, who is she? Are Cecelia and Samson her folks? They look like they could be.

∞ Peace.