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Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78831
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Aw I.T., I truly understand, trust! I feel horrible for being selfish. Know that my plea for an update is a pathetic expression of love for your work. I hope your obstacles/situations/life-challenges become less troublesome each day. 

Be blessed. 



Author's Response:

thank you, my dear! and completely take it as a compliment and i love you for it! there is light at the end of the tunnel and each day it gets brighter. i will be returning to my stories soon.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed
Date: November 09 2013

Title: Chapter 8: In Dreams

Oh no, no, no. No you don’t IT! Don’t you dare end this story so quickly!  It is a beautifully written piece that has endeared me to its characters.  The dialogue is smart and to-the-point, the plot twists make sense – they’re not out of left field and imo (of course), Moliere, Simon, Aunt Mae, Cooper and even Amber-Who aren’t just characters in a book [which it should be], they’re real people with real lives dealing with realistic day-to-day situations. To just ‘wrap it up’ would be a crime!  The finale deserves the same love as its debut don’tcha think? Pretty please!

[ok, end of begging LOL]

As I’ve said before, every time I’ve read To Last A Lifetime, I'm pleasantly surprised. At first I thought, ‘oh here we go again, she’s not going to tell him, he’s coming back with Wonderbread, she’s going to gloat, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah’ and then when she showed up in the trench and heels, I almost stopped reading (seriously) because I just knew he’d punk out and totally destroy Molli but that was definitely NOT the case!  I didn’t expect Molli’s revelation, didn’t see Aunt Mae’s affection, NEVER anticipated Simon’s reaction and Cooper’s entrance to the hilarious calamity was the cherry on top!  GuurrrllI…I was breathless from hollering so much, I couldn’t stop lmao and then the ending just made me swoon:


"Simon, we need to talk," Moliere said quietly.

"Yes, we do," he whispered to her, brushing her cheek lovingly.

"I'm in love with her, Amber," Simon said, his voice even, cool, his eyes still in Moliere's.

"Amber, I'm in love with Moliere and she's carrying my child."

I'm very interested to see what happens next and down the road: what Amber-Who has to say, what’s wrong with Aunt Mae, what Cooper’s hiding but more importantly, I'm enthusiastic about Simon and Moliere’s relationship and their bundle of joy. So see…there’s absolutely too much fabulous ground to cover for at least five additional chapters! J

Aunt Mae is PRICELESS and so is the author’s talent!

BRAVA!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes!

Then she said the single-most undeniably surprising thing he'd ever heard in his life: "Put me to bed, Simon," she whispered next to his ear, licking the rim of it next. "Please. F*ck me until I can't think anymore."

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FANFREAKINGTASTIC! LOVED THAT!

It was so unexpected! I love unexpected. PUHLEEZE let him honor the lady’s request and let them LOVE each other all night long (a little voyeurism doesn’t hurt either – hehehe).  It was nice to see them relaxed with one another, I mean; they’ve lived together for five years…!  They should fall into place, or, not? Lol  Can’t wait to see

Gurl, you are da bomb!  Thanks for sharing your amazing talent with us.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2011

Title: Chapter 11: And It All Falls Down

YAYYYY!  You're back!  Thank you for re-posting this story, waiting for you to post others and yes...i'm being greedy.  You've been gone too long and I'm fiending for my updates!

Still wondering what the world Cooper did!  Loved his backstory...it explains a lot about him, and his friendship with Simon.  Mae can't leave now...Molli needs her more than ever plus she can't miss the birth of her first grandchild!

So...when's the next installment...soon I hope!  hehehe

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Keep Holding On

OH. MY. DAMN!  I gotta read this shit (affectionately referenced - you know this!) again...make sure I'm getting the full understanding b/c this is all kinds of effed up!  I can't BELIEVE Cooper!!!!

 brb...lol!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Keep Holding On

Cooper's confession was freaking awesome writing, right down to the gesture...even his voice inflection! Fantastic scene! And so heartbreaking for both of them.  My heart breaks for Cooper...even though he did some dumb things...you can't help who you fall in love with - ya just can't!  What he did was wrong, no doubt, but how can he fix this?   Please, please, puhleeze tell me Amber doesn't own shares in Simon's prototype?  It doesn't sound like she does...her name isn't on anything...just Cooper's, right? *crossing fingers hoping it's not true*  You're tricky with that plot twist Miss Thang...you're still a little vague on the minute details of his deception, Simon didn't give him a chance to complete his revelations before he joked his arse! Which was well-deserved I might add.  Cooper never hated his best friend...actually, he loves him dearly...he was just full of self hate. 

The first time Cooper was at their place to pick up Simon for the now defunct wedding luncheon, i KNEW something was up with his reaction to Molli!! DAMN, that's all kinds of jacked up...and SO damn good!

Now we have to find out what's wrong with Mae, and then start healing what's broken between the two brothers.

Fantastic update lady!  You rock!



Author's Response:

i love you. that is all.

oh, and thank you. lol

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Bad Medicine

Cooper’s character from the beginning was always – imo – the sophisticated, trash-talking fuck-up that you couldn’t help but love -because it was part of his charm ya know? The friendship between the two men was special, genuine, a bond that’s ever-lasting. Slowly Cooper’s childhood, his discretions, and bleeding heart begins to surface so surely one can’t help but feel sad for this man but now as his demons are prominently on display, that adoration has turned to disgust!  C’mon Coop! His slut-fiancée too?!!! Good grief man! He’s totally obsessed with everything Simon.  His self-loathing and envy has propelled him to destroy the one thing that is unconditional in his life:  Simon Ford.


The one redeeming aspect is that he didn’t take advantage of Molli’s vulnerable, drunken state yet sadly, and most regrettably, Cooper Denton has lost his appeal. (Great storytelling when the reader is so passionate about the characters isn’t it? J)


Hopefully Cooper won’t lay with that snake and is there to really set things straight.  As for Moliere and Simon, loved their scene – even though it was a snippet, it was still moving to see how much they love each other.


Thanks for the update IT!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 06 2012

Title: Chapter 16: Another Man's Treasure

There are few stories I read over, and over again…TLAL is one such story among the few.  The characters are very passionate, and energetic, and loveable – including Cooper…and all his ‘sins’. Lol 


How can Simon ‘fix it’ as Moliere so lovingly ordered? How can Cooper for that matter? I can’t wait to see what transpires during their much-needed talk.


I am so relieved that Mae regained consciousness; Molly would be devastated without her mother in her life.  Love their family unit: Molly, Mae, Simon…and yes, Cooper.  I think the only person who can talk some sense into this whole mess is Aunt Mae.


Loving the way Simon and Molly are with each other; they seem to move as one. Though Molly is apprehensive about referring to Simon as her husband, conversely, he clearly doesn’t have that problem; nuptials are only a formality, she’s already his wife in every way that matters.


Fabulous writing, update soon! J

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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In the Sedetian Empire a Dashenka male rules with absolute power. While the female is taught submission and obeisance. And humans are nothing more than slaves. It is within this society that half-breed Aria Skal is born and must learn to accept if she has any hope surviving.  But survival seems nearly impossible when she discovers that her Vadar has sold her to the highest bidder, the son of the Ruling Male.

Oren Di-Lor is a cruel and overbearing male who hates the very air Aria breathes. He is her newly acquired mate and the bane of her existence. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 41889
Read Count: 31961
Published: August 23 2011
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Excellent writing here, very robust in its tone...the period and characters come alive and envelopes the reader into the scene, particularly the moment where the 'creature' shows her strength by tossing 'the whore', and then bewitches her master to HER will  (o.m.g. FABULOUS).  Oren had no clue what hit him!

Well done Quills

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Date: October 16 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65036
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Maybe Lila is right, maybe they should go their separate ways. Or perhaps Jack is correct…, they have to their own lives to live but how do they fix what has been broken?


There’s only one culprit at fault here and that person’s name is JackLilaChase. This entity used each other without forethought, or malice; it just happened…and unfortunately…it has accumulated into debauchery for more than five years.


Jack. Jack hid behind his brother in an effort to mask what he needs the most:  a life with love from the woman whom he knew had already stolen his heart.


Young Chase clung to a mother-figure that somehow morphed into his own personal talisman, a beautiful amulet to behold but never touch.  The once frail orphan became empowered as he understood the dynamics of love and wielded morals as a shield, thereby keeping Jack at bay.


Ahh, the lovely Lila: caring, nurturing, and broken. She’d chosen the profession of mentoring to atone for her sister’s suicide; however, Chase was someone to take care of, and thus, assuage her guilt. While Chase became her Band-Aid…, Jack…is her thunder!! He commands emotion, desire too strong to resist, so, Chase is the excuse she uses to safeguard her soul.  Too late Lila!


I empathize with the trio; they are good people who has endured tremendous loss…now is the time to end this cycle of pain. Jack and Lila mustn’t sacrifice their romance; they don’t owe Chase their lives. What is paramount is for Jack to invest quality time with his brother, communicate with him, and respect Chase as a man by being honest about his relationship with Lila, stop hiding behind a lie. Jack should fight for Lila – fight with her if he must to be by her side b/c lawd knows the threat to her livelihood, and possibly her safety, is frighteningly real.


Ok, I'm done. Lol  Excellent job Voices!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jack and Lila are fantastic together!  They just gel, even when they're bickering they're still soul-mates imo. Would Chase accept them as a couple? Could he? I believe wholeheartedly that he loves Jack...he just feels neglected and dejected by his brother.

I'm curious about Chase, actually i'm worried about him.  It appears that he's a loner and lonely and Lila is his only lifeline, or was until Jack took her away from him.  If he doesn't have Lila as his salvation, the what's left for him to hold on to? How does he cope with reality?

There's also the question of how he perceives his relationship with Lila to be...does he love her as a friend or a maternal substitute, or does he have romantic aspirations for her?  hmmm, interesting.

Fantastic update!

 

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You must be commended for your writing skills.  I was in awe after reading this chapter.  You nailed their body language, emotions as well as the flow of the scenes.  You really get a feel for who Lila is, the love she has for Chase, for Jack (yes Jack!) and most touching, the depth of her bond with her sister! Brilliant technique in revealing that aspect of her life.

I'm not Siskel-&-Ebert but two thumbs up, way up! Great job!!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I don't think Jack did it, nor Chase for that matter.  I think it's someone who is very clever and manipulative, someone who is well-connected or has an intimate knowledge -and access - of the Jack/Lila/Chase conundrum.  And why? Why would a person or persons go to such extremes -be it revenge, envy, cruel intentions, etc., to obliterate the lives of three people whose mere existence is defined by survival?

A few scenarios seem plausible in my mind's eye, however, I'm just elated to journey this ride with you.

As for Lila and Chase...I'm glad Lila didn't 'go there' with him.  He's hurting and now he's trying to exact himself into a bed that's already occupied by his brother. Chase put Lila into an impossible situation by asking her to deny her love for him.  He knows she has love for him, but that's the extent of her affection...she's in love with Jack.  Lila must come to terms with the reality that Chase is no longer the little boy whom she 'saved' and cared for all those years ago; he is now a man desperately hoping for the love that could never be. I think Chase now realizes that his attempt at seduction may have damaged his relationship with his friend.

Jack, man, get home quick!  I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thank you sharing this story with us.  It is written superbly! The narrative isn't redundant from chapter-to-chapter; there's continuity within the plot points but executed from a different perspective with each segment and the updates are amazing and very generous.

Brava!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2012

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Summary:

 

Wren Blue didn't do mornings...

 

Especially when she found herself as the fourth victim in a twisted killer's game.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 19929
Read Count: 15745
Published: November 09 2011
Updated: February 26 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Unraveling the Mystery

SCRIBE!  I'm so freaking happy for you!!!  I just got home from work and I haven't even read the story yet but I'm just THRILLED that you're finding your way back.  By re-entering the posting arena...it just shows your strength as a writer and as a person...not many would have found the courage to get back into the game of putting yourself out there and saying, 'here I am world and I stand proud'!

This story has potential in its genre...not everything is roses - fiction or otherwise so i'm interested as to how far the rabbit hole goes and find out what the hell is dude's problem! Does he have mommy/daddy issues or is he just plain SICK?!  But more importantly, I want to see how Wren survives her ordeal, how she copes with reality or if she's in denial or, if she survives at all.  See...!  So many ways to spin this tale!



Author's Response:

Thank you JVME. I really appreciate you taking the time to review and the kind words you sent me while I was gone. Let's just say this will be a tricky road full of rocks. This one is definitely not fluff and roses. Stay tuned. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Wake Up Call

Damn this is good!  I mean, really...good! The suspense is killer! (Pardon the pun.) This psycho makes your skin crawl...sends chills down your spine...I swear it's like watching a movie gurl, for real! The tonality reminds me of Ed McBain's Puss in Boots or James Patterson's Cat and Mouse - though it's been years since I've read both novels, I still remember how maniacal and cunning the elusive un-subs were (there goes my Criminal Minds’ vernacular again lol).  I must give you props to when Wren becomes consciousness – her abductor is there…lurking…watching and then he speaks but she can’t see him!  The descriptive is precise, clean, vivid – to the point of experiencing Wren’s eyes-wide-shut terror yourself! Oh, oh, oh...what about the scene when Avery goes downstairs to hot, freshly-made coffee -thinking his lady-love's there...but then suddenly the TV comes on and he sees her bound to a bed and then the phone rings!!! OMG, classic chilling moment! Awesome writing Scribe, job well done!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Unraveling the Mystery

Off gate we learn this fool is crazy!  He’s calculating, methodical, sadistic and worst of all, he’s intelligent and patient…a very dangerous combination.  Now that I think about it, it reminds me of Kiss the Girls or Criminal Minds…hell…they may need a B.A.U. team to catch this killer!


Wren was kind to him, pleasant even, yet she has an understated strength that defines her character.  Her defiance to halt his advances shows that she’s a fighter…something that may or may not help in the long run but it lends another glimpse into who this really woman is, and possibly why this fool targeted her.


Avery’s phone call summoning Maddie to his home immediately was chilling.  At that point your know something’s terribly wrong.  Oh man…I feel for her friends and loved ones.


The suspense is spot-on Scribe! Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks JVME :)

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Intro - Path to a Scream...

It’s quite eerie that Wren compared herself to the missing women; her absent thought is the catalyst to the suspenseful ending. It’s like the calm on the ocean’s surface while the rolling wave beneath roars toward shore.  The effect was achieved successfully in such a short chapter; I admire that kind of skill in a writer. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the compliment JV.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Layer by Layer

Avery didn't tell the cops about seeing Wren bound and then receiving the mysterious phone call?!!  How was Bryan able to do that? (He had to have access to her house, wonder if he's taken anything of Wren's?)  Avery must've went ballistic and tore their place up.  I felt so bad for him, he's really in pain and probably scared out of his mind. He needs to compose himself and make those cops listen to him! 

Now onto this sicko for a sec...does he have a medical background as well?  He's injected her with...something...obviously he's trained or has access to pharmaceutical drugs. This guy functions relatively well in normal environments and yet he's totally sadistic, why is that? I love a story that makes me think and this Donner jerk...you're doing a great job writing his character Scribe. Update soon.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 23 2011

Title: Chapter 6: The Battle of Wills

I felt bad for Avery; he’s going through hell worrying about his fiancé’. And no one’s listening to his plea…but now Nix has no choice but to ‘serve’ with the proof that Avery’s cries are for real! Jerk!


Now this Donner fool is a trip! Diabolical actually. He’s killed several women preparing ‘the one’, right? So what did the preparation consist of…, discovering Wren’s body size and probably what women want so that he could create a ready-made home for his…wife?  He kidnaps his prey, goes to work, conducts his class, comes home – goes through the mail like any normal husband would do then he’s off to ‘greet’ his prize. Urgh! What a sicko! (Are any of those article of clothing Wren’s?) That seemingly cookie-cutter home in the American dream neighborhood is harboring evil behind its closed doors.


Something I noticed that I'm curious about…is the un-sub’s name Bryan or Ryan?  Is it an oversight or is it purposefully planted as a clue? (If so, tricky, tricky Ms Scribe! Lol) Does he have an alter?  Makes ya go hmmm?

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 26 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Predatory Claim

Goodness Gracious!  Talk about twists!!! I think it’s great to include her strength to live, and I'm not referring to just the escape necessarily, but day-to-day survival as well - you know - life after if you will.  Marrying the past-and-present as you've done here doesn't feel forced, actually, it's very smart. Loved how Wren's therapy sessions - how she copes with her ordeal, the difficulties she now face with relationships and self-discovery, even the inevitable court proceedings  - cohesively tell her story. And what the HELL is going on with a certain detective?! *raises eyebrows at Scribe*

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Preliminary Hearing

I'm really impressed with this update and I’ll tell you why:  it was informative without being obvious. The reader steps back and realizes, wow, a lot was revealed in such a relatively short chapter!


Wren is really courageous in her fight to heal.  She will soon face her attacker in court…that alone symbolizes her strength to persevere.  We also get a peek into the rescue, a hint as to how long she was in captivity and perhaps why she’s ‘attracted’ to the detective by referencing the hero complex.  It’s quite evident that this ordeal has put a strain on her feelings toward Avery.  How could it not?  She’s emotionally and psychologically bamboozled with misdirected affections [possibly] - which leads right back to needing the security of River’s presence. Most often, relationships become casualties of these crimes but I'm so very glad that he’s by her side, supporting her every step of the way – even if they don’t last he’s still there for her.


Kudos on writing the scene with the prosecutor!  The impromptu prep of the victim by the ADA was spot on!  Nice flow. Very believable and realistic…again I'm damn impressed!. Fantastic job Scribe!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Fear Factor

Damn you worked this chapter Scribe.  I love the psychological test of wit Donner is conducting on his lawyer. He can see right through her. (Wonder how he chose her -why he chose her? Makes ya go mmmm.)   She should've listened to that inner voice and ran but a woman like her has something to prove...whether she's stroking an oversized ego or showing the world, 'hey, I'm smarter than you are', she will lose because Brian Donner is checkmate for Attorney Leakes.

As for the accused, for some reason in this scene, he reminded me of another equally cunning, and sinister villain:  Hannibal Lecter. Both are eerie and yet mesmerizing in their demeanor. (Hope you took that as the compliment it was meant to be.)

Thank for honing your talent by sharing with us. I thoroughly enjoy analyzing a story, wondering what makes these characters tick.

Brava.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2012

Title: Chapter 15: And Then There Was Wren...

Donner is so damn twisted!  You can’t help but be intrigued by the character…even if you’re repulsed by his actions - not to mention his frame of mind, or what compels him to commit these crimes…ya just can’t stop yourself from wanting to know more…or sitting on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

 

Will they...

 

Won't they...

 

Three months in and Lulu and Dennison haven't moved beyond first base...

 

Will they...

 

Won't they...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: While We're In Love
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7425
Read Count: 9161
Published: December 20 2011
Updated: February 20 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Perceptions of Reality

The guys had me rolling!  Gita was a trip too!

It's great that Lulu and Dennison have vested time into each other...it makes for a stronger relationship.

Loving the series Scribe!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17 2012

Title: Chapter 5: Pep Talk Royale

Dennison's father shocked me; he was the last person i expected to see at Den's door.  What's more shocking is the encouragement to pursue Lulu or better yet, the love of a father toward his son.  Ellis uses his wife's illness as an excuse to get closer to his child but hell...whatever it takes to bridge the gap works for me.

I'm ready to see the intimacy between thse two deserving people, not just the physical but the true meaning of the word.  I have no doubt that's what they'll find.

Update soon! :)

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 17 2012

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