Penname: intellectual titmouse [Contact]

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Member Since: January 31 2010

Membership status: Member

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i've decided to change things up a bit, start over, if you will.


a lot of my old [incomplete] stories will be taken down, if they haven't already, and i'll posting new ones.


as i publish the older ones, i will provide links here.


thank you, everyone, for your support and patience over the years.




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Summary:

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Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills while she's going to school. And if life wasn't difficult enough, now she's gotten herself into quite the mess with a guy who thinks she's a man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48727
Read Count: 96575
Published: January 15 2009
Updated: June 09 2013


Title: Chapter 8: Eight

where's the rest?! this is so good!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2010

Title: Chapter 10: Ten

aight, Taylor, it's time to 'fess up. you got poor dude thinking he's gay.

wonderfully played, woman. i missed this story!

and i just realized i named a story of mine (not on the site anymore, but may return) the same as yours. the plots couldn't be any more different. you mind if i keep it?



Author's Response:

I don't mind at all!

Poor Christian's going to be tortured a little while longer. Heh.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

okay, woman . . . whew!

where to begin?!

for one, you must know, above all, that you are talented beyond words. your characters are feasible (despite, or possibly because of their stupidity), tangible, very real. i can feel every tick, every breath, every hesitation in their movements - truly amazing writing here and i commend you.

that being said, holy hell, these two are idiots!

Taylor is doing nothing but digging this hole deeper and deeper for herself. not only is she messing with her own emotions and torturing herself unnecessarily, she's doing precisely the same to Christian. the guy now thinks he's gay, for goodness' sake! for a man that may not be open to exposing himself to that lifestyle by even association, this shit must be incredibly hard, confusing, just a clusterfuck. and as for Taylor's intention to tell the truth, what on earth will she expect to come of it once it's out there? he won't trust her, won't trust himself afterwords. he's already been betrayed in his definition by his family, how in the world would he deal with having these conflicting feelings of affection and lust for a man when he's not gay, only to find out said man was truly a woman the entire time?!

lawdy-lawd!!!

i get why Taylor has backed herself into this corner. she thought she'd be in and out of this dude's life without much issue; pay him back for the damage to the car, pay him back for the money he gave the family. she doesn't feel indebted and he can go back to being worry-free (as far as money). everyone's happy. but the heart can be a mean son-of-a-bitch, can't it? and i also understand why she continues with the lie. b.c of how much she's invested, how scared she may be of her feelings, and, hell, it's hard as stone to tell the truth when people are comfortable with a lie.

i have a saying above my desk at work: Always be honest for the truth has an ugly way of showing itself.

damn, damn, damn, Taylor!!!

don't get me wrong: i still like her. love her character, even. she's a strong individual. stronger than most would give her credit for. she's protecting herself above all else and that's what makes her so realistic. too often are we exposed to characters that give in willy-nilly and the resluts of nothing short of a faerie tale. this is what makes this story so captivating and deliciously frustrating at the same time!

did i say i love this story? cuz if i haven't . . .

having said all that, Christian is a fucking idiot.

dude has got to be dumb as rocks not to see that Taylor is a woman. or at the very least, he's nowhere near as worldly as he thinks. i live in the New York area all my life, have barely left, and am able to tell a Drag from a Tranny to a Transgendered. c'mon, guy!!! but then again, dudes don't really study other dudes when they're around one another. it's not much of a question for a woman to observe people, whether it's the same sex or not. but for a man to do it, pride and reputation gets in the way.

dang it, woman! i done wrote a dissertation and the story's not even done!

i never do this, but this story is one of the best i've read in a very long time. you breathe such life into this scenario, into these characters that it's hard to deny the awesomeness of this.

keep going. do not stop, hesitate, or pause. brava, lady. brava.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen

THANK YOU, CARSON!!!

i understand the position Taylor is in, but sweet haysus, she's got the man thinking he's gay! c'mon!

Christian is not going to take this well. at all. but i'm hoping he finds it in his heart to see that Taylor meant no harm.

cuz those two . . . woo!

well done, woman.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2012

Title: Chapter 16: Author's Note

thank YOU, woman, for such a good story. wonderful, nuanced, believable characters. a great plot with real emotion. you should try to get this published. well done, woman. well done. i hope to see more from you in the future.



Author's Response:

You're being waaaay too kind but I would never turn down a compliment so thank you! Heh. I really do hope to write more for the site one day. Hopefully sooner than later.

Btw, you wrote a really long review for this story a while back and I never got the chance to say thank you for it. It was super thoughtful and really made me think about the story I was writing and where I was going with it. The feedback gave so much strength to keep going. Thank you.

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Date: June 10 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

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Remember your mortality

 

Never in a million years did Liam Bourges think that the most mudane of his patients would end up turning his life completely around and make him face his demonds.

Siobhan will get the answers that she needs, even if it means causing pain to loved ones and absolute strangers, and it all begins with one, Liam Bourges

 

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of LuKohana. LuKohan is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1183
Read Count: 6066
Published: December 07 2010
Updated: December 07 2010


Title: Chapter 2: I will either find a way or make one

dude, first off. loooooooooooove me some Tom Hardy. i'm convinced once we meet, he will leave that bird and take up with me instantaneously.

two, i'm excited for this. not even really sure where you're taking it, but from this first chapter, i trust you.

also, i'm not sure if you may have meant 'gobsmacked'. godsmacked is a bit more yankee. but godsmacked is cool too. lol



Author's Response: Your absolutel right, I did mean gobsmacked. Microsoft word is messing with my story, lol. Thanks for reading

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 08 2010

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Summary:

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"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 65686
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 9: Behind Jade Eyes

sweetheart, i know how hard it can be to write in forum like this, but keep doing what you do with this story. i, for one, trust you and your direction. sure, amelle at times seems implausible based on her actions and delayed reactions (harrison is trip!), but in reality humans will act strangely when tossed in certain situations and will flip on a dime when confronted with certain conflicts. it's much too early in the story to point out any character-based flaws; that's something to be reflected on if there were loose ends that weren't addressed. so far, i'm intrigued by the story and obviously others are as well, since they felt compelled to comment.

my only request is that you update more often. LoL

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: December 28 2010

Title: Chapter 4: Welcome to Hell

this is interesting. can't wait to see where you take it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: December 14 2010

Title: Chapter 15: And So It Begins

okay.

i'm going to try really hard to be patient. i am going to distract myself with my own stories and reading/reviewing others.

but i really, really, reallyreallyreallyreallyreally need you to update ASAP.

*deep sigh*

see? i can restrain myself. right?

HURRY UP!! lol kidding.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Consequences of the Obvious and Oblivious

uhm, wow. i can't even . . . wow. yeah, i needs me another chapter before i say anything.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: December 19 2010

Title: Chapter 11: A Mother's Woe

i like Harrison's mother. something about her is refreshing so far. i'm telling you; i must be a masochist, cuz Harrison is doing it for me. lol damn alpha maleness. terrible. i think i need counseling. what i also needs is another update soon, woman.

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Date: February 21 2011

Title: Chapter 12: The Gift that I give

snap! so excited to see more of this story. it's so good.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 17 2011

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Summary:

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Can a chance meeting at an airport, a wedding, family and friends bring about love lost? Possibly, Maybe?

a romantic comedy

Banner by me.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 33261
Read Count: 32109
Published: December 27 2010
Updated: May 03 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

awesome start. great characterisations and dialogue so far.

Author's Response: Thank you intellectual titmouse.  I appreciate you taking the time to read this story and leaving a review.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: December 27 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: Their choice of career doesn't leave much room for developing and maintaining a healthy relationship.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Welcome to Harlan County
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1197
Read Count: 1917
Published: February 11 2011
Updated: February 11 2011


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ho.ly.shit.

whew! need me a cigarette and that wasn't even the whole session!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11 2011

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Summary:

 

The Scar

 

The Scar on her face....could never match the one on her heart. 

 

Kick ass Banner by the great Valhalla!! 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 53873
Read Count: 67275
Published: February 14 2011
Updated: June 28 2017


Title: Chapter 5: Great Expectations

nice, nice. 'bout time someone else told this chick she's gorgeous.

Author's Response: Hey IT, where's my update?

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Date: February 21 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Great Expectations

::tapping foot:: where's my update, woman?

Author's Response: Where's mine? :-)

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: February 26 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Of Mice and Men

oh, Emma. i hope Luna's okay.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: March 13 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Through The Looking Glass

oh. snap. love, love, love Luna and Miss Reba. they are hilarious and just what Emma needs. Jeremy's batshit crazy and Zach . . . tsk, tsk. this is going to be interesting. so i need an update ASAP. thanks!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26 2011

Title: Chapter 4: The Color Purple

i missed a lot! but awesome development. ugh, Jeremy's beyond disgusting. i couldn't help but be disappointed that Zach had jumped to such a resolute and cold assumption about Emma. couldn't he see her trembling and scared? i loooove Jeff Bridges so i'm excited and i hope that she takes the job with him. can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks IT!!! That means a lot coming from you. So, where's my Farewell update?

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Emma

and you were worried?!

girl, you have a natural gift for story-telling. the flashbacks were effective and not overused or drawn out. i'm pleading for Emma, but not in a harsh way. she has total, hard-core sympathy on her side right now, but letting you know, that can get old quick. i have faith in your skills though, so don't worry. this is a wonderful start, great foundation, incredible characters so far. so excited for more and don't give up. even if you think it sucks, keep chugging. you've got a wonderful story here. ugh, i can't gush anymore! okay, okay, okay, so . . . i'll give you until tuesday, then the stalking begins.



Author's Response: I won't update until I get a Farewell update, lol!!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Pride and Prejudice

Zach needs to calm the eff down! and i am so glad Emma opened up a little to Ralph. i heart Ralph!!! whew! i have feeling this shit is going to explode before the true resolution comes. awesome update, woman!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Black Like Me

NO MORE MORE HANGERS!!!

well done, woman. Zach is somewhat redeemed.

*curls lip*

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: April 06 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Evelyn Campbell starts her new job at a top property development company. She gets the shock of a lifetime when someone she thought she had left behind long ago returns to her life with a vengance; and he is determined to make her pay for leaving him.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 5238
Read Count: 12358
Published: February 28 2011
Updated: August 07 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

snap! i want more!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: February 28 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

okay, okay, more please. NOW! lol

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: March 02 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

layin' it down already! i like that!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.