Title: Chapter 73 Caramel Dreams and Competitive Schemes

OMG Ho 1 and Ho 2 are up to no good, and I hope that whatever they are planning will blow up in their faces. And Valentina is no friend whatsoever, b/c if she was she would be telling Gabby that there are plenty of boys out there and stop chasing one that has shown that He's Just No that into You.

Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 04 2025 12:03 pm

Title: Chapter 73 Caramel Dreams and Competitive Schemes

So wait. We don't get to see what happened when Jason went home? But I still love this story. Happy holidays!

Author's Response:

He got home pretty late, after midnight. The family does tend to sweep things under the rug and move on, so that's why I didn't go into what happened. Plus I feel like every time I try to move on to other character storyline I end up prolonging chapters for other characters lol, so I cut it short.  But I wish I would've written a scene on that. I can make a flashback scene to explain what happened. 

Reviewer: Paisley Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2024 03:02 pm

Title: Chapter 73 Caramel Dreams and Competitive Schemes

This chick don't learn! Is she really trying to land in the ICU?! And Valentina really is the worst kind of woman. Despite all her talk, I bet if another woman took some dude she feeling for real away from her, she'd go all Fatal Attraction about it! Ughh!

As for the fellas, the talk was all in fun, but I'm glad Jason is keeping what he and Kendra discussed and agreed to top of mind.

Nice!



Author's Response:

Lol yes I agree especially Gabby, she would go nuts jf someone tried to take her man...Valentina is treacherous for sure. 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2024 08:43 pm



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