Reviews For Will and Ana
Submit a Review
Title: {Two}

Your making me cry! 

i hate Frederick Moorer and his sister and anyone else that helped him.

Will and Ana I love this story. You are amazing! If could give you a 100 I would

 Reviewer: WalkingPapers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 08:36 pm
Title: {Six}

Man I love this couple!! Will's slow loving of Ana's mind and emotions is a wonder to see. His loving is strong, soft and sensual. And he's making Ana feel that way, as well. This is helping Ana to get to a place of healing in ways she's not even aware of yet. Now maybe she can get the help she needs. She'll never forget it, but she can learn to live with it so she can move forward live her life.

Frederick is a freaking psycho! I can't believe he has constructed this whole fantasy situation around Ana like that. And I'm puzzled as to why his rejection of Elle is so strong. There has to be more to that.

As far as Monica is concerned, she got what she deserved. If she's tortured by what happened and her role on it, she should be! 

I really want Will to hurt Frederick, badly!! 

 

Excellent!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 08:26 pm
Title: {Six}

Great update...please update soon, this story heals the most hardend hart.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 08:25 pm
Title: {One}

 Love the way that you introduced these people. Ana is imprisoned in herself. I want to hug her. I love Will. I love the way he saw her and looked her straight in the ey whenhe spoke to her. I feel the romance that she will need to be healed! I love this already,

i love Elle, Gretchen, the wicked witch not so much. Excellent start

 Reviewer: WalkingPapers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 08:16 pm
Title: {Five}

I need an update!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2012 01:36 am
Title: {One}

Safehaven,I hope that you are doing? We miss u and this great story.i hope whatever blocked the progression of this engaging story will roll away so we can enjoy it again. hope to see an update in the near future.

 Reviewer: Crave Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2012 03:12 am
Title: {One}

love it story  can u add cast pic  would love that

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 04:58 am
Title: {One}

I LOVE THIS STORY I NEED I WANT HAVE TO HAVE MORE SOON

 Reviewer: FAYE Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 03:09 am
Title: {Five}

Thanks for a great update.  I was shocked that Glenna approached Ana in the manner that she did and requested that she hold the necklace for her until she was worthy for it. As for Frederick, I am glad that they are aware of where he is at andpeople are waiting to deal with his crazy as.  I can't wait to read what they do to Edward.  I hope that he loses all the idiot. The fact that he wants to use the pictures that he has to make Ana's life miserable so that she can't find out about his dirty deeds is just crazy.  

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 12:25 am
Title: {Five}

Dayam! This story. Keeps getting. Better and better!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 12:06 pm
Title: {Four}

Fredrick the rat! This is one of thebest stories I have read in a while. Good job!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 11:33 am
Title: {Three}

GREAT! I love this story! U. R. Becoming a. Favorite! ..100!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 11:05 am
Title: {Two}

Oh. Yeah! Iam really liking this story! 10

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 04:35 am
Title: {One}

hummm, very interesting I like it a lot

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 04:01 am
Title: {Five}

please update! this story is sooooooo sweet and beautiful. i absolutely adore it!

 Reviewer: alexp696 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2012 10:31 pm
Title: {Five}

OMG!!! I am so loving this story.  Damn why Edward had to become a problems oh well his ass will be handed to him too.  Not only by Will but Elle too don't feel sorry for his trifling ass one bit.  Ana has not done anything to anyone but fools just keep coming out the woodwork trying to hurt her @ least Glenna ass wisened up and bounced to CA.

More please....

Thank you!

Happy writing

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2012 06:19 am
Title: {Four}

Frederick is crazy as hell!!! I hate that Horace got his ass tore out the frame but he deserved it should have made a better decision then helping Frederick's crazy ass but money talks I guess I would have been asking for more if that was what motivated him so badly but money aint a thang if you don't have self respect like he told himself he has a mother and sister he should have told Frederick "HELL NO!"

Will is so smart and he already knows Ana's history apparently so not Glenna can tell him is going to deter him from being or wanting Ana.  I hope Glenna get's her upcomance soon.  I can't wait til Will beats the braks off Frederick "RAT FACE" and I hope it is sooner then later.

Great update!  Great story!

Thank you for sharing!

Happy writing

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2012 05:39 am
Title: {Three}

Glenna has got 2 go I hope all her sceming backfires and Will black list her ass 4 trying 2 hurt Ana.

Thank u great update

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2012 05:02 am
Title: {Two}

Monica was definitely a piece of sonething.  I hope nothing in her life prospered and there was no happiness for her after what she did to Ana.  Vincent tried to help but he was only twelve so sad.  Yes, that was the worse crime any woman could have bestowed on another....that kind of betrayal to your friend I know they say blood is thicker then water and Monica was frightened of her brother but she had parents and she could have gone to the police damn.

As for that slim infested mo'fo Frederick he went to the military I hope he did not make it out and suffered over and over and over not only for Ana but for the ex-girlfriend he raped as well.  I hope someone was brutal to him as he was to those two women and any that we don't know about and I hope he is still alive but has not proseried (misspelled) and is miserable.

Thank you for a very interesting story more more more....

Happy writing

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2012 04:30 am
Title: {One}

I like...can't wait 4 more....

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 10:38 pm
Title: {Five}

Please update soon!

 Reviewer: Pris67 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 07:19 pm
Title: {Five}

This was excellent!!! I haven't wanted to reread something in quite a while, but I want to reread this chapter just to make sure I didn't miss something, and just to enjoy it again.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 05:39 am
Title: {Five}

Great chapter, I'm Glenna did a 360 change in wanted to make things right by Ana that as nice. I can't wait till Frederick Freddy Kruger get his dooms day,lol

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2012 11:27 pm
Title: {Four}

That man is coo coo for coco puffs crazy, she don't want you Fredrick you Freddy Kruger scarred up azz! lol

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2012 11:40 am
Title: {Three}

Great chapter, I *heart* Will and Ana!

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2012 07:09 am


Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.