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Title: {One}

This story is going to be a classic. I love your writing already. This story is so gripping and it just started.

Will and Ana already have chemistry and they are not together yet. I loved the part where Will was checkingher out. I loved the way you wrote that.

GIVE ANA HAPPINESS PLEASE. What happened to her attacker nad thier messed up family?  Will needs to make her smiel and feel safe.

Gretchen is my girl:) Elle is so sweet and I love how Will treats her as a princess. I love Will and Ana

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 07:27 pm
Title: {Four}

I love Will and Ana. You bring them to life. I want lots of babies.

Frederick must die. He is crazy and he needs therapy but I don't think he will get it. If he even gets near Ana I'm going to cry. I mean it!

Please let Vincent and Ana meet that would be so emotional and healing for them both.

This was an excellent update you are amazing NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE

 Reviewer: for real Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 06:36 pm
Title: {Four}

Frederick is a psycho! My Gosh, he raped her and he claims that he knows best! He should be put in a mental institute! I can't wait for the next chapter. As soon as he reaches Florida Will is going to kick his ass or kill him, who knows?
Amazing chapter, by the way. I loved reading it. :D

 Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 05:25 pm
Title: {Four}

Please dont let him find Ana.... She is just getting her life back. Will is good for Ana...

Love this storyإإ

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Date: April 30 2012 04:39 pm
Title: {One}

And I hope someone kicks his ass again. I hope it is Will this time to end him for good. Maybe Ana and Vincent should meet again, healing for both of them.

 Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 02:59 pm
Title: {One}

hey safe! just coming back to reread since you posted a new chapter. love will and ana!!

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Date: April 30 2012 12:31 pm
Title: {Four}

the only decent kid in that family was vincent. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 05:29 am
Title: {Four}

ooooo the plot thickens!!!! im soooo glad will figured out what was going on with horace. i cant wait until he crosses paths with frederick. i sooo love will and ana together. cant wait til they make love. shes gonna be soooo pregnant - i hope hee hee. more please!!!!!!

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Date: April 30 2012 04:43 am
Title: {Four}

Wow! awesome update! That frederick dude is really sick in the head!

 Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 04:24 am
Title: {Four}

Will and Ana...yay! He don't play. Dude got some serious connections going on.

Horace should have just left that alone, given he knew exactly what the situation was with Ana and his client. Kinda glad Will kicked his ass and its good that Will has Frederick's face now. I hope Will destroys that a-hole.

Frederick is a sicko. What has Ana to do with how his life is going, or will go? This maniac wants the woman who carried his seed, but not the seed herself? His parents haven't done this man any favors in life.

I wonder what became of Monica? Really curious about that heifer. I'm glad Vincent and Gretchen kicked her ass!

Great!!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 04:24 am
Title: {Four}

This story is sooooooooo good. I cannot wait for another update. Will went Seal on Horace's butt. In a way I feel sorry for Horace, but if Frederick thinks he is going to walk in and just take Ana, he is going to be in for the surprise of his life. I love Will and Ana together, that being said, I would like to see what happens if Ana were to leave Will and decide to go back to her own home and not stay in Fl. What are the lengths he would go to to keep Ana with him? I know, I'm bad, lol. I could only guess what he would do after the beat-down he gave Horace.

I think Ana is a lot stronger than what everyone gives her credit for or at least I hope she is because it seem that things are only going to escalate from this point. Excellent update!!!

 Reviewer: Suzette Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 03:41 am
Title: {Four}

Ana is not fredrick's Ana she is Will's Ana, Will is going to eat that punk alive

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 03:24 am
Title: {Four}

I get that I am going to finish this story vibe from you and this chapter. This was awesome. You can write some romance girl. I am so glad that Ana is opening up to Will.

Wil is an OG. Lol he will break something without hesitation for Ana. I love that he is protective of her. LOVE IT!

I am so glad that Vincent got away from his dysfunctional family and that he marked his crazy brother for life. Everyone will notice him now. I hope Frederick meets Will. I so hope for that.

Will and Ana Classic

 Reviewer: Russian sunflower Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 03:08 am
Title: {Four}

Omg i hope Will doesn't let Frederic get to Ana. He's delusional and I'm glad dominic got away from that crazy family. Will is already protective of Ana and I'm glad since its what she needs. Can't wait to see what happensnext.

 Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 02:56 am
Title: {Four}

Love this story. It is getting interesting

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 02:20 am
Title: {Four}

More. More. More. Pleeeaaasssee.  Really good.  Glad to see that Will will do anything for his woman. 

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Date: April 30 2012 01:46 am
Title: {Three}

It is good thing when you can invoke emotions period in your readers. You are marevelous and so is this story. If I have not said it before I love Will and Ana!!!!!

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Date: April 30 2012 01:38 am
Title: {Four}

Thank you for this wonderful update, I feel like I haven't read about Ana and Will in a month of Sundays.  I love Will, he is all man and the way he beat Horace was poetic!!  Frederick go ahead and go to where Ana is so Will can beat you until you die and the have some people get rid of the body!!!  I am so glad that Vincent avenged Ana and I also love that Gretchen beat the snot of Monica.  I know that nothing good has happened in her life as she does not deserve it.  Great update, I will have to read it again!!

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Date: April 30 2012 01:34 am
Title: {Two}

I just fell in love with you.

I love this story. Will an Ana. Period

 Reviewer: Russian sunflower Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 01:17 am
Title: {One}

I am hookes already. Ana is my favorite I can tell that already. Will is sexy as hell. Gretchen and Elle , I love them. Kill Glenna or something. Write her falling down the steps, lol great start

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Date: April 30 2012 01:11 am
Title: {Four}

Fred most die. He is evil an sick.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 01:00 am
Title: {One}

This was a good update, becaused it answered a lot of questions! Glad 2 C Ana enjoying herself!

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 12:46 am
Title: {Four}

I love will. Ana has no need to worry about Frederick.  I love these two

I wished Vincent would have stabbed his brother but marking him for life is good. You can see him coming. Frederick is GONE! He needs to face Will and we will see how a rat with fair with a beast. AWESOME update. I love this story

 Reviewer: Spiderbite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 12:36 am
Title: {Four}

I can't believe that Frederick would think that Ana wanted him after he raped her.  I'm glad that his little brother got away from that family.  Except for Vincent, they all sound like perverts!

I love that Will is taking his time and that he is on a mission to protect Ana.

More please!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 12:34 am
Title: {Four}

"Once he saw Ana all his problems would end."

No dude, your problems are just beginning. Freddy is one sick f*ck. But, Will is someone ole Freddy Boy is going to rue the day their paths ever crossed. Ana is well protected.

Thank you so much for the update. A very fine read indeed, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 12:10 am


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