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Title: {Four}

Loved the update!! Horace got his just desserts and Frederick now needs to get his. Glad Will is so protective of Ana. Love them as a couple.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 08:13 am
Title: {Four}

Inpure genius fashion you have answerred all of my questions. you are amazing. Ana is quite safe with Will. He laid the smackdown on Horace. I can't see Frederick doing anything. Will we see Vincent?

I love this story Update

 Reviewer: Tylerandfran Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 01:24 pm
Title: {Three}

I love how Willmis with Elle. It makes me smile. He treats her like his own daughter and I feel that she thinks of him as her father. I love the way he is with Ana. They are warm soft and sexy together. 

LIKE am beginning to hate Glenna. I know that she is a made up character but I hate her with a passion. I wonder how she will react to the information about Ana. 

Gretchen is my girl. So emotional about her friend.

I love this story

 Reviewer: Tylerandfran Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 12:54 pm
Title: {Four}

talk about a nut job. the only good seeds to come out that family are vincent and ana's daughter.

 Reviewer: grump Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 12:50 pm
Title: {Two}

Oh my goodness

That was powerful,beautiful,sorrow,happiness,love and jealousy all demonstrated in that chapter. I love this.

 Reviewer: Tylerandfran Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 04:10 am
Title: {One}

I just found this story. Will and Ana and I am in love with it. You are a marvelous writer. Your characters mesh together and compliment each other even Glenna. I want more.

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Date: May 01 2012 03:58 am
Title: {Four}

You are a romance writer witha side of I'll kick your ass!!! I love Will and Ana. I love how you write them. i love Will's protective instincts abotu Ana. he is ALL MAN. He will keep our Beautfiul Ana safe and warm. I love them.

Frederick is a freak. He has to get his comeupends soon. Are we going to meet Vincent? It would be so healing for he and Ana to talk.

Did I mention that I love this story. I know that I will go to sleep dreaming about what you are writing next and then I will wake up searching for an update. I love this story and you are an awesome writer.

 Reviewer: TheMaelstrom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 01:30 am
Title: {Four}

When are you updating because this story is on point. It is beautiful, violent , powerful, Loving and sexy all rolled up itno a wonderfully written piece of literature. So when are you updating

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Date: April 30 2012 11:00 pm
Title: {Four}

Wow you write very well and I am loving your story!

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 09:16 pm
Title: {Four}

You are building a beautiful and powerful story here. this update was excellent. You answered so many questions and it just flowed it was not as if you just stopped and wrote it as an afterthought. You are wonderful.

Will is my new boyfriend. that man will KILL Frederick if he sees him. i am so glad he got rid of that picture. i don't want Ana to see that. I want these two safe and together. I want babies too LOL You write them sexy and Hmmmmmm.

Will Vincent appear inthis story. Maybe?

You must update soon please. I am your new fan

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 08:01 pm
Title: {Three}

Your eyes are PERFECT! Oh this story is AMAZING. I am going to recommend it for the wall. It deserves the attention. I love Will and Ana.

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 07:50 pm
Title: {Two}

This was beautiful and violent. I loved it.  You are amazing!

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Date: April 30 2012 07:39 pm
Title: {One}

This story is going to be a classic. I love your writing already. This story is so gripping and it just started.

Will and Ana already have chemistry and they are not together yet. I loved the part where Will was checkingher out. I loved the way you wrote that.

GIVE ANA HAPPINESS PLEASE. What happened to her attacker nad thier messed up family?  Will needs to make her smiel and feel safe.

Gretchen is my girl:) Elle is so sweet and I love how Will treats her as a princess. I love Will and Ana

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 07:27 pm
Title: {Four}

I love Will and Ana. You bring them to life. I want lots of babies.

Frederick must die. He is crazy and he needs therapy but I don't think he will get it. If he even gets near Ana I'm going to cry. I mean it!

Please let Vincent and Ana meet that would be so emotional and healing for them both.

This was an excellent update you are amazing NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE

 Reviewer: for real Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 06:36 pm
Title: {Four}

Frederick is a psycho! My Gosh, he raped her and he claims that he knows best! He should be put in a mental institute! I can't wait for the next chapter. As soon as he reaches Florida Will is going to kick his ass or kill him, who knows?
Amazing chapter, by the way. I loved reading it. :D

 Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 05:25 pm
Title: {Four}

Please dont let him find Ana.... She is just getting her life back. Will is good for Ana...

Love this storyإإ

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Date: April 30 2012 04:39 pm
Title: {One}

And I hope someone kicks his ass again. I hope it is Will this time to end him for good. Maybe Ana and Vincent should meet again, healing for both of them.

 Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 02:59 pm
Title: {One}

hey safe! just coming back to reread since you posted a new chapter. love will and ana!!

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Date: April 30 2012 12:31 pm
Title: {Four}

the only decent kid in that family was vincent. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 05:29 am
Title: {Four}

ooooo the plot thickens!!!! im soooo glad will figured out what was going on with horace. i cant wait until he crosses paths with frederick. i sooo love will and ana together. cant wait til they make love. shes gonna be soooo pregnant - i hope hee hee. more please!!!!!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 04:43 am
Title: {Four}

Wow! awesome update! That frederick dude is really sick in the head!

 Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 04:24 am
Title: {Four}

Will and Ana...yay! He don't play. Dude got some serious connections going on.

Horace should have just left that alone, given he knew exactly what the situation was with Ana and his client. Kinda glad Will kicked his ass and its good that Will has Frederick's face now. I hope Will destroys that a-hole.

Frederick is a sicko. What has Ana to do with how his life is going, or will go? This maniac wants the woman who carried his seed, but not the seed herself? His parents haven't done this man any favors in life.

I wonder what became of Monica? Really curious about that heifer. I'm glad Vincent and Gretchen kicked her ass!

Great!!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 04:24 am
Title: {Four}

This story is sooooooooo good. I cannot wait for another update. Will went Seal on Horace's butt. In a way I feel sorry for Horace, but if Frederick thinks he is going to walk in and just take Ana, he is going to be in for the surprise of his life. I love Will and Ana together, that being said, I would like to see what happens if Ana were to leave Will and decide to go back to her own home and not stay in Fl. What are the lengths he would go to to keep Ana with him? I know, I'm bad, lol. I could only guess what he would do after the beat-down he gave Horace.

I think Ana is a lot stronger than what everyone gives her credit for or at least I hope she is because it seem that things are only going to escalate from this point. Excellent update!!!

 Reviewer: Suzette Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 03:41 am
Title: {Four}

Ana is not fredrick's Ana she is Will's Ana, Will is going to eat that punk alive

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 03:24 am
Title: {Four}

I get that I am going to finish this story vibe from you and this chapter. This was awesome. You can write some romance girl. I am so glad that Ana is opening up to Will.

Wil is an OG. Lol he will break something without hesitation for Ana. I love that he is protective of her. LOVE IT!

I am so glad that Vincent got away from his dysfunctional family and that he marked his crazy brother for life. Everyone will notice him now. I hope Frederick meets Will. I so hope for that.

Will and Ana Classic

 Reviewer: Russian sunflower Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 03:08 am


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