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Title: {Four}

Omg i hope Will doesn't let Frederic get to Ana. He's delusional and I'm glad dominic got away from that crazy family. Will is already protective of Ana and I'm glad since its what she needs. Can't wait to see what happensnext.

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Date: April 30 2012 02:56 am
Title: {Four}

Love this story. It is getting interesting

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 02:20 am
Title: {Four}

More. More. More. Pleeeaaasssee.  Really good.  Glad to see that Will will do anything for his woman. 

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Date: April 30 2012 01:46 am
Title: {Three}

It is good thing when you can invoke emotions period in your readers. You are marevelous and so is this story. If I have not said it before I love Will and Ana!!!!!

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Date: April 30 2012 01:38 am
Title: {Four}

Thank you for this wonderful update, I feel like I haven't read about Ana and Will in a month of Sundays.  I love Will, he is all man and the way he beat Horace was poetic!!  Frederick go ahead and go to where Ana is so Will can beat you until you die and the have some people get rid of the body!!!  I am so glad that Vincent avenged Ana and I also love that Gretchen beat the snot of Monica.  I know that nothing good has happened in her life as she does not deserve it.  Great update, I will have to read it again!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 01:34 am
Title: {Two}

I just fell in love with you.

I love this story. Will an Ana. Period

 Reviewer: Russian sunflower Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 01:17 am
Title: {One}

I am hookes already. Ana is my favorite I can tell that already. Will is sexy as hell. Gretchen and Elle , I love them. Kill Glenna or something. Write her falling down the steps, lol great start

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Date: April 30 2012 01:11 am
Title: {Four}

Fred most die. He is evil an sick.

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Date: April 30 2012 01:00 am
Title: {One}

This was a good update, becaused it answered a lot of questions! Glad 2 C Ana enjoying herself!

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Date: April 30 2012 12:46 am
Title: {Four}

I love will. Ana has no need to worry about Frederick.  I love these two

I wished Vincent would have stabbed his brother but marking him for life is good. You can see him coming. Frederick is GONE! He needs to face Will and we will see how a rat with fair with a beast. AWESOME update. I love this story

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Date: April 30 2012 12:36 am
Title: {Four}

I can't believe that Frederick would think that Ana wanted him after he raped her.  I'm glad that his little brother got away from that family.  Except for Vincent, they all sound like perverts!

I love that Will is taking his time and that he is on a mission to protect Ana.

More please!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 12:34 am
Title: {Four}

"Once he saw Ana all his problems would end."

No dude, your problems are just beginning. Freddy is one sick f*ck. But, Will is someone ole Freddy Boy is going to rue the day their paths ever crossed. Ana is well protected.

Thank you so much for the update. A very fine read indeed, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 12:10 am
Title: {Three}

Please update, this is such a wonderful story!!!

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Date: April 28 2012 10:19 pm
Title: {One}

Great story, please update soon!

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Date: April 25 2012 08:07 pm
Title: {Three}

I hate Glenna! I don't want her to be able to do anything. Hopefully, Will and Elle will find about her little scheme soon enough so that she won't be able to do anything. I loved the chapter and I can't wait for the next one. :D

 Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 15 2012 02:05 pm
Title: {Three}

Thanks for an excellent update.  I like the fact that Ana is opening up to other possibilities of finding happiness.  I just love Will and how he is so patient with Ana.  I think that they will make a great couple.   To bad the viper Glenna has one of Willl's attorneys doing her biding.  What a stupid man.  He will be fired because I am sure that Will will not be happy with Glenna or the stupid attorney.  Thanks again and I hope that you will update the story soon.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2012 11:24 am
Title: {Two}

I love Will.  What a thoughtful gesture on his part by sending Ana all of those flowers and what a sweet note.  As for Glenna, I think that Will is so done with her.  Thanks

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Date: April 14 2012 10:57 am
Title: {One}

Great start to the story.  Poor Ana raped at 17 and pregnant from the rape.  It is amazing that she was able to raise such a lovely young woman.  I can understand her shyness around men.   Thanks

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Date: April 14 2012 10:30 am
Title: {Three}

Awesome update! And that Glenna is snake...can't wait for more!

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Date: April 08 2012 03:15 pm
Title: {One}

I can't stop thinking about this story, that just shows how fanstatic it is. I'm planning my dinner and this keeps popping in my mind . Hopefully you will update soon because I love it

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Date: April 07 2012 06:19 pm
Title: {Three}

Glenna needs to learn not to mess in grown folks' business. And this is grown folks. What a git. Will is going to destroy Glenna. Richly deserved, I might add.

I really love that this is a mature relationship. Love Elle and Will's father/daughter relationship. And Ana is still young enough to have another youngun, right?

I'll be glad when Will and Ana get some alone time. Elle is a sweetheart, but I'm with Gretchen, shut up!

Will is so tender with Ana. They have a natural rhythm.

Everytime I see Glenna, I think of the Wizard of Oz, but of the evil witch.

Loved the update, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 07 2012 12:58 pm
Title: {Three}

I am loving this story very much but I particularly enjoyed this chapter as it's beautiful watching Ana slowly open up and start to believe in her worth.

Will be interesting to see how Glenna tries to break Ana and Will up and if by doing so she seriously damages Ana's slow rebirth.

 Reviewer: Valis 202 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 07 2012 09:57 am
Title: {Three}

This story is so awesome!! I love how you bring emotion to the characters. This could definitely be a movie!  Continue please, lol. 

 Reviewer: PharmD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 06 2012 05:28 am
Title: {Three}

That was a GREAT update! I cannot wait for more. Glenna is a piece of work. Will is going to make mince meat out of her id she hurts Anna and I cannot wait to see how it all goes down, lol!

 Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2012 04:39 am
Title: {Three}

Will for such a bright guy you are sap when it comes to woman.  Glenna was never worthy of you and that much evilness can not be hid.  You  need to decapitate the head of Medussa before she turns you into Stone!!  Ana is the woman for you and Glenna knows that.  That ho is psycho and bears watching!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2012 02:52 am


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