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Title: {Three}

Fantastic story!! can you let Glenna get run over by a bus?

 Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2012 02:41 am
Title: {Three}

This story is so wonderful. I love Will and Ana. Please give me more of this romance. I love it so!!

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Date: April 06 2012 01:50 am
Title: {Three}

oh what a lovely update!!! i cant wait to see will continue to woo ana! its going to be soooo beautiful when they make love and of course i want her to be sooooo pregnant!!! will, ana, and elle make such a precious family!! more please!

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Date: April 06 2012 01:42 am
Title: {Three}

Excellent.

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Date: April 06 2012 01:35 am
Title: {Two}

This chapter was so moving and powerful. it was beautiful and filled with sorrow. I loved it. You are an awesome writer.

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Date: April 06 2012 01:33 am
Title: {One}

I love this already.I love the emotion running through it. Will and Ana is already one of my favorites. well done

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Date: April 06 2012 01:14 am
Title: {Three}

Loved it! More please!

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Date: April 06 2012 12:30 am
Title: {Three}

I truly love this story. i love how Will is with Ana and definitely putting Glenna in her place. i love the fatherly relationship he has with Elle and how they are protective of each other. i love that Will and Ana were able to spend time together. more please

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Date: April 05 2012 10:57 pm
Title: {One}

I liked what I read but half was from the second chapter

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Date: April 05 2012 10:57 pm
Title: {Three}

This story is so wonderful. You are a marvelous writer. You can evoke such emotion from the reader. I love Will and Ana. I know that they did nothing because Ana is not ready for that is Will would never ask that of her so early. I love this romance I love it!!!!!!

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Date: April 05 2012 10:32 pm
Title: {Three}

Way to go Ana...


I enjoyed the update.. please update soon! !

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Date: April 05 2012 10:22 pm
Title: {Three}

Glenna is making a huge mistake going up against Will like this. Elle too, for that matter. Despite her getting to him at the beginning, Will didn't get to where he is in life by being anyone's fool. And Elle, she acts like a lioness protecting her cub when it comes to Ana. That little girl loves her momma something fierce! Edward wasn't kidding about her. Speaking of him, I think he should go to Elle, if not Will, with what Glenna has on him. His honestly could go a long way in this situation. At any rate, this is going to end badly for Glenna.

Gretchen, she made me cry with all those emotions going everywhere. She's so happy and hopeful to have her friend back. Elle wants desperately to see the real Ana, too. This is good.

Ana, she made me so proud. This takes courage and strength. She'll do it.

Will, he's a stand-up guy. He's just sweetly and gently bringing Ana out of her shell. It's the only way to proceed with Ana, really. She'll clam up with anything else. The Moores took enough from her and Elle, for that matter. Time to reclaim herself back. She'll never be the same, but she can be the best she can be. They took her love for herself, her trust in herself and ability to truly let go and love someone else. Twenty years is long enough!

Wonderful!!

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Date: April 05 2012 09:58 pm
Title: {Three}

What wonderful story, please keep going.

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Date: April 05 2012 09:30 pm
Title: {Two}

What absolutely beautiful thing you have created here! I love it  Excellent

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Date: April 05 2012 09:22 pm
Title: {Three}

This is really good. I am so happy for Ana and so happy that Will is moving cautiously.  Can't wait for more!

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Date: April 05 2012 09:15 pm
Title: {One}

I love the way you write Will and Ana are my new power couple. Glenna I think will self destruct because they always do.  I want to know why Will would put up with her for so long. What happened to the people who hurt Ana.  This story is a beautiful thing

 Reviewer: Hanna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2012 09:10 pm
Title: {One}

Love this story, what Ana went thru is horrible, her rapist sister is just as bad as her brother. If they happen to make a reappearance in this story, I hope they get there's when Will finds out everything. Glenna needs to go away or just die!

Love your story very very much. You have a great way with words and hope you keep them coming!!!

 

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Date: April 05 2012 08:18 pm
Title: {Three}

Absolutely loved this chapter. I love Will and Ana. I love thw way you write them. I think that they lost track of time and she got home so late. I doubt they would do anything so early. I love the romance you have going. Just kill Glenna or let Elle take care of her. I see that she has caused some fear in the office. I love Gretchen . I love this story more

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Date: April 05 2012 07:38 pm
Title: {Three}

Did they or didn't they? Glenna needs to just go away.

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Date: April 05 2012 07:16 pm
Title: {Two}

How sweet of him.My heart melted

The Moore's part was SAD, wonder WHY HE did this AND why she let him do it?  The parents are the WORST I mean living with this monster under your roof?!...Oh well I'm not a parent so I CAN'T understand them.

WHERE are they NOW?

Moore' siblings.

Unfortunately Vincent was too little.

Update soon S.H

 

 

P.S. Françoise it's for woman and François it's for a man.

The florist was addressed as an he/him.

François 

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 02:04 am
Title: {One}

Safehaven, thank-you for this story. Like everyone else, I would like to ask/beg you to please give Anna and Will an ending. Ana deserves to wooed, strengthen, and on the road to healing spirtually as well as mentally. Mr. Will needs to come full circle and  truly be the father figure in Elle's life. Finally, Gretchen needs to see her friend, her sister happy. Hopefully, the muse will not leave you alone until you finish this story. Then if by chance it touches your mind again, finish the Mating Season and the Ogre and Claire. Those stories are awesome and captures your attention with realness and romance. Again, Safehaven, thank you for your writing. I hope to read many more chapters and stories.

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Date: April 02 2012 01:06 am
Title: {Two}

This is an awesome story... please update soon...

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Date: April 01 2012 11:51 pm
Title: {Two}

Such a intense and powerful story! Can't wait for more!

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Date: April 01 2012 11:20 pm
Title: {Two}

This story is so beautiful and powerful

I love Will. Glenna must be some master of deception if she managed to hide her true self frm him. He knows what she is like now and she is gone. I love Ana. I love Ana. This story is so amazing and so are you. Please chapter three 

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Date: April 01 2012 11:07 pm
Title: {One}

I am in love with you. I love this story. I love these characters and what you make them do and say. This story is the the top. I am your fan FOREVER. Please keep going I love it

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Date: April 01 2012 10:33 pm


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