Reviews For Will and Ana
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Title: {Two}

That was so powerful. I wonder what happen to Fredrick?

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 03:02 am
Title: {One}

Just because I was thinking of it I had to come back and say it.. Truly wonderful

 Reviewer: Hanna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 02:55 am
Title: {One}

Nice start I don't have any constructive criticism but I like this.

 *COUGH*The Ogre and Miss Clare *COUGH*

I'm on to the next chapter^_^

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 02:48 am
Title: {Two}

You have no idea how hard it is to write with tears in your eyes. This story is absolutely wonderful. I don't know where you have been but I hope and pray you stay right here. I am so digging on Will and Ana. I absolutely loved the flowers and the card he sent her. Those words were so beautiful they made me cry. Please just write

 Reviewer: Hanna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 02:47 am
Title: {One}

That's because Will, you need a woman, not a little girl. Drop this chick!

Ana is going to be a winner here.

And Gretchen...ride or die chick, I see already.

Love it already.

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Date: April 01 2012 02:04 am
Title: {One}

This is interesting. I can't wait to read more

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Date: March 31 2012 12:31 pm
Title: {One}

love it!!

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Date: March 31 2012 02:02 am
Title: {One}

Great start to the story.  Thanks

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Date: March 30 2012 12:13 pm
Title: {One}

love it...please update soon

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Date: March 30 2012 10:17 am
Title: {One}

I LOVE IT!! UPDATE!! Finally, a single parent love story!

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2012 08:48 am
Title: {One}

ohhhhhhhhhhhh please continue

I wanna know where it is headed

UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON

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Date: March 29 2012 09:15 pm
Title: {One}

Why  did she want him to say girlfriend, did she not call herself his mistress. No need to change titles now. lol

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Date: March 29 2012 06:59 pm
Title: {One}

Luv it!!

Please continue. Lunch is going to be deliciously exciting!! ;)

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Date: March 29 2012 06:30 pm
Title: {One}

Awesome, I need more! Glenna makes my teeth itch, the ho is about to go down. She will show her true colors ar lunch and she wilk dumoed by Will! I can't wait! So good!

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Date: March 29 2012 04:21 pm
Title: {One}

very nice so far!! more please!!

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Date: March 29 2012 02:53 pm
Title: {One}

I like this.  I feel sorry for Ana because Frederick is still winning even though she's raised Elle.  Let love come and she won't be able to resist it!  I can't wait for an update.

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 12:54 pm
Title: {One}

loving it... wanting more, please post soon

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Date: March 29 2012 12:04 pm
Title: {One}

Promising start.Please continue with this story

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Date: March 29 2012 10:56 am
Title: {One}

Me likey!! More please.

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Date: March 29 2012 06:53 am
Title: {One}

Glenna better stay in her lane. There is a reason Will did'nt intoduce her as his girlfriend. He's tired of her tricks. One, her days are number. Two, he's finally met his match. Namely, Ana. Three, go diggers need no apply for wife status.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 06:09 am
Title: {One}

please more.  update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 05:56 am
Title: {One}

I like it already. Glenna appears to be a she-devil. I hope you give us a bit more background on Ana and her past with her daughter's father.

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Date: March 29 2012 05:35 am
Title: {One}

I like it just seems to jump around a lot . I was a little confused too , With Ana and Elle . It just needs to be a little clearer.

Reviewer: Nicole Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 05:24 am
Title: {One}

I like.

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Date: March 29 2012 05:15 am


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