I like your new story and this one, too. Please continue :)
Author's Response:
You know what? I think I might. I gave up on this story a long time ago but I think I might keep writing. Thanks for reading. :D
Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 05 2014 07:45 pm
I like it :-)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 05:40 am
What is the father's problem? Why take the family on a vacation and act like an ass the whole time? Ain't no perfume going to make her fall asleep. Why doesn't Nellie know how to dance? Thier dad doesn't allow them to watch music vidoes or something?
Author's Response:
lol i like this review. 8) Ill think about this...its also because the dad is uptight.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 04:49 am
Interesting start!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2012 03:44 am
Let's dance for a while? More like the whole night! lol nice update :)
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 06:55 am
Is this story based on the movie Dirty Dancing? I loved the movie and I like the beginning of this story
Author's Response:
Secret's out. Should I change the title to Reckless Abandon (A Dirty Dancing Adaptation) Lol. 8)
Reviewer: Emerald Taurus Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 05:22 am
Hopefully Julius is not up to mischief. I hope he remains a gentleman.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2012 04:25 pm
This story is reminding of the movie, "Dirty Dancing." The sister is vastly annoying, have some one slap her please. Nellie and Juilius are having a little alone time, how nice.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: August 25 2012 05:16 am
I like this a lot. There is the potential for some serious drama here...lol!
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2012 02:52 am
Their father is going to make that they get male attention during this family vacation. Joel needs to take a chill pill and allow your children to grow up. I will keep reading so that I can see where you are going with this story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2012 02:09 am
More please!
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2012 08:27 pm
I would keep reading. She hasn't met her interest yet has she? I was thinking this chapter would involve her meeting him somehow. But i see what you did setting up that there are a bunch of cute guys it still works =D I'm excited to see what happens next!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2012 07:11 pm
Cute 1st chapter. More!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2012 06:41 pm
I like the way it started, can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: LatashaNicole Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2012 04:56 pm
kinda reminds me of dirty dancing, haha its cute
Reviewer: invictusandalcohol Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2012 09:51 am
Love it so far!!!
Reviewer: LolaWrites Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 23 2012 06:53 am