Wow!! So hot! LOL!! Great job, I wish there was more. Please post again soon :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 11:08 am
I gave this story a chance and it turned out great
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2014 10:29 pm
Awesome, Samara and Justin each admitted how they feel about each other. Dara and Leo will be pissed! I give the long awaited update two thumbs up!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2014 04:38 pm
I like this fiction !!!! Please update soon !!! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 25 2014 12:47 am
Ana was feeling Justin but Justin had always had feelings for Samara, now the plot thickens!! Justin and Samara needed to have this conversation but I really see her being chicken and running away from her feelings. Something else will happen and Samara will distance herself from Justin. Why would Justin have this memory about Ana in the midst of that conversation with Samara? Is going to tell Samara more about his time with Ana? Is it guilt for pulling Samara into this ridiculousness? This was good so more please!
Happy New Year!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2014 01:56 pm
Finally!!! LOL
About time she realized that she is a submissive. There is nothing wrong with that. This is nothing like slavery, if people don't like the concept they should their judgments elsewhere and don't read it unlike in slavery times no one is forced to read smh. Fantastic story.
Continue to write this your way.
Date: December 09 2013 12:14 pm
I have no clue why in the worlY I delayed in reading this! !!!!!!!!! AMAZEBALSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSNow gimme more! Please? Y(^_^)Y
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 01:11 pm
That was an interesting insight into Justin. Samara admitted to her own need to be a submissive, which I just don't understand. A black woman being a sub to white man is just harkens back to whenxwe didn't have a choice they just took because they owned us. Even though I am troubled by the nature of this story I still like! I hope that Samara doesn't get herself hurt in helping the police find the killer.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 01:07 pm
I like the concept and I am a fan of Justin and the story in general. There is nothing like a man that knows what he wants and who knows who he is.
Samara is annoying though, I am liking her less and less each chapter. I am just waiting for Justin to just drop her because she is obviously confused or just enjoys lying to herself.....
Date: November 18 2013 05:44 am
25 chapters and no progress between Samara and Justin. She is still fighting her submissive side and it is becoming boring. Their relationship hasn't changed at all. Fast losing interest in this story I'm afraid. At this point Justin should just leave Samara to her own devices because a woman who can't be true to herself after all of this, is not worth the effort.
Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 17 2013 10:16 pm
Justin you are a douche, give Samara a break she has had a taxing evening that dude Brian was the accomplice and not the main psycho. Thank you fo r the update!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 17 2013 11:36 am
I knew it was not this guy Brian it was too easy. I still think it's Reese but that is my theory can't wait for more.
Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 11:57 am
Great update, I am enjoying the suspense. Samara should just admit that she likes being Justin's submissive. She doesn't have to do it in public but what she liked in private in her own business. It's like she is afraid to be true to herself.
Update Soon!!
Date: October 20 2013 08:30 pm
It's another member Bound and he's jealous of Justin. What a depraved psychiatic asshole bt why hasn't he slipped up yet? He can't be that damn smart! That stupid as Brian is gojing to somebody's bitch in prison, can't wait. So good!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 20 2013 04:22 pm
It's another member Bound and he's jealous of Justin. What a depraved psychiatic asshole bt why hasn't he slipped up yet? He can't be that damn smart! That stupid as Brian is gojing to somebody's bitch in prison, can't wait. So good!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 20 2013 04:22 pm
I was just saying to mysekf that was just too easy.
Great chapter.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: October 20 2013 01:49 pm
That was way too easy but I find it odd that Reese was talking to her before she got the phone call. I believe that Reese is jealous and that she killed Ana because she wants Justin to be hers.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 01:38 pm
Justin why did you tell Reese where Samara lived? Just because you trust her and you that Samara is jealous so why did he do that? Samara won't be able to stay from Bound her feelings for Justin are too strong.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2013 07:53 am
Samara and your attitude towards Justin, just tell him that you don't to do that sub mess anymore. I thought your ass was stupid for doing it first place. Darayou just need to let it go, it was over between the Leo and Ana before she died and Leo was with you, sO why are you still jealous.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 12 2013 10:05 pm
Thank you for the update, now we are getting somewhere. Me thinks that Reese is suspect but Justin is in denial! Good stuff!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2013 05:18 pm
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 11 2013 04:45 pm
What a freak...it has to be someone he knows
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: June 08 2013 07:09 pm
Thanks for the update.
I hope they call the detective to let the police know of the new information. What was said by the killer and what not.
I wonder if it is Reese that is doing the killing in the case of Ana and now she wants to get to Samara maybe she's jealous.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 08:25 pm
Samara has got to be the worst amateur sleuth ever. She's no closer to finding the killer's identity than when she started. The killer is doing all the work for them. The camera is creepy and the question is who has access to the house to be able to plant it?
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 06:42 pm
That scene was hot!! and Oh no what a creep to be spying on Justin and Samara I wonder if the killer is someone the all know!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 05:07 pm