I love how you create characters who we can really and truly unload our hate onto!
Author's Response:
lol Thank you!
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 06:52 pm
I really appreciated Dmitri's POV. I couldn't quite get into this story until this chapter... Also what's the deal with her hanging with girls that disrespect her on a regular? What is she getting out of this relationship?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked Dmitri's POV, hopefully he isn't as confusing and you get a better grasp of who he is and what he's thinking. Sasha's abandonment as a young girl has been really detrimental in her confidence so she has a fear of letting go of others; she doesn't think she could ever find someone to replace them so she holds on.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed
[Report This]Date: June 03 2013 05:13 pm
More please. That was great.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 12:42 pm
Ooooh, yes. And the plot thickens.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed
[Report This]Date: June 03 2013 06:34 am
MORE!
Author's Response:
More coming soon... :-)
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 05:28 am
loving it more
Author's Response:
I love hearing that people are enjoying the story! Thank you!
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 04:23 am
lovely update! i enjoyed hearing how dmitri feels. fayes a bitch for real!!! she doesnt sound like a friend at all!! i wonde how dmitri will react when he finds out sashas a virgin. more please!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 04:04 am
Ok Faye = bitch who needs a beat down
Dmiitri = totally knew he was attracted to Sasha from jump.
Teagan is going to be pissed when it goes down between Sasha and Dmitri. I can see it now - all her friends are going to accuse her of being a man stealer. I hope Sasha will be able to brush it off and find some new, real, friends.
More soon please! I can't wait to see how this ride home goes.
Author's Response:
lol As Sasha grows as a person, you can bet she'll get better friends. :-) Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Nicci Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 03:26 am
Dimitri is ok. Some may dislike him, but in reality, this is how some man think. He is just being a man, he is arrogant and cocky. But then again, not to over the top. So I don't dislike him yet.
Now Sasha I don't like. This girl needs to work on her self esteem first before she gets involved with any man. NO man wants to get involved with a woman who thinks so low of herself and has some self esteem issues. That is just too much baggage and VERY annoying. If she doesn't love herself, then who will. And WHY WHY WHY is she friends with those girl? Especially Faye. Does she feel the need to hang out with "beautiful" girls as she calls them to make her self feel better? I find her to be incredibly stupid for allowing her "friends" to treat her like this. For such a smart girl, it seems that she is slightly retarded and needy. What does it take for her to open her eyes and see that these girls are not her friend. She needs to start to stand up for herself and fast. I know I'm going to sound mean, but I hope that they will continue to treat her badly. I don't feel sorry for her at all. she is the one who allows it. Maybe then she will finally open her damn eyes and see that she is not wanted by those girls. Its not like she can't make new friends with people who does appreciate her and that she doesn't feel ugly around.
Author's Response:
Sasha's reasoning for still being friends with them will start to make sense as I reveal more about her past. I can understand your frustrations; the sad thing is that there are actually people out there like her. Rather than face loneliness, they will stay in an emotionally abusive relationship. This is often seen in romantic pairings but the same can be said for familial and friendly relationships as well. What is obvious to outsiders isn't so clear to them because of their fears and emotional attachments. Thank you for your review and please keep reading!
Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 03:18 am
Faye is a femals dog! Sasha you really need some new friends! Thank god that Mitri finally kicked teabag oops I mean Teagan to the curb. Mitri to the rescue!! I just love Slade!! Mitri don't hurt Sasha she's vulnerable and lost in a sea of. Vipers that she calls friends. Good stuff!
Author's Response:
haha. I like your jokes! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:58 am
can faye swallow some arsenic. me no like her....at all.
Author's Response:
rotfl. Yes, I feel the same way exactly. by far, my least favorite character. but a necessary one. unfortunately, smh. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:47 am
can faye swallow some arsenic. me no like her....at all.
Author's Response:
my sentiments exactly. thank you for your review!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:47 am
can faye swallow some arsenic. me no like her....at all.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:46 am
Love it. Please update soon. Love dmitri and Sasha!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy to hear you like Dmitri and Slade.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:42 am
I sure hope Saha gets new friends...these girls are not her friends.
Author's Response:
I hope so too, Teiga. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Teiga Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:09 am
Ok, that was a nice beginning......but, I think you should stop that farce with Dmitri before it gets out of hand. Sasha's is too nice and her friends will hurt her. I hope Slade is a love interest for Sasha! Put a little more Uumph in the SPARKS!
Author's Response:
Aw, I'm sad to hear your not a fan of Dmitri. I understand though. At the moment, he is very hard to like. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:02 am
Dmitri is something else...why can't he play for keeps
Author's Response:
Maybe he will change his mind...lol Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 01:59 am
Ok, what the f**k is wrong with all these damn people and Sasha?!! These "friends" of hers can all go straight to hell! And I'm wondering if Sasha is mentally stable herself for dealing with these bitches! Sometimes that word just fits.
And Dmitri with that trophy wife comment? And being severely average?Then what exactly is this "courting" business all about? Does he just want to use her to rid himself of some strange attraction he finds himself in? What maturity does he display here? He's playing games and its not funny. He can just kiss it, too! He's low-rent scum with money and a pretty face! So what! Not worth the time that I can see right now.
Whatever else she may be, Sasha isn't some dirty little past time to prove a point. Nor is she trash for people to dump on. She's getting higher education and working towards a serious goal in life. What the hell is everybody else doing? Besides partying and wasting their lives away, I mean. Sasha's got depth of character and heart. However, I am getting tired of all that damn stuttering she's doing! Dmitri aint nobody to be scared of! She's probably smarter than him anyway. Geez!
She needs to stop defining herself by those losers she call "friends." She has them all - including Dmitri - beat hands down and doesn't even realize it.
I can't even believe these people! Ughh!!
Author's Response:
As a writer, I'm really happy to see you feel so devoted to Sasha. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 01:55 am
Thanks for the update. Sasha needs to dump her friends. Who would leave their friend at a bustop at midnight.
Dimitri doesn't think Sasha is a keeper, but he's sexually attracted to her, huh? Well she ought to give him the boot. I hope she holds out because he still hasn't completely severed ties with Teagan and that will make trouble for Sasha. Good stuff.
Author's Response:
Yes, Dmitri doesnt't feel comfortable with his feelings for her. because she is so different from his usual type, he would prefer to think it is just a random spout of lust. Then. his feelings wouold have a quick fix. But thus lies the problem: he believes his feelings are something to 'fix' instead of embrace. smh. i'm hoping for his change just as much as everyone else. :-) Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 01:20 am
Wow...definitely don't understand why she's friends with someone like Faye. Sasha could stand to be a bit more assertive too...I don't get why she her friends talk to her that way.
Author's Response:
Don't worry. Her time will come. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 01:16 am
faye is a bitch and i think it's time for sasha to get some new friends and i wonder why doesn't she hang with dina or other people who are compassionate and care about their friends. great update and i can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 01:14 am
time to cut bait with these so-called friends.
Author's Response:
Thank you for thoughts, Penelope! I think so too.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 01:10 am
can you please make your stories longer
Author's Response:
Yes, I will definitely try. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 12:38 am
I like the update. I think Dmitri needs a woman who doesn't gush over him. It will be good to see how the courting goes. LOL.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
I think he needs this badly too. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 12:38 am
Why is Sasha friends with this group? Faye needs to be slapped.
Author's Response:
Doesn't she though? Lol Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Apple Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 12:37 am