Title: Cast

Sasha's friends...............speechless. shes better off alone.

Author's Response:

Yes, she is. Unfortunately, she hasn't officially realized that herself yet. But time will change. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Bigsix Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2013 12:30 am

Title: Chapter 4

ah HELLZ naw!  I'd cancel her membership to my freakin' friend-club after that stunt; she wouldn't even be called associate either!  What if something would've happened to Sasha!?  Would she even care or bat an eyelash...?!  Hell-to-tha-no she wouldn't!  She'd cry tears of relief that it wasn't her effing ass but that's about it!!!

oooh, I'm smoking right-about-now on that little trick-ass wench!  Ok, ok, ok, wheeewww...*rolling shoulders, taking a deep breath calming down* OK...I'm sorry...I'm good...my apologies...but i had to get real on that biotch!

Anyhoo- thanks for the additional insight on Dmitri; I have a better image on the character you're creating...he's just a man being a man: a flawed, intriguing, sexy, rich male who's a bit arrogant but not obnoxiously so.  He's older, a bit wiser and with that comes a level of maturity and change in standards- particularly what was appealing may no longer sustain one's interests in the opposite sex.  I'd love to witness their conversation on the ride home (her place or his? mmm lol) and see how they converse/relate to one another and how he came to be at that bus-stop when she needed a knight in black-shiny-sports-car :)

Nice chapter.



Author's Response:

So happy you have exactly the same understanding of him as I have been trying to protray! (Score! lol) Thank you for your review. Their car conversation will be featured in the next chapter. ;-)

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2013 12:28 am

Title: Cast

can we get a pic of Dina?

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 03 2013 12:11 am

Title: Chapter 4

Faye is not a real friend at all, knowing it's late and she has no money. time to get some new friends. Dmitri's attitude does not turn me off, he speaks his mind. Now if he would just let Sasha know what his mind is saying.



Author's Response:

Really happy to hear you are not turned off by Dmitri. I want him to be likeable but realistic at the same time. No stereotypical Prince Charming here. lol Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 03 2013 12:10 am

Title: Chapter 4

Nicely done. Now let's get this show on the road. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I'm happy you are enjoying the story! 

Reviewer: londongirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 03 2013 12:09 am

Title: Chapter 4

Gj. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 4

the chapters are short but other than that, love it



Author's Response:

I'm happy you are enjoying the story. I will be sure to make the chapters longer next time. :-)

Reviewer: moonstar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I don't understand how Sasha would think Faye is her friend. She dismisses her, breaks promises and then talks to her as if she's an annoyance. And I have no doubt Faye would expect Sasha to jump if she asked Sasha to do something for her and Sasha would gladly do it.  It's kind of hard to root for Sasha when she doesn't seem to care about herself. I find this story intriguing and looking forward to the developemnt of Dmitri and Sahsa's relationship, but I really hope somewhere in this story she let's Faye have it. That was just unnacceptable how rude she is to Sasha. And Jaelynn too. Teagan seems like she cares, but I guess we'll see as the story progresses. 



Author's Response:

Faye is truly the worst of them all because she is very self-absorbed. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 11:40 pm

Title: Cast

I enjoy this story.  Sasha , it seems , wants to be associated with the pretty people because of low self-esteem and misplaced loyalty.  She needs new friends like Dina. I hope in the ffutura is blessed with financial windfall and another potential love interest who actually sees her inner and outer beauty. I'm not really liking Dimitri,maybe after the car ride he''ll become enraptured with Sasha. 



Author's Response:

I hope as I write more about Dmitri and you get to know a different side of him your feelings will change. I completely understand how some readers dislike him right now; he isn't being especially likeable with his brutal honesty. Thank you for your review, though!

Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 11:15 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I like that Dmitri is interested with her. Screw Faye!! What does Dina look like? Update soon!



Author's Response:

I will be sure to add a pic of Dina soon. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 11:11 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update! What's going to happen after Sasha accepts Dimitri's offer of a ride home?!



Author's Response:

All will be revealed soon...lol Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 10:50 pm

Title: Chapter 4

uhoh Dmitri is playing with fire. See he thinks he's only in for a joy ride, but oh he's going to be wrapped around her finger and so whipped soon...poor child hahaha

 

thankd for the update!



Author's Response:

I am looking forward to this just as much as you are, It is going to be a joy to write. lol Thank you!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 10:37 pm

Title: Cast

Great update!I hope Sasha grows a backbone and puts her "friends" in their place.



Author's Response:

Me too. Thank you!

Reviewer: meme398 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 10:37 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I'm loving your story so far. I think Sasha needs to start standing up to the three bitches especially Faye and Jailynn, need to grow a backbone a bit. Other than that keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

I'm happy you are enjoying the story. Thank you so much for your review! I will be updating soon. 

Reviewer: Mikka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 10:06 pm

Title: Chapter 2

This chapter took me by surprise! Their interactions are adorable.



Author's Response:

:-) Thank you for your review! I aim to surprise. lol

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Oh hellllll no! She must not have much of a backbone, cause I definitely would've cussed all of the people at the table out, or at least left!



Author's Response:

haha! Thank you for reviewing! I understand your frustration but we see Sasha become more mature and have a greater sense of her own worth as the story continues!

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 09:48 pm

Title: Chapter 4

It did seem to answer my questions! Can't wait for an update!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that! I will be updating soon. Thank you!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 09:48 pm

Title: Chapter 4

UGH!! I really hate how Sasha's (so called) friends treat her. She is a really sweet and loving person, I would love to have a friend like that AND she is not trying to push up on the HOT man-whore, sexist that is Dmitri. LOL!!!

 

I really like this story, though Sasha taking the abuse and wrongful treat of others is not one of my favorites. I am loving the creative and twists you add. Please post more soon :-)



Author's Response:

So happy to hear that you are a fan of the heroine. In a lot of the books I read, I find myself disliking how the main character is protrayed and I was worried the same would happen to my readers. Thank you for your review! I will be updating soon. 

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Why is Sasha even friends with these woman!? They kinda of treat her like a after thought. Teagen seems to be the better of the bunch.Hmm Dmitir is really attracted to Sasha. Hope he knows what he is doing he just may fall for her and forget about having that trophy wife. Great update.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 09:30 pm

Title: Cast

so what does he want he's not looking for a relationship bit he not looking to just have sex so why is he wasting teegan time what game is he playing 



Author's Response:

We'll find out soon...Thank you for your review! :-)

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 08:41 pm

Title: Chapter 3

This is really good.  I have to admit that after reading the first chapter, I couldn't understand why Sasha was friends with the three of them.  Teagan seems cool but I have a feeling that as soon as she finds out that Sasha is attracted to Dmitri (he seems to be attracted to her as well) she will cut the friendship off.  Which is what most would do anyway...Sasha is so innocent and shy (I can relate to that) but that low self-esteem is a mutha...I don't know why Dmitri keeps leading Teagan on; I think things will get ugly.  And yes, I'm interested in that Slade character.  I wonder who he's going to be paired with and is Dmitri's friend?



Author's Response:

Sasha;s lack of her own self-worth, makes her just accept her mistreatment as justified and deserving. Hopefully, she will come to her senses and realize how special she is. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 07:15 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Dmitri is something....her friends aren't really good to her..



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 05:05 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Paul is some kind of fine!  Yummy!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 02:17 pm

Title: Cast

I forgot that Jaelyn was black.  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 02:09 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I really like it, very different. I can't wait for more :-)



Author's Response:

Very glad to hear you are enjoying my story! Thank you!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 10:26 am



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