Nice update.

Nyeesha

This is an interesting read so far. I'd love to see what's going through Dmitri's head.

For some reason I don't think Teagan will be too happy about Dmitri's interest in Sasha.

I enjoyed this chapter, this story is coming along nicely.

Am loving this story. I totally love Sasha. Smart but lacking self confidence and just need the right handsome, hot prince charming to bring it out. Would love to know what Dimitri is thinking... maybe a lil bit form his POV ??? Looking forward to your update xoxoxo

I'm really enjoying this story so far. Great update. Keep them coming. 

Good update . My interest has been peaked with Dmitri and Sasha. Not sure how I'm feeling about Sasha - one moment she quite and shy the next she jumping down Dmitri's throat . I still can't get a real feel of who she is ... but I think it's just me .

You delivered. Great update! Could you make the next chapter from Dmitri's point of view?

I think you are definitely on the right path. I always consider these postings to be first draft....and for a first draft, you definitely delivered!!! There is definitely a more definitive cohesive flow and believability i the main character's actions and thought process!!! Great job!

i'm not sure how i feel about how you are portraying dmitri it's like he's an ass but he's a nice guy, first he's rude to sasha now he's nice to her but he says that she is not what he's looking for but he had to kiss her for what reason. he said he's not looking for a serious relationship so why is he still teagan if they are not having sex and he knows that all she wants is a sexual relationship. that confuses me. it was a good update and i can't wait to read more. 

The jury is still out on both of them at the moment for me. Sasha is too connected too soon to Dmitri. And Dmitri is all over the place with is actions. I'll wait and see what they do. 

Interesting....

It's a great start.  I will divulge personal information here.  I'm a 32 year old virgin by choice.  I'm not even saving it for marriage, i just haven't met a guy in my 32 years of age to make me sweat and pant over.   I had a friend when I was 24 who was 36 and a virgin.  Again by choice.   I think people think that we don't exist but we do and a lot of it is not looks related or only that; or saving it for some future man (which is sexist in and of it itself---basically saving yourself for a man implies that you are doing it for a man---rather than for yourself).  Sometimes it's life circumstances that allow the time and others it's just a choice.    

It's sad that Sasha's is through insecurity and not really anything else.   But I do like where this story is going and I think it's an interesting start although I am weirded out by the fact he's going out with Teagan and then maybe Sasha.  Dunno...I know that whole girlfriend bond even stops relationships between a few daters.   That would be weird for me anyway.

The story is good, but my only problem is the way it is typed. It would be easier to read if you double spaced the text or when each character speaks start it on a new line. Do you get what I am saying?

Ex. Teagan, just ignore her she is just a student.

Sasha asks, what type of work do you do Dimitri?

That would make it easier to follow.