this is so cool my name is khadijah
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2018 11:16 pm
this is so cool my name is khadijah
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2018 11:14 pm
Please continue you've got me hooked.
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed




Date: October 06 2014 02:31 am
Nice
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed


Date: August 31 2014 01:35 am
Nice start. I am excited to read more. I am A ok with the dashes
Reviewer: MissCO Signed



Date: April 25 2014 06:47 pm
Zo has sisters that are mermaids so is he merman? Who is he referring to when he mentions My Lord? Are you referencing Greek or Roman Mythology? Good start so please continue!
Author's Response:
I'm not particularly using either. I'm picking things from various pagan religions. As for the other questions... I can't answer any of them right now but theu will be answered in the story. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: April 24 2014 02:50 pm
I love it! very creative
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed




Date: April 24 2014 09:19 am