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Title: Prologue

I have not read the latest chapters for this story, so my suggestions may be off or already done, but I do have an idea of how to bring Camille's family around, if interested, hit me up on my story review Cheung's New Sub... look for my pen name. I think u may like my idea.

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 03:10 am
Title: Chapter 37

I do like this story, but on another note... Please humble Camille's family, that momma and those sisters have it coming big time. 

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 03:06 am
Title: Chapter 38

Will Hiram and Camille have children together? Will Stevie revert back to his Klan beginnings or fall in love with a chocolate sister? What happens with Hiram's sister's and mother are they are arrested? Will anyone in Camille's birth family try to contact her? Will either of the Pastor's daughters fall in love with white men? 

These are the questions I want to see developed...maybe not all but a few, who knows they may lead to other stories.

I have enjoyed this story from the first word to the last...even when it got really intense. You are an AWESOME writer. I am a transplanted southern girl, and believe me racism is still strong in the south, with and without the hoods!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2015 11:19 am
Title: Chapter 38

HE asked her! And she said yes!!! I'm happy for them. I'm glad that they are going to adopt Stevie, he fits perfectly. And he wants to change his middle and last name, that's great. It will be good for him, give him a chance at a fresh start and a new life. Now... about this wedding and everything. A wedding and more babies!!!!!!!

I'm sad that's its ending soo soon. I knew it would eventually but oh well. Update soon

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 08:18 pm
Title: Chapter 38

I love this story. GREAT writing!!!

 Reviewer: Leigh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 05:58 pm
Title: Chapter 38

Yes, he proposed and she said yes!!  Stevie is finally loved inconditionally.  Camillie is finally comfortable with her and HIram's love.  The people that are most important are part of their lives.  Now I am waiting for her family to show up trying to ruin her happiness. I hate to see this story end, I have truly enjoyed it.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 12:06 am
Title: Chapter 38

Very good update...I personally would like for her parents to feel the burn of hate.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 38

Yes love the update 

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 10:15 pm
Title: Chapter 38

For a moment I thought that was final chapter. I can't wait to read epilogue.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 09:59 pm
Title: Chapter 37

Yay!!! I'm glad that its over. I know they are going to get custody of lil Stevie and Savannah is just too cute. They are going to get married! I'm super excited. I wouldn't have cared if the police killed Ruth. That lady is absolutely crazy. The truth is staring you in the face and you still can't accept it? Seriously?? Get a damn grip, its over and your honorable husband was a piece of shit.

Update soon!!

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2015 04:48 pm
Title: Chapter 37

Yeah love conquers all!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 08:56 pm
Title: Chapter 37

So glad they are getting their happy ever after; all of the ones who were against them are getting their just deserved prison time like they should have all along.

 Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 11:22 pm
Title: Chapter 37

I'm glad Camille and Hiram are going to get their happy ending! Thanks for updating this story!

 Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 06:07 am
Title: Chapter 37

YAAAAYYY! Hiram family is outta here! Now, is Camille will ever accidently meet up with her side of the family?

 Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 03:03 am
Title: Chapter 37

Great update! Glad Camille ok!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 03:00 am
Title: Chapter 37

Yes, thw Klan is being dismantled and jailed.  I hope that thet spend the rest of their miserable lives in the hoosegau. I want each of th to get shanked.  Hiram asked Camille to marry him!! Awesome sauce!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 01:24 am
Title: Chapter 37

Hiram's last line read really wrong, "ashamed of loving you anymore. " I never got the impression that he was ashamed of his love for Camille until that line. 

 Reviewer: HumorMe Signed star [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 12:32 am
Title: Chapter 37

Wonderful update...I love your book

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 11:40 pm
Title: Chapter 36

Great! I especially can't wait to see (read) when Hiram shows Ruth and his trashy sister's that their idol was really a black man passing as white! That will be Awesome!!!

Ding dong the witch is dead! The wicked witch is dead!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2015 11:02 pm
Title: Chapter 36

Yay. Debbie's is gone.

I know Camille's going to make it.

And what did Hiram mean when he hinted at his father being black? Did I miss something?

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 06:45 pm
Title: Chapter 36

Yay!!!! I'm glad that it's over. Finally!!! I thought Camille was going to die for a second there. I was getting upset. It can't end like this!!! LOl. Glad Hiram was there to save her. I can't wait to see how these investigations turn out. I hope Hiram tells his family what he found out about his father and his true bloodline. Put all they asses on blast. 

 

Update soon!! 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 04:23 pm
Title: Chapter 36

Actually I think that Camille was quite brave given the circumstances that she was in. And

was maybe it was out of characther for them to allow Debbie to fall but she was going to 

kill Debbie. I thought it was satisfying not everybody has to kick somebody's ass to show

they are strong. Looking forward to next update

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 03:34 pm
Title: Chapter 36

That was a great chapter.  Debbie deserved what she got and I'm glad Hiram and Camille are okay.

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 04:44 am
Title: Chapter 36

I read this chapter again wishing that Camille hadn't seem so weak in her confrontation with Debbie. That crazy ho had a noose around her neck with virtually no fight from Camille. Yep Camille is kind of weak!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 04:25 am
Title: Chapter 36

Loved the update! Glad Camille is ok. Hope she survives. Don't feel sorry for Debbie!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 02:57 am


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