Title: Chapter 25 - Angles

Marisol is a nasty little troll, Brandon is starting to see her ugly ways. Diya needs to draw a line in the sand, those brats will have to be upset! I hope Brandon will sit Marisol sorry bottom down and give hammer her with the words " Stay the hell out of my private life" As always this story is brillant. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Brandon should definitely create some boundaries for Marisol, but isn't likely to, despite the frustration he clearly feels toward her.  Not so long as he has the little ones playing on his sympathies.  What that'll cost him is the questions.  Thanks, Bain!!!

Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2018 03:38 am

Title: Chapter 25 - Angles

Wow ... Diya is a good one! I wonder what is she trying to prove?  Was Brandon right in his suspicions?  Especially after that intimate greeting between Brandon and Marisol. The crazy thing about it is that Brandon acts as if that’s the norm. Maybe it was before Diya came into that picture, but ... wow.  Would Brandon be ok with it if some dude greeted Diya that way?  Heeeyyyllll naw!! It’s so obvious that Marisol carries a torch for Brandon. No doubt in my mind after this last encounter. Again, think that Marisol uses the girls to maintain her hold over Brandon. She feels like she’s starting to lose that hold after he refused to come to her rescue when she felt that Oscar was going to come for the girls. 


Oh yeah, Marisol would have definitely been checked for that “hook up” comment. 🤨. I want to know what’s her deal?

The plot thickens. That’s for this awesome update!


Author's Response:

YW, Musicluva.  Thanks for the awesome review!!!

Marisol does have a serious issue with boundaries when it comes to Brandon.  The "why" is a little murky right now, but will become clearer as the story progresses.  Until then, Diya's gotta figure if she's willing to stay mums on how she feels about the entire situation, and what it'll cost her if she doesn't.

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2018 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 25 - Angles

Can I punch the heffa in her clit? That's what she needs.



Author's Response:

Lol!!!  You have my and Diya's blessing.

Thanks, Artamiss Caine!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2018 08:45 pm

Title: Chapter 25 - Angles

Wow...I admire Diya being so unselfish in the midst of Marisol’s conniving to be with Brandon...I think she should trust Brandon as he is not as unaware of Marisol’s manipulation as maybe Diya thinks...but Brandon has to make Diya his choice above all else...if he can’t Diya has to let him go anyway...and Diya May be faced with a similar dilemma of choice after Bran meets her family...so brilliantly written as always...you are my favorite romance author...such talent...



Author's Response:

Aw, what an amazing compliment : D Thanks, jachannah!!!

Yeah, the tug of war has just begun...on both sides.  Brandon sees what Marisol is doing, at least to a degree.  The question is, what is he willing to do about it.  More on that in upcoming chapters.  Stay tuned... 

 

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Date: November 04 2018 08:13 pm

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

Omg so much has happened! Marisol is something else but im glad Brandon didn't automatically give in to her. I know she's dealing with things but its good that he is establishing more boundaries. I'm so excited to see how dinner with her family is going to be. If anyone can handle her family , its brandon. 



Author's Response:

Let us hope.  Thanks, helloWORLD!

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2018 01:16 am

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

Thank you so much for an updated chapter 😭😭😭😭 I didn’t know how long I would have to wait but I am so overwhelmed at receiving this gift of a chapter!! And Marisol FINALLY experienced being out in her place. YESSS but I know she’s gunna use the girls to turn them against di 



Author's Response:

You already know. 

So sorry for the delay, GoddessWarlord.  I'm striving to be more consistent in all areas of my life, especially my writing.  In the interim, thanks for bearing with me.

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Date: October 19 2018 02:39 am

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

This chapter was a true page turner!  I love your writing style. Diya is crazy 😄. Brandon is ... *sigh*, *swoon* d84;a039;.  However, he really needs to have a true heart to heart discussion with Marisol. I don't know what kind of spell she has over Brandon, but if he truly wants to be in a serious relationship with someone, then there should be some boundaries set. I'm not saying they can't be friends, but I can imagine how frustrating it is that you can't have an "intimate", drama-free night with your man without all of the constant stalker-ish interruptions. It wasn't as if Oscar was banging on her door at that very moment. Why didn't she caller her brother Rafe if the need was that immediate?!  When Brandon told her, "I'm with Diya!", I took that as having three meanings:

1. I'm in a serious relationship with someone, please fall back. 

2. I'm trying to spend some quality time with my woman. 

3. I'm trying to f@ck my woman, so please stop calling!

I would think Marisol could have come up with an least one of those conclusions, right?! Either she is in denial, she's trying to block, or she doesn't think it's going to last. Either way, she's playing on Brandon's emotions (again). Diya is a good one. I would have been mad as ish that he stopped mid-screw on the ascent.  Sheeeiiit!!!  If it weren't for the binding ropes, she should have jumped on his ass and finished without him while he was on the phone. (I’m just kiding ... well, no, not really 😈). Maybe Mariosol would get the picture then! 

Can’t wait until Sunday dinner!  I can already small that drama. Great update!



Author's Response:

Lol!  You maybe right on all accounts.  Marisol clearly doesn't see Brandon and Diya's relationship as something deserving for respect for yet to be disclosed reason.  The next few chapters should shed some light on that.

Thanks sooooo much for the review, Musicluva, and for sticking in there with me, Brandon, and Diya through thick and thin!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2018 06:02 pm

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

I had to read this chapter multiple times to ingest it all...the connection between Diya and Brandon I felt to my core, which speaks to the brilliance with which you were able to convey the feelings and emotions between them...got me so in the feels...clearly you again show the amazing link between sex and love...you returned from hiatus with a vengeance...I truly LOLed at Camilla's antics towards Mal...and I wanted to shank Marisol for her sense of entitlement towards Brandon...Marisol and her horde and Diya's family will be major obstacles for our couple but I am so looking forward to the ride...I'm so happy for your return...may you be richly blessed...



Author's Response:

jahchannah!!!

You are so right.  Brandon's and Diya's relationships with their nuclear and extended families will pose a number issue in their relationship.  And the drama doesn't end there.  More on that in coming chapters.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, jachannah!  I always enjoy reading you insight, and greatly appreciate your support and well wishes.  Be blessed!

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Date: September 30 2018 05:24 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

Ok I haven't read a word of the update but I tell my heart literally skipped a beat when I saw this story in the recents.  Sooo glad to see you back on here.  You are a truly gifted writer. Anyway, off to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, iscream4icecream!!! Hope you enjoyed!

Reviewer: iscream4icecream Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2018 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

So happy for this update!!! Glad you're back!



Author's Response:

Thanks Akira Jade!

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Date: September 29 2018 02:32 am

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

So glad you're continuing this story. Love it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Michmom2!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2018 02:03 am

Title: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

Welcome Back!! I'm so happy to see this story updated! 



Author's Response:

Thanks shiny0612!

Reviewer: shiny0612 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2018 04:22 pm

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

This made me cry AND late for work! Thanks!! 😁😁



Author's Response:

You're welcome ; )  Thanks Artamiss Caine!!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2018 10:13 am

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

Yeeeeeessssss!!!!! 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁.  You've made my year!!! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2018 01:36 am

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

I have missed this story so much.  Brandon needs to kick Marisol to the curb.  She is shady and wants to break him and Diya up as evidenced by the amount of calls she makes to distract him from his relationship.  I bet that if she knew that he wasn't around Diya, she wouldn't call so much to disrupt him.

Diya's family needs to let her breathe and be able to enjoy her relationship and life.  She also needs to find a new job and not work for her father anymore. As long as Diya's father thinks he has control over her, he thinks he can tell her how to live her life and who to date/marry.  If he wants to try and disown her, she needs to be strong enough to say "that's fine" and keep it moving with Brandon.

Even if Diya and Brandon break up (which I hope never, never happens), she needs to be strong enough to stand on her own and not be intimidated by her parents or her sisters who need to mind their own business.

I can't wait for the next chapter.  This is one of my favorite stories. :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, dcphoenix1!!!  So glad you're enjoying my little tale : )

Marisol and William, and Brandon's and Diya's weakness for them, pose the greatest threat to their relationship.  Question is, can they create the boundaries necessary to preserve what they have?  Will any of the relationships survive it?

We shall see...

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2018 08:33 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

omg,omg,omg. I am so excited you are back. I haven't even read this yet and I'm screaming at my desk at work. Thank you!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank YOU, Unileo77!!! Update posted : )

Reviewer: Unileo77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2018 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

Your writing has a language of its own, simple and well place words convey what Brandon and Diya feel about each other. I scream when I saw your update. Beautiful writing and by the by welcome back you have been miss. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Aw, Bain, you are too kind.  Thanks so much for the encouraging words, and for reading and reviewing!!!  All are very much appreciated.

Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2018 03:33 pm

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

*cartwheel*  Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

YW : )  Thanks you, idriveavitz!

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2018 02:48 pm

Title: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

I'm screaming!! I haven't read this update yet but I'm screaming. Glad you're back!



Author's Response:

Thanks crayola30!!!

Reviewer: crayola30 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2018 02:00 pm

Title: Chapter 23 - The Trouble with Assuming

I really can’t wait to know what happens next! Any chance there’ll be an update soon? 



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Reviewer: ChsnteJae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2018 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

Any update soon?



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Reviewer: Love33 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2018 04:29 am

Title: Chapter 23 - The Trouble with Assuming

Can please update soon! I miss this story



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Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2018 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 23 - The Trouble with Assuming

I just reread this whole story 💖. I can’t wait for Sunday dinner!  Hopefully an update is in the works? 🙏🏾



Author's Response:

Hey Musicluva!  I'm SO sorry for keeping you guys hanging.  Life has been a little rough, and a creativity assassin.  But I haven't given up.  Hopefully I'll come up with something presentable in the next couple months.  Thanks for not giving up on me!  Be blessed!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2018 07:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

I just reread this whole story because that's how much I miss it.  Any update coming soon!??



Author's Response:

Hey Love33!  So sorry I'm a whole 6+ months late with this reply.  I wish I could say I'll have an update soon.  I haven't gotten much writing done in the last year or two, and almost none worth sharing.  But I haven't given up.  I'll keep working at it until I get a breakthrough.  Until then, be blessed!

Reviewer: Love33 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 01:01 am

Title: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

Hi JJ! I hope all is well with you. Can we expect an update from Diya and Bradon anytime soon?  Really missin' these two, and looking forward to reading more of their story. 



Author's Response:

Hey Musicluva!  I wish I could say an update was imminent.  I've gone through several life upheavals over the last seven months, all of which have monkeyed with my time and creativity.  I'm hoping things will stabilize over the next few months, and writing will come a little easier.  Sorry to keep you all waiting.  I have every intention of finishing Brandon and Diya's story, and appreciate your continued interest.  Be blessed!  Joelle

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2017 12:17 am



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