Im not sure even at this stage that I understand the relationship with Diya and her family and Brandon and his family.  Why the conflict is so deep and disturbing.  Why his brother is so awful.  Interesting chapter, but it leaves me wanting some clarity.

Wow! Diya opened up to Brandon at his prompting now Brandon will have to do the same. I understand why Brandon didn't want Diya there. There is obviously some issues going on with Tyler that were hinted at when Duya met his parents and he showed up at the end. Brandon does not want Diya apart of that, very understandable. But in the next day or so, Brandon and Diya needs to have another talk. I felt a little bad for Tyler when he grabbed Diya ankles. I think he may have been asking for help in that grab as Diya suspected. He knows Brandon doesn't play but still picks with him. It seems to be beyond picking though. Going after Diya with his mouth was a mistake he is living as we speak. I cannot wait for the next chapter. 

Hurt people, hurt people smh... Great chapter. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.

this f#cker doesn't have anything better to do than to try and torment Brandon. I hope he's thisclose to death. What a real ahole.

Wow-weeeee!!!  Branny has some explain in' to do. What-in-the-h3ll ?!?!?!  Man, if I was Diya, I'd really be thinking that Branny has some serious unresolved issues swarming around in his head that could use some real therapy. I'd have to take a pause, and regroup on this here ish!  I would be wondering if he still has feelings for this lost love  No wonder Diya has her doubts. Branny seems to zone out when he's angry. I don't know ... Should we give him the benefit of the doubt and blame it on the liquor? ( btw, am I the only sheltered one here who doesn't know what 'breath mint' is 😳?  That went straight over my head ... I even tried to google it, and came up with nothing. ), but I digress ... I am feelin' Diya's pain!  I'm sure her head is spinning now. This was an, "oh my d@mn goodness?!?!?' update!  Branny is going to have to do some real @$$ kissing to make up for this here one 🤔.  Awesome update!  I'm clicking my mouse to see what's next. 

I just love your writing style. It flows beautifully. It's fresh, unique, unpredictable, engaging, and I love it!😍 

This date night started out so good but went from bad to worse...Brandon, baby, you lost so many cool points...he so didn't want Diya to see him like that way...he is hiding so much anger and pain that seems rooted in his family...Brandon is the son that got both parents while Tyler is the son that lost the opportunity for a two parent family...is there a long standing and deep seated resentment between brothers rooted in Brandon having what Tyler longed to have...at least that's how I see it...the hatred between the brothers is palpable and poor Diya really witnessed it first hand...Brandon has a dark side that he didn't want her to see...he didn't want her to judge and she hasn't but he went beyond shutting her out in his anger...wow...when you said it would get a lot worse before it got better, you weren't kidding...but where does that leave Diya...does she try to get Brandon to open up after a cool down period...does she let him go and can she really since she is in love with him...what will Brandon do once he has cooled down...will he apologize and more importantly will he open up to her...if he doesn't open up then it's hard to see if his relationship with Diya can survive...as of now, Diya is really all alone...but it can't be over yet...like I said, JJ, you are amazing at doing angst...I cried for Diya and felt her hurt...you are such an amazing talent and I can't wait to read more...you just get me all invested in these characters that I root for them to be happy, I feel their pain...brilliant...just brilliant...if I could give you three 10 star votes, I would...you rock...

Poor Diya. I need Brandon to get it together.

You restricted your story and it has taken me a minute to gain access. I didn't remember my password or the email address I used. I hope I didn't offend you because I wasn't criticiizing your writing.  I know there are plenty of people who can wait that long or longer.  I did with every guy I ever dated.  I know people who were virgins when they married.  I was reacting to the characters because that what good writers cause people to do.  Fuss at  and get frustrated over make believe people and situations.  You being one of my favorite writers have me reading your stories on my second laptop, because my  other one didn't fair well through some of your impossible romances.  This story is typical you. So many twist and turns until yes. I'll admit I have said. "  Arrrgh, damnit JJ what hell are you doing."  Yes, I scream at my screen when everything is going terribly wrong. Like when Brandon went to pee and Diya was left to fight off the pervert and Brandon didn't show up.  Then you instantly switch to that satisfying moment where Brandon addressed the issue he has with Diya, in his mind, always trying to pacify him by downplaying how she feels about certain situations.  I've been riding your rollercoasters for awhile.  So much so that I know better than to try to guess who sitting at his doorstep.  Instead I'm going to prepare myself for the drama that's about to unfold.  You know if they don't wait out these last two days before they consummate their relationship, Diya will blame every obstacle they encounter on the fact that they didn't wait.  One question-- does he have any tattoos of rainbows and ribbons? 

Dear Author, 

New reader here, and I have to say that this is a beautifully well written story. Brandon and Diya's journey is not perfect but with each chapter, I become more and more curious. Their relationship is somewhat of a trial. The obstacles that they face, though unfortunate, seem very realistic and refreshing in the world of romance fiction. I admire their commitment and devotion to one other and I am grateful for the many layers that you've added to their character.

Brandon is a very personable male character. I don't think he's prince charming yet, overall, he does possess the physical attraction, charm other redeeming qualities that will have the ladies (myself included) swoon over him. I really love how he is not the perfect man but I still I believe he is just the "right one" for Diya. I am both intrigued and worried by his mysterious past. I can understand the need for his discretion but I also feel like perhaps, this is someone who is masking alot of pain and anger on the inside still. And regarding his struggle of revealing the stories, is it because he is still healing from his scars or just afraid of ruining her perception of him?

Diya is definitely unlike any character I've really read. I can appreciate her dedication and resolve to start anew with her faith. I have some qualms regarding her disfunctional family and truly question the logic behind some of her relatives' ideals. Despite all of that family mess, I hope that she can remain strong through it all. As she uncovers more about Brandon's world and the state of her feelings for him, she's starting to get overwhelmed which is understandable. But that girl is the best thing in his life at the moment and I truly hope she can overcome her father's influence and stick through thick and thin.Brandon needs her more than he realises and I also think he's not much in tune with the reality of the situation (as far as her family drama and his friendship with marisol) Up till now I see a storm brewing for these two and I hope they're prepared. 

This is truly a gem and I am glad to have found this story. I can't wait to read more. 

That was really good.  I didn't want to stop reading but unfortunately ... i cannot wait to find out what happens next.  Thank you for your excellent story.

It's either Tyler or the cat that's waiting outside the door. I'm convinced.

I'll scream if it's Marisol.  I can't stand girls like her

When I think about it...Diya wincing under Brandon's fisted grip upon seeing their visitor makes me think it's not Marisol (seeing a woman as petite as Marisol shouldn't provoke such a reaction, I would think)...you know how to keep me coming back which is testimony to your gift with the pen, JJ...