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Title: Belvin's Barbecue

At first I was confused as to what the point of the story was. This second chapter cleared that up. It's good writing I was envisioning everything in my head. Excited for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

I'm happy things were cleared for you. I worry that I don't supply enough information. At the same time Im trying not to give too much.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2023 07:16 am
Title: Belvin's Barbecue

Very good, slow and steady. Waiting for next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2023 01:58 am
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Keep going.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2023 12:23 am
Title: Chapter 1

A good start, waiting for next chapter.

 Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2023 03:25 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm curious to see where we go from here. Why is the aunt so overbearing? Why is she stuck there? I guess we'll see. 

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2023 10:54 pm


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