Reviews For The Clause
Title: Moving On...

Chad bought Dani a ring, baby circle, baby circle, baby circles!!!  Heather's parents need to leave Chad and family alone, as they raised a psycho, alcoholic daughter!!!   Excellent!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 12:12 am

Title: Moving On...

Dang....6 carats?! OMG Dani is a lucky chick!!! I am also reading your other story "Love the second time around"----great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you like! 

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 09:38 pm

Title: Moving On...

Wow you go girl I love how she told her boss off and how she feels. I hope she says yes to chad but who know if she will. Great update and thank for the update

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 04:25 pm

Title: Moving On...

Kerrington made her an offer she couldn't refuse.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 03:27 pm

Title: Moving On...

Excellent!  So glad that crazy Heather got hers!  Now on to the marriage proposal!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 11:43 am

Title: Moving On...

Wow!!! Dani sure put Kerrington in his place. And Chad, well what can one say about this man "Let me have him" lol.  You know when I read these stories on this site and others, I do wonder if these type of men really exist for real or only in fantasy land, but whatever they are a joy to read, just like this one.  So please keep the chapters coming, you are doing fantastically.



Author's Response:

I think we all want these men, which is why they are perfect on paper. I really appreciate you sticking it out with me and reading till the end.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 11:16 am

Title: Murder for Hire

Wow!



Author's Response:

I hope that means "thumbs up"

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 01:06 am

Title: Murder for Hire

I just started reading this story today and am totally obsessed with it. Sorta like Heather with Cchad LOL except I ain't trying to kill nobody! lol. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Glad you are enjoying it....

Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 12:05 am

Title: Murder for Hire

Heather actually went through with it then tried to play it off!! That B****!!! She is going down in a big way. She should definitely plead insanity and end up in a mental institution and she definitely needs Jesus. Hopefully now Chad and Danielle can be happy and drama free. Thanks for the quick update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading it....

 

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2011 11:24 am

Title: Murder for Hire

Yay!!!  I'm glad Heather is going to jail.  I hope she's in there for a very long time.  I can't wait for the next update :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks, we're finally rid of that girl...

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2011 06:22 am

Title: Murder for Hire

Yes, this is my absolutely so wondering I can picture Heather in handcuffs and it brings a tear to my eyes!!!  This was so awesome!!!  i just hope that she truly forgives Chad!!



Author's Response:

Thanks lady. I'm glad you approved.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2011 01:43 am

Title: Murder for Hire

I am so happy Heather got arrested with her crazy behind!!!!

Now Chad and Dani can move on with their lives.

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading...

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2011 01:04 am

Title: Murder for Hire

MORE!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks...

 

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 08:11 pm

Title: Murder for Hire

So glad you are starting to UPDATEING again I really thought you never would

I really enjoyed this one

Hopefully she Gets whats coming to her

UPDATE SOON



Author's Response:

I never left the Chamber for good. I have just been in school and I just recently lost my job, so I have the ability to write now...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 02:50 pm

Title: Murder for Hire

Heather's ass is grass now. I hope she gets life and becomes the bitch on the block. Looks like Ben and David will have a lot of apologizing to do to Chad and Dani.Glad to see you back .



Author's Response:

Thanks lady. I appreciate you reading.

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 02:37 pm

Title: Murder for Hire

Thank god they bust that girl and that fruit loop will go to jail. good chapter and thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 01:48 pm

Title: Murder for Hire

Chad almost messed up the whole thing.

 



Author's Response:

Just like a man, right?

 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 01:36 pm

Title: Murder for Hire

Man Chad coming early nearly foil the plan.  Heather is totally gone to crazyland, here is hoping she stay lock up forever.  Dani what a brave soul she is. This is a made for TV thriller. I sure would watch it. Keep it coming, or is it more please lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I try to write like its gonna be on tv...

 

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 11:20 am

Title: Murder for Hire

yeah Heather was crazy. she should have move on.



Author's Response:

Yep now she's moved on to the jail... :)

 

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 10:20 am

Title: Murder for Hire

I love this story and heather is a crazy b. Cant wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Updated again.. Can you believe it... three times in one week

 

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 08:28 am

Title: Murder for Hire

Now if Ben still wants her he can visit her in jail! He is a racist and she is a pschyco. But Dani and Chad were meant to be! Thank You!



Author's Response:

We gotta put him in his place too... LOL

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 08:09 am

Title: Chapter 22

Oh Yeah! That heffa is about to get hers and real good!Thank you stereotypical black man who sells drugs who is actually a undercover police officer! Thank you for being a cop!



Author's Response:

LOL at stereotypical... LOL

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 07:58 am

Title: Chapter 21

That Heffa is crazy! I guess she doesn't realize that if Dani doesn't kill her Chad or Carey will! Oh hell it's about to go down in Hotlanta! The city will never be the same.  I will be surprised if the city survives after this.  There hasn't been a war in the south since the civil war and this will Civil War II. Damn I am mad at Mr. Kerrington, for "suspending" Dani.....we all know he was going to fire her anyway didn't we?



Author's Response:

Yep, yep... Still more changes coming...

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 07:53 am

Title: Chapter 20- Release the Hounds....

Yeah!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 19

That's right Dani, defend and stand by your man! Whip that Heffa's Ass! Yeah! I am giving you a 10 just for the slap!



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 07:33 am



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