Reviews For The Clause
Title: Nashville, TN

Damn, damn, damn that was Hot!!! They finally got some lovin'! I'm happy for them but Chad still has to tell Dani about Heather. I hope when he tells her Dani doesn't get all mad. I hope she knows by now that Heather is CRAZY and will do anything to get Chad back.Thanks for the great update and I;ll be waiting for the drama to come.

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 24 2010 12:29 am

Title: Things happen

good chapter i think him waking up in bed with heather was a setup she is going to try to make a hot mess of there lives. can't wait for the nest chapter cynn

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: cynn333 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 08:22 pm

Title: Things happen

Thanks for a great update.  Chad sorry that you will not be able to pull this off because Heather is waiting to ensure that you and Dani will not have a relationship.

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 01:00 pm

Title: Things happen

I dont know what happened exactly with Chad and Heather, but it doesn't smell kosher to me. She did something.

Chad...just tell Dani about that incident instead of waiting for it to blow up in your face. In your business its called "damage control" sweetie. Trust me, she'll appreciate your honesty down the line.



Author's Response:

Men are so slow sometimes....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 05:42 am

Title: Things happen

DID CHAD ACTUALLY SLEEP WITH HEATHER. I WONDER IF HEATHER GOING TO SHOW UP THE WEDDING. CHAD SHOULD HAVE TOLD DANI BECAUSE IT GOING TO BE REAL BIG PROBLEM.



Author's Response:

Yep yep.. big problem!

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 05:41 am

Title: Things happen

I hope that Chad didn't sleep with that heifer Heather   because that would put an end to his relationship with Dani.    Why can't that bitch take no for an answer?  He should throw some holy water on her!!!

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 05:33 am

Title: Things happen

I am loving this story. Heather is getting on my nerves. I am ready to put a restraining order against her myself. lol. You have me hooked and I can't wait for the update. I love Dani and Chad and I could feel the chemistry from the start. 

 

GREAT JOB!

PS. Please hurry back.



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: keisha2 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 04:37 am

Title: Things happen

I'm soooooo happy you updated this story! Dani and Chad are back. I hope Chad is honest with Dani and tell her about the thing with Heather. I have a feeling Heather will be at the wedding and start all kinds of drama along with Chad's mom and oldest brother. However you make these two end up together I will be here reading it. Thaks for the update and I'll be waiting for more.

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 04:33 am

Title: Things happen

He needs to let Dani know about Heather...that is a time bomb waiting to go off!  I can't believe he got drunk and ended up in the bed with her...I refuse to beleive he slept with her no matter how drunk he was!

 

 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 04:17 am

Title: Things happen

What the hell is wrong with Chad. He knows that Heather is a conniving ho and she will try to mess up his relationship with dani. He had better tell dani right now before ms.skanky beats him to it and wrecks his life. Great update.

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 03:21 am

Title: Things happen

Chad, Chad, Chad... you need to talk to Danni man. I think its gonna blow up in his face. He needs to be honest with her and take whatever consequences like a man. Why was he drinking like a fool anyway if there was a possibility of him being drunk???!!! Loved the update.

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 02:31 am

Title: Things happen

I hope they don't fall for that. Heather had the waitress sending him those refills. I bet she was faking being drunk. He's too intelligent to fall for that crap. Loved it!!

Author's Response:

He's a dunce.. LOL... Too nice...

 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 02:14 am

Title: Things happen

oh lord please tell me he didnt' sleep with that woman please tell me he didnt sleep with the hoe lol. so she going to meet the family  intersting i think the family will like her .  i hope everything work out for this couple. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 02:12 am

Title: Things happen

D...you know you're wrong for that turn of events...my goodness, why is us gon' do now...my poor Chad...what was he thinking to get that drunk and end up naked in bed with an equally naked Heather...I know that's going to come back and bite him in the butt...but knowing how conniving Heather is...I wouldn't put it past her to set up this little incident...

Now, that throws a damper on the Nashville trip...even if Chad and Dani go all the way...Heather will still have her blackmail photos to throw a monkey wrench in what should be a happy union...I'm already weeping for them...don't know if Chad should just 'fess up and let Dani deal...or keep praying that Heather will keep her big mouth shut...but who am I kidding...drama and more drama ahead...

Looking forward to what's up next...thanks for the update...



Author's Response:

I love to read your reviews... Thank you so much!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 01:33 am

Title: Things happen

Yeah Heather is going to turn up at the wedding.

I only hope later he find out he didn't have sex with her.



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 12:42 am

Title: The Introductions

Thanks for the update.....

this chapter had alot going on.....

i didn't understand Chad getting so drunk that he end up in bed with his ex....



Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

Reviewer: vlovenaz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 12:32 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

so this story is good just like your other ones now quick question: when are you gonna update? plz do so asap.

Author's Response: Just for you an update

Reviewer: june Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 19 2010 07:19 pm

Title: Lunch with the big dog

Just finally started really reading this story again and loving it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much...

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2010 06:45 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Nice update, and the flowers at the end was too sweet. So, the "seducing chapter" next - yeah? Can't wait... 



Author's Response:

It should be soon... LOL

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 08 2010 01:27 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Lol, i like Mcnosie! I say seduce him Dani you have nothing to lose and so much to gain, wow i love Chad!

Author's Response: Thanks.. I like him too...

Reviewer: Leila7 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 08:48 pm

Title: The Introductions

Heather the ho is laying low for awhile but she will probably pop up at the wrong time. His brother needs to mind his own business. Taylor and Matt are hilarious. Cant wait to read how Dani and Chad finally hooked up. Good Luck on your son's project.



Author's Response: Thanks so much. 

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 03:07 pm

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Great update. Love the way their "friendship" is progressing. Hope they can work it out with Mr K.

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am!  I think it will work out eventually.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 06:27 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Me lovey this story.  Chad is to fine for words and a complete gentlemen.   Can I get like Chad?

Author's Response: I know, I wish I could too.  LOL...

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 06:27 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

I really LIKE this story.  Dani and Chad are so good together.   And yes, it is about time to get "closer". LOL. 

Looking forward tot he next Update.

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Thanks Nyeesha.  Soon and very soon. 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 05:25 am

Title: The Introductions

Hmmm, I like this beginning.

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Thank you ma'am

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 03:53 am



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