Reviews For The Clause
Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Thanks for the great update.  The office staff is aware of their attraction for each other...it is only a matter of time before the boss finds out.  This whole clause thing doesn't seem to work for his employees very well...LOL.  Thanks and good luck with your sons project. We will be here when you get back from helping your son.  Family first!!!!  Take care.

Author's Response: Thanks for understanding. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 02:57 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Great update.

 And do the mother thing...it doesn't get better, just longer hours as they get older.  (smile) 



Author's Response: Oh I know, he's 13! Killing me! Thank you!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 02:16 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Dam!!

My girl Dani has a plan.  I hope that it goes well, and don't backfire on her. (with Mr. K)

Great update.



Author's Response: Thanks.  I hope not either... LOL

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 01:44 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

It's heating up in here...they're the talk around the office...so Dani plans a seduction and she told Taylor she's falling in love with Chad...getting good...and Matt had me cracking up with his nosiness and teasing...can't wait to see what happens next...and I can't wait to see the fallout...who gets the chopping block because of 'the clause'...thanks for the update, D...

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am.  Hopefully I get it just right.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 01:43 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Awe Dani is to cute. Falling hard for her sexy man!!! Awesome update cant wait for the seduction. Good luck to your son with his project.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the well wishes...

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 01:24 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Heather is keeping away for now. I'm looking forward to the visit with his family. They have a pool going on to see who will be fired first, lol. I loved the interactions between the three of them. Chad is a sweetie, she better seduce him. Nice update.



Author's Response: Coming soon!  thanks...

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 01:10 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

Great update. We needed this chapter to set us up for what is coming. I can't wait for the lovin' with Dani and Chad. I hope everything will be okay at his brother's wedding. I don't want to see these two apart. 

Good luck with your son's project, gotta take care of the kid first. Looking forward to an update when you have a free moment. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much.  We gotta have some drama... it's coming soon.

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 12:42 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

well i hope your son get a great grade on his project. i know she was in love with him lol but i think it work out for them because they love each other so much.  can't wait to see what happen at brother wedding. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks honey.  I appreciate it

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 12:24 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

Hey D, got a chance to catch up with your latest story, and I love it so far, Dani and Chad are just so cute together, I love the banter beteewn them and the chemestry is off the charts.

As for Heather, I love how Dani made her look like the TWIT that she is, Chad doesn't want her so see needs to find another FOOL b/c Chad isn't the one.

BTW like Chad's brothers Brian and Carey, the juy is still out on Brian.



Author's Response: Hey.  Glad you're enjoying it so far. 

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2010 04:01 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

This is another great story. You have loads of talent and I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: will2pear Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2010 07:46 am

Title: The Introductions

What truth does Ben find out?  Heather cheated on Chad so I am kinda confused now.  Does Ben not know that Heather is a ho?

Author's Response: Right. Chad hadn't told them all that she has done... And all that she's planning to do.,.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2010 03:52 am

Title: The Introductions

I was asking if Ben was going to be more of a problem than Heather, and where was the love for his brother if he is going to cause problems for him.



Author's Response: Oh, okay.  I just wanted to make sure.. No Heather = DEFINITELY more drama, Ben is just gonna be the one in the family bugging out.  LOL... He still loves his baby bro, but wants to  "protect" him....until he finds out the truth.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 11:00 pm

Title: The Introductions

Ben more than Heather, wow. Where is the love for his brother!



Author's Response: What do you mean? 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 06:49 pm

Title: Meet My Brothers

I love how she sprung that on him.."Oh yeah, I met Heather today."

Is some of the family going to have a problem with Dani and Chad? I hope not because these are just so made for each other. Great story. I am really loving this entire series.



Author's Response: Yes, unfortunately some of the family is going to be a little less than cordial. 

Reviewer: dorkygirl1983 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 04:53 pm

Title: Meet My Brothers

Great update...the conversation between the brothers in trying to determine if PIP was black was hilarious.  I could just imagine them standing around whispering to each other. Heather is fit to be tied oh man she thought that she was going to get Chad back.  I can see her making trouble for them though. Thanks

Author's Response: Heather is the nemesis of the day.  Yeah, can't you just visualize them having that conversation.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 07:23 am

Title: Easy like Sunday Morning

Thanks for a great update...his 3 brothers and he has company...oh, oh..can't wait to read what they have to say.

Author's Response: The brothers are harmless.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 07:01 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

I love how she handled Heather, but I'm sure she will use it against them with their job. What's up with Ben, I couldn't tell i fhe was okay with her or not. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Ben is the one who is going to be a problem.... Heather, eh... she will be dealt with.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 05:23 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

Loved it and glad she met the brothers. Hmmm, seems like the parents might be a bit of a problem. Hope not. What the hell is wrong with Heather??? Something isn't right with her. She's becoming a stalker!!!

Author's Response: I'll tell you now, it's going to be Mama and Ben... Heather is going to be stalkerish...

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 04:19 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

Okay Dsmooth, that chapter was a hoot.  I can hardly wait for the next Dani/Heather encounter.  What's up with Ben, he doesn't seem to receptive to the mingling of the races here.  Eagerly awaiting your next update.  Thanks for posting.

A



Author's Response: Ben is the problem.  Dani and Heather Rd. 2 coming soon.  Thanks for reading

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 03:48 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

you are a bad bad girl ... loved the chapter cynn;-)

Author's Response: Thanks Cynn, glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: cynn333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 02:11 am

Title: The Introductions

Aweaome, his brothers are hilaroius.  I am so glad that Heather got put in her place by Dani!!  That heifer makes my teeth itch!!!  Although that conference that his brothers had made me pause about his parents.  Cary, Chad's little brother is a hot mess!!  He kept on trying to get some sugar from Dani.  This just gets better with each update.  I do hope that Chad follows thorugh with getting a restraining order for Heather the stalker.

Author's Response: Carey is a ladies man, period.  Ben the oldest brother is going to be more of the problem and maybe the mom.  Thanks for the compliment. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 01:40 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

Awesome update!! Man Heather doensnt know when to stop. Poor Chad he is going to have a hard time getting rid of that  woman!! Loving his brothers especialy Carey. Thanks for updating it was sooo good!!!

Author's Response:

Carey is just loveable period.  thanks for enjoying this chapter.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 01:05 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

Grear update, I loved his teasing brothers, especially the youngest, Carey! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!



Author's Response: Thanks.  More coming soon.

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 01:02 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

That was really interesting. I enjoyed it. I wonder if his parents are going to approve?

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 12:42 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

Well, brothers will be boys.  Dani's got them eating out of her hand, well; plate.

She sure handled Heather, the heiffer with class.

You go girl!!

Please update soon.

I'm loving this too much.



Author's Response: Thanks for enjoying it.  I think I will not be updating before Friday.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2010 12:30 am



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