Reviews For The Clause
Title: The Introductions

I appreciate that, I am not a big fan of drama either. All we need is just enough drama to make it a little more interesting and then move on.

Author's Response: LOL... I'm a sucker for a romance and I know you've noticed the "happy happy, joy, joy" themes in my writing... LOL...

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2010 05:17 pm

Title: Easy like Sunday Morning

I'm glad that has been cleared up. His three handsome brothers are visiting this should be good. They can get to know their future sis-in-law! Nice update.

Author's Response: I think you guys know that I'm not big on a whole bunch of drama... just enough to keep the story moving....

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2010 04:47 pm

Title: Uh-Oh...

Can't wait.

Author's Response: Thank you. 

Reviewer: karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 06:27 pm

Title: Uh-Oh...

oh crap lol drama is about to hit that club. of all the women for his best friend to hit on he hits on the woman he falling in love with lol. i hope he doesn't kill him lol. i hated that ex he should let her sleep out side lol but he was raised better thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I won't let the drama get too thick.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 05:04 pm

Title: Uh-Oh...

Excellent way to bring the drams, can hardly wait for it.

A



Author's Response:

Thanks Ms. A... glad you approved.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 03:44 pm

Title: Uh-Oh...

Dam Dani!!

At least give my man a chance to explain himself, before you go and cut him off like that.

I hope that David steps off, now that he know that Chad is interested in Dani.

Please, I'm on pins and needles right now. I need a quik fix now!!



Author's Response: Your fix is coming soon.  I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 02:52 pm

Title: Uh-Oh...

LOL, that was a great update! Poor Chad! Love the story!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and enjoying it.

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 02:13 pm

Title: Uh-Oh...

Heather is was to needy and that makes her a scary cause she is going to start some mess. Dani should have let Chad explain and now she is flirting with the best friend even though she didnt know at the time. Cant wait to see what happens next. Thx for the update.

Author's Response: Thanks Cali.  Yeah, Heather is a mess.  You know how women are, we see what we see and think we know it all.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 08:04 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

Dani, Dani , why didn't you let him explain instead of jumping to conclusions???? Now they're both about to be stupid! Great updaste. Can't wait to see how they work this one out.

Author's Response: Thank you ma'am.  I won't let them be stupid for too long.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 07:55 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

Ah man, how you gonna leave us hangin' like that? Chad may have walked up all smooth and calm but he is not gonna let his boy grind all up on his woman. 

I'm sure David isn't gonna want to be in the middle of their budding relationship either. Or maybe David and Dani will go out again as friends and he'll let her know what's really going on with crazy ass Heather and Chad.

What I'm really hoping for is for Chad to stake his claim right there in the club to let Dani know he isn't going anywhere. He needs to get a little caveman like. Not all possessive, but enough to let everyone near them know who she's gonna be with.

Now i'm on pins and needles waiting for the next update. Great update.  

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and nope, Chad is definitely gonna handle his business.

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 07:50 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

Seriously...Dani just really didn't need to go there. It was childish and petty and she deserved to be caught. She should at least have some inkling by now of who and what she's dealing with in Chad. She didn't even give him a chance to explain. Chad doesn't do games like that. At the car he was straight up about the situation with Heather and wanted to explain about it later. He even told her not to leave, though I understand why she did. She completely jumped to conclusions there.

Then to ignore him again when he said he wanted to explain....stupid. The man can get women, lots of women, so there's no need for him to say that to her then turn around and lie later.

And Chad finally told Heather for good to kick rocks! I see why he let her in, he didn't have much of a choice in the matter. It was done to keep her and other safe from her drunk ass!

Drama!



Author's Response: You know I had to bring the drama to the forefront.  I think that Heather is going to lay low for a minute, but I'm sure she'll be back when things heat up....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 07:00 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

All I can say is well damn.

Author's Response: Hope that means you liked it...:)

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 06:22 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

Aw, sookie...sookie now...it's about to be on and popping!!!

Why Chad...why...did you have to be such a nice guy and take Heather into your apartment...and in the process shoot yourself in the foot with Dani...messed my girl's head up...you did...now Dani's out playing with fire...and looking to get burned...

Let the drama commence!!!!



Author's Response: I think Chad will redeem himself... eventually

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 05:56 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

oh no, you really didn't stop the story right there?  Shame on you.  Thanks for a great update and and I guess Dani and Chad are really meant to be together.  Can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: I had to leave you wanting more...

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 05:12 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

That was good. I wonder what is going happen next.



Author's Response: Dummm, dummm, dummmm stay tuned!  :)

Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 04:39 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

Now, Now sister.  What are they going to do?  Dani has lost her mind, because she is made with Chad. I hope she doesn't date this David guy, because, she thinks something happened and it didn't.

Chad isn't going to give up is he?

Nice 



Author's Response: My Chad is NOT going to give up... This is just going to make him more resolute in making her fall in love with him...

Reviewer: Mon Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 04:28 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

I don't like drama. Why couldn't she at least let him explain, it's always more to the story than meets the eye! Great update.

Author's Response: You know how us women are... no room to explain when we see what we think we see

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 04:05 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

Dani you are really stupid, he was nice man to is hoish ex-girlfriend and you got jealous.  You are getting what you deserve Dani.  I am pulling for Chad and I want that heifer in Heather in jail on the charge of stalking!!!

Author's Response: Now, you know we had to have some drama...

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2010 03:56 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

Yay...Chad's a big hit with Dani's friends...and dude's pulling out all the  stops...and can he make himself more clear...he wants YOU, girl...Dani...Paul Bunyan has laid claim...and it's you that he wants...I know the drama is coming...but I'm loving Chad slowly breaking down her defenses...Dani...go get your man...

Ritz



Author's Response: Well, let's see what happens next!  Yep... time for the drama to occur!  :)

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 08:22 pm

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

So sweet!!! 

Author's Response: Thanks ma'am

Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 04:21 pm

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

love the update. it was short and sweet.



Author's Response: Emphasis on the short , huh... I'm trying to get better with longer chapters....

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 09:45 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

Loved it and love a man who could sing!!! Yeah!!! They are in sooo deep. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it....

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 06:21 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

That was a sweet update.  I really like Chad for Dani.  Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response: I like them together too

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 05:03 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

I don't think that the clause is fair.  In regards to Heather she has a nerve to be all clingy when she bangs anyone that she wants to.  I will never understand how some of these woman get away with the mess that they pull.  Makes no sense.  Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Thanks for enjoying the update

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 04:52 am

Title: Let's talk about it

Oh, oh is Heather trying to get back with Chad?  I hope not. I was laughing at the description of the rapper with the ice grill and in his neck.  That was funny. Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: LOL... I'm glad you like it

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 04:36 am



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