I like this start. Apparently, Chad is interested in her. Knows how she likes her breakfast and her coffee. Great.
Author's Response: Yep it's the small things that count...
[Report This]Date: March 20 2010 05:32 am
Interesting update. Can't wait until things really start heating up.
Author's Response: Thank you. I don't want to rush it.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2010 05:09 am
And you're warming them up very nicely, but feel free to hold them to the fire a little longer. My advice for improving this story, "make these chapters longer", I'm diggin your story.
A
Author's Response: Aye Aye Captain! Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
[Report This]Date: March 20 2010 05:06 am
That was really nice. I liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it... Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed
[Report This]Date: March 20 2010 04:27 am
The attraction that they have for each other is coming through. Thanks for a great update.
Author's Response: Thanks for being a loyal reader...
[Report This]Date: March 20 2010 04:26 am
I'm really liking this story. I can't wait to see when they finally get together. Please give us more of these two.
Author's Response: Thanks gor reading. Hopefully these two will see the light soon.
Date: March 20 2010 04:08 am
I am asking again, why can't these two see that they are both into each other. When it hits them, it's going to be hilarious. Who will make the first move? What will the setting be? Please update soon.
Author's Response: I will update this weekend and they can't see the forest for the trees.
Date: March 20 2010 04:02 am
Looks like Dani has found that man. Now what are they to do about how they feel for each other with the "clause" standing in their way.
Author's Response: He is definitely her man, just gotta get them to the point where they both see it...
[Report This]Date: March 20 2010 03:48 am
I hope he gets his wish soon too. Thanks for the new story.
Author's Response: Thanks girl... He will get his HEA too...
[Report This]Date: March 20 2010 03:42 am
Yay! Getting started with them.
Author's Response:
I know... I'm excited to see where this goes too.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2010 03:03 am
Someone is going to give and admitt there hot for each other. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: But who is going to break first... I'm thinking that he's going to be the Alpha Male and get it done...
[Report This]Date: March 20 2010 12:52 am
Ty for a great update.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2010 12:17 am
it so cute how the flirt with each other. but little she knows he like her big time and feels the same way. i always think it nice when a man can know your fav food and put it there to to make you smile. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for being a loyal reader...
[Report This]Date: March 19 2010 11:53 pm
I love the start to this story. Both of them need to stop beating around the bush and say what they want from each other. Life is too short not to go for what you want. I'm interested in seeing when you go with this.
Author's Response: Isn't that so much easier said than done? Thanks for reading and hopefully I get them to where they need to be...
[Report This]Date: March 18 2010 09:00 pm
These two needs to stop thinking like children and start acting like grown-ups.
I think that they are gonna be fantastic together.
Can't wait.
Author's Response: I think it happens in young people. Hopefully they won't be too childish for too long. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed
[Report This]Date: March 18 2010 03:39 pm
This is going to be a interesting read. I enjoyed what you have so far. Please continue.
Author's Response: Thanks Cali, getting ready to write some more today.
[Report This]Date: March 18 2010 03:35 pm
So Dani can't see that Chad is interested and Chad can't see that Dani is interested? Wow, these two. This should be fun. Will their mutual friends pull the wool from their eyes?
Author's Response: You know you never really see it when its right in front of your eyes..
[Report This]Date: March 18 2010 10:47 am
wow i hope chad and dani able to find a way to see where it goes. I understand what dani saying i'm 26 and single and i'm like something wrong with me lol. so i get her thoughts. like the story so far and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm sure they'll get it together soon.
[Report This]Date: March 18 2010 06:03 am
I think that Dani and Chad are adorable...and I for one can't wait to see how you work around 'the clause' to bring them together...love tales of mutual unrequited love...yet finding a way to be together despite the odds...looking forward to more...please update soon...
Author's Response: I plan to update soon. My job needs to understand that I need to write! :)
[Report This]Date: March 18 2010 05:52 am
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You will get your wish hopefully before tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: March 18 2010 05:45 am
These two are slow on the uptake, How long will it take for each of them to wake up? Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: Not gonna be slow for too long...
Date: March 18 2010 05:25 am
Thanks for a great start to the story.
Author's Response: Thanks ma'am...
[Report This]Date: March 18 2010 03:29 am
This seems interesting. You're writing stlye is pretty good.
Author's Response: Thank you. Hope it piques your interest long enough to keep you here... Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed
[Report This]Date: March 18 2010 03:28 am
So excited about your new story. Can hardly wait to read Dani and Chad's story. Good start. Happy posting.
A
Author's Response: Thanks A. I'm excited about this one too... Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2010 03:03 am
I really liked the last two stories in the Kerrington series and this one seems likes it's going to be just as good. They already want the same things, I can't wait to see how you get them to it.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the last two. I hope this one is better.
Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2010 02:38 am