WOW....this chick is whacked!
Author's Response:
LOL... well we've known that for a long time.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: November 30 2011 05:57 am
Heather is off her rocker and needs as well as deserves an ass whooping!! I am so glad that that the alleged drug dealer is an undercover cop!!! The bitch is going down and it couldn't happen to an more deserving person!!! I have missed this story, please don't make us wait as long for another chapter.
Author's Response:
I just posted a new chapter tonight
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 30 2011 04:02 am
Heather needs to sit down! But i'm glad that the dealer is working undercover
Author's Response:
Thanks....
Reviewer: andrea Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 30 2011 01:37 am
Welcome back!!!
Heather is really screwed now.
I hope Chad comes home early anyways to be with Dani.
Update again soon!
Author's Response:
Updated
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 09:19 pm
Oh my, oh my, I'm so into this story. It's a murder by hire thriller, implied by a mad woman scorned. I just can't wait to read how you handle Snake interaction with Dani about Heather plan to have her kill and the icing on the cake what will Chad and Dani do with such info. Oh the suspense is killing me, so please hurry up with the next chapter...serious next chapter please.
Author's Response:
I am typing as I week speak...
Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 09:15 pm
WTH, she is crazy. Yay she is going down, you never know who you may be dealing with.
Author's Response:
Finally
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 02:52 pm
Wow that chick has truly lost her mind she wants to kill Dani wow. I hope the cop able to save her life before someone get to her. Glad that you are back and thank for the update.
Author's Response:
Thanks girl. Heather is getting ready to be taken down soon...
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 01:34 pm
I'm so glad that snake is a cop and is going to get Heather's ass!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 01:25 pm
I am a first time reader of this story, and I gotta admit, it's getting good! That Heather bitch is about to get her Karma. I can't wait.
Author's Response:
Thanks Megan. Its been fun to write when I get the chance to actually write.
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 11:21 am
Well, It looks like Heather has "screwed the pooch" on this one.
Author's Response:
It's about time right?
Reviewer: Caligirl65 Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 08:34 am
OMG Heather as is crazy i hope she gets what is coming to her. Stupid
Author's Response:
Of course she will.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 08:15 am
Her next words need to be....Yes, Chad make me remember, oh please make me remember!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are enjoying it...
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 06:32 am
Oh Crap! Now the s*** has hit the fan! And boy is it flyiing! Who is going to leave the company Chad or Dani?
Author's Response:
Keep reading and you'll see...
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 06:23 am
Sniff, Sniff! I am crying for Chad and Dani......I hurt for her and understand what she is feeling! You are good at what you do...never stop! Keep writing these wonderful stories please! My heartaches for them...just because of a slut!
Author's Response:
Thank you. You inspired me to finally finish their story...
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 06:15 am
That BITCH! I was not going to curse, but damn it that Heather, she is an will always be a DRUNK Bitch! Needing her friends to give her courage!
Author's Response:
Aren't mean girls always mean when they have an audience?
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 05:58 am
CHADWICK? LOL! That was SWEET! Thank you for knocking Ben the Freak Out! Now for Dani doing the same for Heather! Please, Oh Please!
Author's Response:
:)
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 05:23 am
Please, Please,Please! Let Dani whip Heather's Ass! I know you don't want to demeen your main character but just once let Dani be a SISTAH! and let her whip that B******! Ass!
It will do my heart some good!
Author's Response:
LOL...
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 05:10 am
Yeah, the finally did it! It was lovely...not all wham bam thank you ma'am! It was slow (sort of) and easy (kind of), it was just what they needed.....each other! Thank You! I am giving you this 10 because he asked her if she would allow him to make love to her! He didn't just take it for granted that she wanted it too!
Author's Response:
I think they love scenes should be meaningful and important... Thanks
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 04:49 am
Thanks for the Chris Brown portion.....I have always liked him even though this whole Rihanna thing made a mess of his career. I do not condone any man for hitting a woman, but Like my momma always said......If you think you are man enough to take a swing at a man, you need to be man enough to get knocked out! That goes for men and women!
Author's Response:
I agree. I love Breezy...
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 04:35 am
Please,Please, Please, get rid of that Heffa Heather! She is messing up the story, I bet now she pulls that I am pregnant with Chad's baby lie! And you know Dani is not going to be happy about it! I hate to be crazy but can you put a HIT on Heathr soon?
Author's Response:
A hit will be put out soon, but on whom?
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 04:32 am
Ok, so she is going to seduce him......who is going to quit working for K&A, because of the clause they signed will get them terminated. I know it will be well worth it though!
Author's Response:
Isn't love always worth it?
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2011 05:46 am
I have been called a lot of things...but that is a first, being deemed exotic just because he did not want to say black. Okay! But on the bright side she has met his brothers, they like her, she likes them. All is good in the world....except......OH Yeah Heather! I like how Dani that skank pump her breaks about Dani being the cleaning lady. And when she said "I am his girlfriend" I know she needed to pick her face up off the sidewalk!
Author's Response:
I liked "exotic" because some people just think that they are being politically correct and sound like idiots...
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2011 05:35 am
Oh hell, I hope they are not A*******! They don't need that right now!
Author's Response:
hmmm...
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2011 05:15 am
No drama, who knew she would meet Chad's best friend at the club? Who knew David would fall head over heels for her? Evidently Chad and David have a lot in common......DANIELLE! I can not wait to see how this whole situation plays out! It's getting really good now!
Author's Response:
Thanks... this was a FUN chapter to write...
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2011 05:06 am
Bend me, Shake me, Make me, whatever it takes to please you, I'm willing to do, cuz your my dream come true! NUFF SAID!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2011 04:55 am