Reviews For The Clause
Title: Lunch with the big dog

Yeah she is SPRUNG!!!! She is trying hard to pretend she is not.  This is going to be funny!



Author's Response:

Comedy is good right?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 27 2011 04:49 pm

Title: Let's talk about it

Much needed back story....it is good to know that Dani has friends that understand and will support her. It is also good to know tha Chad had a life prior to K&A .....Chad's exgirl will soon know he is no longer interested in anything she has to say. I think in a test of Chad's affections he will pick Dani in a NY minute!



Author's Response:

I know that I love backstory when reading so, I had to do it...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 27 2011 04:25 pm

Title: Twisted Taco's and Emotions

Oh yeah he is smooth, but Mr. Kerrington is not going to be happy about that Kiss he just witnessed. But Miss Dani better know that Chad is really serious about her and he wants a real relationship with her.  Besides he already knows everything he wants and it is in her, she just does know that everything she wants is in him....YET!



Author's Response:

isn't it always this way?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 27 2011 04:13 pm

Title: Monday Mornings are Monday Mornings

Earth to Dani, you have a man right in front of you....all you need to do is open your eyes and allow him into your heart. He knows what you like for breakfast and just how many sugar's you take in your coffee. Hello!



Author's Response:

its like "duh"

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2011 04:18 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Really enjoying the story. Are you going to update it so Dani and Chad have closure?

Update soon please!



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am. I'm formulating the closure now. 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2011 09:35 pm

Title: The Introductions

Good looking cast of characters....seems to be a good series, but I will need to start at the beginning and work my way forward. But right now I give everyone a 10.



Author's Response:

Thanks... I'm glad you gave it a shot

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2011 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 21

updated please



Author's Response:

I did... its a quick update but an update alll the same

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2011 12:05 pm

Title: Chapter 21

update please!



Author's Response:

a quick update was done today... will update more tonight...

Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2011 07:58 am

Title: The Introductions

To dsmoothone: I miss u terribly....please come back! :(((

Author's Response:

Oh thanks. I'm trying to have this finished before year end. Thank you! 

Reviewer: nodrivel99 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2011 02:55 am

Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

OK I just stop reading this story, because I realise that I read the Taylor & Matt storie and never finished it......Hahaaa im doing the reading dance(dont ask cause i dont know how it goes...its my make-up version.

LOL at Matt im with him DAUM!!!!  (in Chris Tucker voice) He go'n knock the dust off that P****!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks...

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 12:57 am

Title: Meet My Brothers

WoW you always leaving these cliffhangers.

Ha! His brothers are a riot. Gald they seem to like her ...I happen to like Carey the most.



Author's Response:

I write like tv episodes in my head... always leaving you looking forward to the next week...

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 12:45 am

Title: Easy like Sunday Morning

Man gotta love his best friend.  ummm to late youre already jealous, but love his reaction on the dance floor..... 



Author's Response:

this chapter was fun to write...

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 12:40 am

Title: Uh-Oh...

Dam!!! Mrs. B****mont sure know how to  kill the mood.

Dam!!!! He woke to Hoether on top of him kissing him.....smdh

Dam!!! Gut punched his A**, I know not intentionally, but still it had to hurt.



Author's Response:

:(

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 12:30 am

Title: Karaoke Night!!!!

Forget about gaining points.....You gained "YAYs" all around



Author's Response:

always important

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 12:14 am

Title: Lunch with the big dog

First hahahaaa @ the last 2 words.

Heather B****mont is gonna be T-rouble...Get over it, "hes just not that into you"

This clasue I see is gonna be an obstacle.

Im lovin it....off to the next chapter



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 12:05 am

Title: Monday Mornings are Monday Mornings

HaHaaa love the "A Bronx Tale" Reference....Yees!!!! Shes the one



Author's Response:

thats one of my favorite movies of all times

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 11:45 pm

Title: Twisted Taco's and Emotions

 love the "A Bronx Tale" gesture...Yees!!! Shes the one



Author's Response:

one of my fave movies

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 09:44 am

Title: Chapter 21

Great Update, can't wait to read more!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks... I FINALLY updated a lil bit today...

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2011 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 21

LOVE IT

Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2011 08:01 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Wow...I am definitely stunned that Kherrington fired Dani.  I am sure he is definitley going to live to regret that one.

 

And Heather is PSYCHO!!  I am glad that Chad is starting to realize that she is mentally off!!

I am so glad to see this story is back and I have loved catching up!!!  Now I am ready for more!!  LOL!



Author's Response:

FINALLY a smaill update today... planning to finish before Christmas...

 

Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 05:28 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Wonderful story, I'm looking forward to all following sequels that you may provide in the future.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 10:53 am

Title: Chapter 21

Mr Kerrrington is on my shit list along with Heather.He is going to regret firing Dani, he needs to get a life and mind his own business.Heather  should have left Chad and Dani alone after that humiliation on TV but that ho is either to stupid or arrogant to leave things alone. Dani needs to tell Chad what happened and stop running all the time.



Author's Response:

that running thing gets on my nerves too, but its a part of her...

Reviewer: jai_03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 21

Oh hell nooo, I hope they put Heather in jail!! She's a menace!! I'm so upset at Mr Kerrington right now for firing my girl. Hope he doesn't regret his decision. Hope she finds something better.

Author's Response:

updated today...

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 21

Nice update. I think Chad should have put Heater in check a long time ago. By acting so soft with her her just incouraged here demented behavior. She lost the right to any respect a long time ago and if I was Dani I would think Chad had something going on with Heather too because he has not done anything to really prove that it is completely over with her.  Heather is unbalanced and needs an asskicking along with a little time in a quite hospital. And Mr. Kerrington is a little loco also. Why did he fire Dani again? He needs some time in the same hospital with Heather.



Author's Response:

I love this review...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 21

Ok Heather is now offically become DANGEROUS, she is blaming everyone for her misery but HERSELF, I hope that Dani is CAREFUL.

I also offically don't like Mr Kerrington, he has no right interfering in the personal lives if his employee's and "suspending" Dani is going to BITE him in the ASS... he needs to just run his business and GET A LIFE.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 01:53 am



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