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Title: Chapter 4

That's it?! I hope you come back to complete this story. I would really like to see where this story takes them.

 Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2014 01:23 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Loving it....please keep going. :)

 Reviewer: Lovablebbw82 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 06:06 am
Title: Chapter 4

I am so loving the beginning of Aisha's and Elton's romance.  They are so sexy, cute and funny together.  I really like the way they got to know each other before the first date.

 Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 01:29 am
Title: Chapter 4

I'm so glad your back. I really like Aisha and Elton as a couple.

 Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 09:02 am
Title: Chapter 4

I am so glad to see this story Sade, I thought that you had forgotten about us.  Elton has stacked his claim and Aisha has acquiesed giggling all the way.  Please don't make us wait for updates of your other stories.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 07:01 am
Title: Chapter 4

This is a sweet story. 

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 05:24 am
Title: Chapter 3

MORE!!!!!! I want to see where this goes and more character development.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: Lovelost Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 02:18 am
Title: Chapter 3

I'm glad you're back. Nice chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 04:53 am
Title: Chapter 3

Great story and love the chemistry. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 3

Loving this story.  Like the idea of them getting to know each other, prior to jumping into bed.

She does have a few issues it appears...but, I think they will work it out.

Thanks...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 04:31 am
Title: Chapter 3

They are so sweet together. He is the perfect gentleman, right now. I like that they did not rush into the relationship.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 11:03 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Awesome first date! I love how intuitive Elton is with things. He comes off as easy and unpretentious to be with. A'isha needs that in a partner. She's hard enough on herself, and with Elton being a plastic surgeon, she's probably doubled down on that. So its nice that he takes the pressure off that way.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 08:02 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I like this story alot!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 06:51 pm
Title: Chapter 3

What a sweet and romantic kiss and their watching the Avengers. Now that's my kind is date!  Sade you have made so happy two update from you dare I hope for another?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 04:34 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Oh I love this story already. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 02:34 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Elton is a keeper. A'isha and Elton are perfect together.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 11:52 am
Title: Chapter 3

YES, YES, YES - FINALLY!!! oh, i'm so glad that you are back and that you've updated this story, one of my favs by you - keep them coming, lool! thanks for the update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 10:50 am
Title: Chapter 2

Good start...looks like it has not been updated in a while. I'd like to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 07:54 am
Title: Chapter 2

You are a great auther. Thanks for the stories

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: jaymonia Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 12:01 am
Title: Chapter 2

I love it they are so sweet and playful with each other and they take the stress of their work days off each others shoulder @ least for a time.

Great work more please.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2011 10:20 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Really loving your story. Nice to see Elton attracted to a bbw! I also like that they are taking their time in getting to know each other. More chapters and soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 15 2011 03:04 am
Title: Chapter 2

They are to hot for each other and when they do the do it will be H-O-T!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 05:25 am
Title: Chapter 2

Hello Sade,

Delightful start.  Looking forward to more of Elton and A'isha's story.

A



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 03:25 am
Title: Chapter 2

Me likey!! More please.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 02:56 am
Title: Chapter 2

Nice



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

 Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 01:28 am


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