Title: Chapter 30

ITM, you should know that I'm glad you updated *hell, I bugged you enough about it :)*

Kenny is not yet ready to invite her past into her current just yet. 

 I really loved this chapter. One, because it's been soooo long since my hit and I'm a slut for this story. Two, but more important, is that this is a tale that I connect to on a very emotional level. The characters seem like real people and I'm totally invested in what happens to them.

My heart hurts for DeLeon and the heartbreak that he sees in his future and is so afraid of. I'm not sure how he will handle it if she goes back to her life. Maybe, she does need to do that to make sure that he is what she wants. Will he do something to make her do that, since he's convinced that she wants to go back to her life? I can see him doing it, thinking it's best for her.

He made slow, sweet love to her as if it was the very last time he'd ever have the chance.

This, I fear, is what will happen very soon. *sigh*

I'm off to read this again. I read it in haste the first time. It's like you've been in the desert for a long time without water and when you do get some, you greedily gulp it down. And once you sated that initial thirst, you then can sip slowly and get your fill. That is what this chapter is for me. So, off I go, to sip slowly.

Thanks so much for the update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 05:28 pm

Title: Intro

Great chapter!!!

I agree with pmgayles.. Why hasn't Kendra returned any of her messages?? She should have at least returned Prince's call. I'm sure she heard how frantic and worried he and his family are about her and her well being.. If she wants to stay in West Virgina with Deleon by all means stay but be considerate of Prince and his family feelings. I understand she maybe a bit confused but bite the bullet and call Prince.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 04:58 pm

Title: Chapter 30

is DeLeon trying to push Kenya away. That woman loves you, let her and admit that you love her as well.  Why hasn"t she returned any of the phone calls.  She can stay where she, but she can let the people that care about know that she's okay.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 04:22 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 01:00 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Thanks for the update.  I was LOL at Dax.  I think that he is so cute.  Still team Prince. Especially since he punched Chase.  Go Prince.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 12:33 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I vote for Prince.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 11:59 am

Title: Chapter 12

Oh hell no the town ho and her drunk ass mother are going to make Kendra leave because they think that Deleon is interested in her.  See Pa's words are coming to fruition this is what happens when one sleeps with trash.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 11:48 am

Title: Chapter 11

LOL thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 11:29 am

Title: Chapter 10

Poor Trixie...what I don't understand is why the woman in this town allow Deleon to treat them like that.  It seems that they don't have any respect for themselves.

I was LOL at Dax and his conversation with his grandfather.  Dax is feeling real good.  Go Dax.  I hope that he will find a real love and it isn't Kendra.

Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 10:20 am

Title: Chapter 9

So is there hope for Prince?  Kendra and Prince...I was wondering why they never got together.  It seems that they are really close and as Prince's mother stated they acted liked a married couple.  Maybe once she is found they will get together.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 10:03 am

Title: Chapter 8

I like Prince's parents.  I so like Dax and I would prefer that Kendra be attracted to him than his crazy brother Deleon.  However, I can't see her living in this backwards town.  I enjoy reading how the boys grandfather is so tough with them but also he seems very kind and genuine in his affections for his grandsons.  Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 09:44 am

Title: Chapter 30

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!1an update thanks very much........

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 08:14 am

Title: Chapter 1

good chapter

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 07:49 am

Title: Intro

Thank you for updating my favorite story on this site; I really missed it.

Good job - update again soon, please!

Reviewer: katie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 07:27 am

Title: Chapter 30

Oh oh, Kenny running scared but she needs to answer her phone and deal with whatever happens.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 07:23 am

Title: Intro

This is gonna be good!

 



Author's Response: Lmao! you are the best with these!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 07:09 am

Title: Intro

I love this story and I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: jessie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2011 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 20

Wowwww. Drama. And personally I agree with you about not putting up pictures of the cast, a lot of the time actors/actresses don't really match the image in my head [fine as he is. Have you seen the pictures of him for Thor? I'm not feeling the beard but the body is on point].

And can I say wow. Can I have me a man who knows how to make homemade icecream and has a body like DeLeon's. Wow. 

 He can keep his caveman attitude though, props to Kendra for walking out, man is acting like she doesn't have a mind of her own. 

 

Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2011 07:34 am

Title: Chapter 19

Seriously. My stomach is all twisty. I mean, DeLeon is too cute for my LIFE. Although I do wonder why Kendra mentioned the Sheriff again. Did I miss a chapter? Did she see him again after the first time? I'd think she'd brush him off as a random and keep it moving.

 

I have to say, I don't like the Prince intervals, LOL. I like him fine but everytime it pops up it pulls me into a seperate mode and I like being with Kendra and DeLeon and his family.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2011 01:32 am

Title: Chapter 18

You think you can lull me into a false sense of security with these cute scenes but I won't be fooled! I WON'T.

 

My stomach is all twisted up knowing some shit is going to go dad with that Cat bitch and her mama and now the Sheriff's wife. The Sheriff's wife I can kinda understand though, his ass needs a swift kick, but still. Oh lawd. The drama. 

Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2011 01:02 am

Title: Chapter 17

Wowwwwwwww, honestly, I keep going back to the fact that Cat has a man and children at home. And DeLeon is dumbbbb cause if you had to get yourself checked after sleeping with her, keep it in your pants. her personality detracts from any kinda sexiness she might have.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2011 11:41 pm

Title: Chapter 16

I don't know, Dax kisses her and it's just sweet. DeLeon snarls at her and she's have 'me' time in the bathroom thinking of him.

Dax doesn't stand a chance, sweet as he is. She's predisposed to liking assholes if Chase is any indication, and DeLeon might be an asshole but he's upfront about it. 

It shall be interesting. 

Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2011 11:03 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I'm hoping Prince goes ape all over Chase's dumb selfish ass. And LOL @ Dax, bout he can't feel his feet.

And he's 25?!?! Were we given his age at some point because I really thought he was fresh out of highschool, 21 at the oldest.

I have to say,I think Dax is losing to DeLeon without your readers commenting on it if her moment in the bathroom is anything to go by.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2011 06:10 am

Title: Chapter 13

I think I like DeLeon just because he has had more interaction with Kendra and Dax is coming off of a pretty bad break up that involved his friend sleeping with his girlfriend. You get a hot woman in the mix that makes him feel like superman and he's not really thinking straight.

 DeLeon on the other hand, might be an asshole and Lord knows he has enough issues on his own but there's just something about him that I really like. 

 And LOL at her pinching him. I really like her spunk, especially since DeLeon is for all rights and purposes a scary dude. 

Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2011 06:02 am

Title: Chapter 10

Ooh, Trixie. NEVER FALL FOR A MANWHORE/BADBOY. It only ends in heartbreak. Even if he is majorly appealing, if you haven't tamed him yet, you won't be able too.

 

Cat has no damn shame. Wowwwww. Leaves her kids and man at home to yell after someone who doesn't want her. Wow.

[If Pa hadn't been still drunk and eighty-six, he'd've broken the cocky sumbitch's hand just on principle alone.]

LOL!!!

And Dax is feeling nice even though nothing happened, hahah. 

Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2011 04:57 am



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