[Damn, I hope this shirt don't stink.]

XD, how cute is that?! he goes from being all jealous one moment to worrying about his shirt. He's too cute. 

 I don't know who I'm rooting for to be honest since none of them have truly interacted with her. They find her physically attractive yes, but I'm thinking part of that is the allure of something new and shiny dropping into their laps. 

 Once they get to know her as a person even if she has to relearn who she is, then we shall see. Though i'll be honest and say I'm currently leaning towards DeLeon. I love me some bad boys who don't mind random violence, I won't  lie, LOL.

Wowwwwww, well that just made the whole lone black woman down south seem less like it might be an amusing time while she gets her memory back to the uncomfortableness that she's sure to experience by other people.

 And her attacking someone who was *hurt* and calling her names because the man who she's fucking but doesn't actually want her decided to take her to the clinic shows that she needs to be by herself. If she cared about her kids she'd marry their daddy and keep her legs shut, worthless man or not since she won't be getting any better. 

And what is up with the doctor?I wonder if his irritation is about having to treat her or the fact that the Halpern males won't leave, lol. 

Although Cathleen shows that not everyone is going to be accepting of Kendra I do find it interesting that the four males that have seen her so far, five if you count the doctor, seem to find her so attractive. 

 I'd think they would look at her more like an oddity. I went to three different highschools and I have to say that people, even non-racist people would add on 'for a white/black/asian/etc. guy/girl' if they were saying they found someone out of their race/skintone attractive. 

It did stop a bit the older we got but in a town where they actually put a burning cross on someone's lawn I'd expect one of the males to not find her attractive just because she's not what they're used too. 

 But then again, all white doesn't mean they haven't seen black people before and attractive is attractive, and someone people find the unknown more beautiful then what they're used too. 

And it says a lot about Chase that to him she wasn't up to his caliber while over here she's viewed as being gorgeous. 

Personally I love a slow build up, the sexual tension makes the actual sexy time that much better. And this may be a bit random but do you have an account on fictionpress as well?

 Anyway, on to the actual story:

 [When he'd first come across him laying in the middle of the goddamn road with some black woman stretched out beside him and bleeding from the skull like a stuck pig, DeLeon was sure he was going to have to feed a stranger to their pigs and blackmail the living shit out of Dax the next morning.] 

 LMAOOO! What a way to introduce us to DeLeon, hahah, on one hand he's willing to dispose of someone's body to protect his brother, on the other hand he has no intention of doing it out of the goodness of his heart, haha. 

I love that you set up DeLeon as being loyal but mean in the first paragraph before the Doctor thinks it. I am also super jealous that so far we've seen everything frmo three POVs, the voices are all distinct and yet still work with the story and don't feel jarring. 

 LOL at the way they interact with each other, love it and LMAO at Pa putting on cologne and putting his teeth in, hahahaha.

Although this is a really short opening so I don't have a lot to judge yet, I have to say I am liking the voice. Although it's in third person it doesn't feel stiff.

I really, really, like this scene/line: 

"giggling a little to herself, she headbanged a little and pumped her fist out the window, yelling out a war-cry.

And scared the shit out of a deer."

It made me grin although, if she scared the deer, why would it stay standing in the road taring at her? Wouldn't it try and jump out of the way once she yelled even it had been mesmerized by her car lights?

Either way, really interesting opening. 

Love your story. i think that maybe kendra should end up with Prince and Deleon.  They seem good together.

My sister read all the chapters and now she having a fit. Excellent storyline. Please update soon.

Author's Response: i will! thanks for referring my story. lol. i hope to return to it soon. Farewell's been taking over.

Well all the extremely racist name calling that came out of the filthy soul of Cathleen Bronson certainly brought the reality to Kendra's situation of being down there in that small Southern town.

Cathleen is low class trash and a prostitute; her only sense of worth is based on being White and her sexual attractiveness to men. 

DeLeon is a priority catch she desires.  For Deleon of all men to respect and show appreciation of Kendra's beauty, a Black woman; this topples Cathleen's delusion of grandeur so she responds like a fearful, snarling rabid dog..... 

It will be very interesting to see how Kendra handles the racism of Cathleen and others like her as it comes to her.

I suspected she might have some amnesia from that head injury but, I hope it will be temporary!

I'm starting to get a small feeling of like for grandpa and his two sons, they've been gents and nicely caring about her, so far! 

Well, sounds like she is lost in the deep South, a town that's only seen one Black person and ran them out with cross burning, so I really wonder how this is going to turn out for her.  I really would not want to be in her shoes!!

 OMG IT!!!  I just found this story here (and I am a stalker from TST) and just read it in one sitting.  You have got to update it ASAP!!!!! Please, please, please!!!!!  I love DeLeon, am glad Dax is settled (with someone else) but WTF!!!  Prince....in love....now!!!!!

And WTH with the creepy sheriff????? 

I hope Donald don't do anything stupid, and why did Deleon lie about where he was going. Umm, but I stil prefer her with Deleon than Prince.

Whaaa?! I've missed two chapters! Glad to see this story back and I can't wait to see what happens :D

Excellent story, She should be with Prince not a uneducated lowlife.