Just reread the last chapter too. Although I'm rooting for Rory and Jason, I would love for Rory to meet Lucky. I get the feeling those two would become the best of friends even inseparable. Absentee dad's dead or hospitalized mums. Siblings....irritating Elizabeth pissing them both off. I'm sure Jason would be able to hook Rory up with a job singing and/or bartending at Luke's club. Luke's club was popular then. That would be cool. I could see Jason's hackles rising at the Lucky/Rory thing...but I can see it being totally platonic on the inside; just for outsiders it looks anything but platonic. Hey if you do introduce Lucky. Bring a best friend of Rory's up to Port Charles for him because he deserves better than Elizabeth.Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2012 01:20 am
I see Carly is still Carly lol don't blame her don't like liz my self either lol. Oh jason you know you feel that girl big time and it scares the crap out of him because she sonny daughter. Glad to see the story was update and it understand able about the updates. Life happens you get busy or have writers block and when it update I looked foward to reading it. thank for the update.Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2012 04:36 pm
Glad you're back with this story, and great update!Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 17 2012 02:11 pm
I cant stand Elizabeth or Carly. Between the both of them they have slept with allmost everyman in town. Michael had better get over himself because sonny may have more kids he doesnt know about coming out of the woodwork now. Glad too see that rory has a friend in Lulu and that Mike his her grandfather. I think that Mike either met Rory's mom or she looks like sonny's mother. Cant wait to read the next chapter.Reviewer: jai_03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 07 2011 02:14 am
I loved this story when I first read it months ago. I thought you would never update it again. I'm glad to see my thoughts were wrong. This was a fun read and I loved Aurora's interaction with Jake. Hopefully Jake won't die in this story...that would kill me. But I find Elizabeth to be an unfit mum moe than anything. This is definitely a great read. I can't wait until things start progressing further for Rory and Jason. They're a super cute couple.
I have a question. Does Rory identify herself as a Black (multicultural) woman? Just wondering? And secondly, you don't have to do this but I find it slightly irritating...the centered text. Is it possible to just leave it normal with indentention when needed?
I can't wait for the future update.Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2011 01:01 pm
I'm happy you updated this story! I was quite enjoying it and am looking forward to seeing how things unfold.Reviewer: zmgaillard Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 04 2011 09:12 pm
Welcome back. Hope that all is well. I LOVE this story. I look for it often thank you for yet another great update.Reviewer: Roslyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 04 2011 07:33 pm
FINALLY!!!!!!!! I am so glad that you have updated this story. I don't like Elizabeth. I am glad to see Rory and Jake bond. I hate that you left us hanging. I am ready for Jason to tell Elizabeth that he does not love her. Hopefully Jason will catch Lucky and Elizabeth. Please update again!!!!!Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 04 2011 02:40 am
I am really enjoying this story and I hope you update it soon. The pairing is great and I'd like to see some moments betweent them. Maybe Jason and Aurora sharing a sofa together sleeping (platonic) maybe after watching a movie together. I'd also like to see Aurora taking care of Jake maybe....that would be a cool thing to have in the story. No kiss or sex, but friendship for a few more chapters. I like the way this relationship is progressing. I hope you update it soon.Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2011 03:42 am
Well, this is a pretty decent story, but unfortunately I will probably not continue to read. I'm a Carly fan and her portrayal in this story really sucks. Overall this is a good effort especially for your first time posting. I'll certainly keep my eyes out if you post another story.
Author's Response: Hey sorry this is sooo late. I really do hope u continue to read this. I have stated before in my other responses that I do like Carly. Her Sam and Maxie are my fave GH female characters. I LOVE Carly. But we all know that Carly is a little selfish. She feel she HAS to be the center of Sonny and Jason's attention. Look what she's doing to Brenda. She claim she doesn't want Sonny anymore, yet she is trying to dig up dirt on Ms. Barrett to come between her and Sonny. Me personally, I think I got Carly's character prettyy close. And if you continue to read, I have a feeling that Carly won't be this way for long. Thanks for the review! -Rina Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 02 2010 10:23 pm
I'm enjoying the story so far but was left scratching my head as to why in the world Sonny would have an Itallian accent. His is most often linked to his Latina mother and speaks Spanish on the show and Mike is more Italian-American than straight Italian and Sonny most closely associates with his Cuban/Latin herritage and not Italy. That just kind of threw me because I'm familiar with GH.Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 02 2010 10:05 pm
Great chapter! Can't wait for more! Update soon!Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 29 2010 12:18 pm
trust me when jason find her i dont think he wanted to talked wink wink lol. glad they are getting close and hope liz get run over by a bus lol. thanks for the updated and gl with both you jobs and hope you had great thanksgiving.Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2010 09:40 am
How is it that Manny was able to get pictures of Rory getting out of the shower?
Did he put in mini cameras when she was alone?
Please let Sonny and Jason find them. Love this story, just wish the updates were more frequent and chapters longer. Thanks for sharing your story.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 29 2010 06:33 am
I just found this story and I am loving it. I thought you should know I haven't read any daytime fic but this one caught my attention.
I really like it.
psycho Manny is back. He even has a thing for Sonny's daughter.
Same old Carly and she even has Micheal on her side, but I think his problem is he is not the oldest Sonny child anymore.
I think I like the ideal of Jason and Rory together. I have always saw Elizibeth as sneaky. Playing Jason and Lucky against each other. Also Lucky and Niccolas.Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2010 04:12 am