Why doesn't he just tell her. Starting off married life with such a huge secret can't be good for their marriage. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 03:58 am
Thanks for the pics. Ellie and Nicky look like teenagers.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 03:51 am
I wonder if once Ellie finds out what the family business is will she run from Nicky? Why is she so insecure in her relationship with Nicky? Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 03:50 am
I think that I started this story but didn't finish it. Good start. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 03:37 am
I love this story, so glad you updated. I can't wait to see how his mom reacts. Kinda surprised that he ended up marrying Juliette so I'm sure that's going to be like dropping a bomb. Please update soon.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2012 10:07 pm
Thanks for the update, I can't wait to see how the family reacts.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2012 05:37 am
I am still wondering why Nick that ho Julliete in the first place, so he just needs to divorce that ho and work on trying to rebuild his relationship with Ellie. Ellie is really not going to allow Nick to get any closer. Is it just about the fact that I didn't tell what his families business was? Or is it more about the fact that he didn't want the the baby that she lost when he got arrested?
I am trying to understand what she minds when she says that they aren't good for each other. Ellie you still love Nick and Nick still loves you even though he married that trick. Please let them work it out, I want Nick to leave the family business or least make it legit.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 11:09 pm
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 10:09 pm
I've missed this story so much!!
As for Nick, what's really changed? Now all of a sudden he's all in? After marrying that skank Juliette? She's just going to make things that much worse. Just not getting his sudden change in attitude.
Great!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 06:57 pm
That confrontation with Delia should not have been nearly as calm. She went around sticking her nose in other people's business and making decisions for people who are adults. I wouldn't trust her at all, and I certainly wouldn't have been inviting her closer into my life by having her be the godmother and plan he shower.
Reviewer: Angry for her Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 04:23 pm
What a mess! TRhat's what Nick gets for jumping into another relationship so fast. I have a feeling inviting Juliette to the baby shower isn't a good idea. What in the world is Ellie thinking? Both chapters 22 and 23 are very good!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 04:21 pm
more soon good update
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 01:19 pm
Great chapter I'm so happy you finally updated.
Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 09:58 am
wait, what! it was just getting interesting. nice update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 08:12 am
I AM TO EXCITED TO SEE ANOTHER CHAPTER. I keep reading it over and over waiting to see more chapters. I am so glad that Ellie is not mad at Delia and understood she was trying to help Ellie. I love to Nick beg. I wonder how everyone is going to act finding out about Ellie and the baby.
I know Juliette is crazy and so is her father and we know they would hurt Ellie cause they know Nick loves her. I have a feeling that Juliette or her dad will try and hurt Ellie and the baby. Please please please please please update and keep updating if you need ideas please email me at foxychocolate4@ymail.com, I will help in any way. Keep up the good work GREAT CHAPTER, UPDATE ASAP PLEASE
Date: July 23 2012 08:02 am
It sucks when an individual marry somebody just to please their family. I can't wait to find out what the family will think once they find out a baby is on the way. I can imagine they all will blame Ellie. Hopefully Nick won't be a punk and stand up for Ellie and take some blame.
Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 07:53 am
I don't know how I missed this update. I am a bit shocked at the turn of events in this chapter. I didn't expect Nick to marry Juliette; he doesn't even love her. The way he yelled at Elle was just...mean...but typical Nick I guess. I liked those two together but sometimes I feel that he doesn't deserve her. Then again he married Juliette so...
I found the last bit interesting. So NOW he's happy? Ugh. I still say the friend was wrong for alerting him and he didn't have to tell Nina. I think Elle should have told him in her own time. Sucks now though that he's already married to someone else.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2012 07:42 am
Oh hell, what a horrible turn of events! Nick married? Damn, what now? Please update?!
Reviewer: mjfan Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2012 09:17 pm
upload soon cuz this story is amazing
Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 02 2012 06:56 pm
I'm disappointed in Nick. Didn't take him long to marry Juliette and then has the nerve to be demanding to Ellie. Delia should have minded her own business. Also what mother slaps her daughter in the face? Ellie is grown and her parents should have known Ellie isn't that type of person.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 06:39 pm
I'm still trying to figure out what direction your taking this story. Especially with Nick and Ellie's cat and dog relationship. Why did Nick got married? It just doesn't add up. He can;t stand Juliette, he treats her like crap, he doesn't love her, but still it turns out he married her. It just doesn't make sense at all. Especially for a character who claims that can have every woman that he wants. But still he gets married to Juliette? Absolutely ridiculous. Wasn't there any other woman that you could have paired him up with. Its just so cliche that the main guys always gets involved with an money hungry and jealous psycho girlfriend. Why not a nice and perfect girl so that Ellie could have some real competition.
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 02:49 am
Elle little friend needs to be beat in the head. It was totally not her place to tell Elle's business. And now she has brought all the foolishness into this baby's life. Cause Lord knows Juliette is not gonna be nice about this situation.
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 02:53 pm
OK...so I'm new to this story and just spent the last couple of hours reading the entire thing. It's different, but I kinda like the fact that you jumped in two years after they are an established, engaged couple. However, that also brings with it its own set of issues as well. Being that backstory that's helpful at times to help over the rough patches when the character(s) is being difficult. Its the only thing I can come up with to explain why these two are/were even together.
Ellie: She confused me some. It obviously takes a strong personality to deal with a moody, introverted, quiet, undemonstrative person like Nick. She showed she could be that woman when fighting with him. She never backed down. Thats why I was surprised at her behavior with his family. Even though Nick totally ambushed her, I expected Ellie to show some true grit with them. Especially his mother; given the reason being was that she was black and Marta thought that that wasn't good enough. Also, in turn, with Bianca, and her nasty ass attitude. Instead, she is in the bathroom hiding and crying. Again, I know she was ambushed, but never let them see you cry. Save that for later. I was just wondering why she wasn't more mad about them not liking her because of her color, rather than sad by it, given she was already primed by Nick's last minute confession in the car. I was thinking good, that anger will help her through the dinner if she's already pissed about it.
Also, later on, the issue of Marta bringing her to Nick's aid. It kind of annoyed me that Ellie kept acting as if she had absolutely no control over anything Marta was doing. And that Marta treated her so high-handedly. Marta only cared about Nick's well-being, and if tolerating Ellie was what she had to do, then so be it. I was offended for Ellie! It was like Ellie still wasn't good enough, but she would hold her nose and keep it moving. Nevermind what Ellie might have had going on in her life since seeing Nick. Then Bianca calling her a bitch and brushing up against her like that. That warranted her saying something to the little snot! Not act all scared by it. She was invited! What she expected Juliette to do in all of that is still a mystery to me.
Then, that whole blow-up at Nick's house. It wasn't like she was there on vacation, which is how she kind of came off. She came to say her peace, hear his, and get the hell on up out of there. Because, really, nothing had changed. Now, she's pregnant, Nick is told and shows up and suddenly he's over the moon about a baby? Since when? A year before he was saying anything but that. If him being married to Juliette and finding Ellie being pregnant doesn't mess up his plans, I don't know what would. His reaction doesn't add up. I don't know how I feel about Ellie's reaction either. And Lord only knows what kind of mess will come out of Marta's mouth about this. Probably something like how Ellie planned this and how she finally got her son back, with the "proper" type of wife so don't mess it up crap.
Oh, her family's reaction surprised me. Its almost like, except for Delia, she completely on her own with them. I had the impression they were alot closer than that.
You've got some interesting characters here. They all completely do the opposite of what you would think. I can't wait to see what happens next. Welcome to the family, indeed.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 09:31 am
LOVEEEEEEE IT!!! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 03:22 am