Title: Chapter 14

nice update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 07:54 am

Title: Prologue

I do understand where Ellie is coming from. I have mix feelings about Delia's involvement right now. I don't think she is right about Calling him but I do think that she should just try to convince Ellie. 

 

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Rapture Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 06:39 am

Title: Chapter 21

Wow, things are getting serious!

I'm so happy Delia called Nick. He has a right to know about the baby. I know Ellie is trying to protect herself from Nick but she has to think about more than just herself.

Thanks for the speedy update! Keep them coming!

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 05:40 am

Title: Chapter 21

Delia better not be on the phone with Nick, that is sooooo not the right thing for a friend to do

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 21

Ellie is being selfish. She is not doing whats best for her and her baby. No, she is doing whats best for her. I hate it when woman think they have the right to make choices alone just because they are the one carrying the baby. Well it takes two to tango. So Nick has every right to know that Ellie is pregnant with HIS CHILD!!!!! Let him make the choice whether he wants to be in the child's life or not. Ellie should not make the decision for him. I know that Nick is an total ass whole and that he doesn't want a child out of wedlock and all that. But this still doesn't give Ellie the right to not tell him that he is going to be a father. If he doesn't want to be in the child's life, FINE, but let him decide that. Not Ellie. Its not fair to him and its not fair to Isaac either. As I child I would want to know who my father is. And I would be very pissed with my mother if he didn't at least give my father a chance to choose whether he wants to be in my life or not. That's a decision he and only he has to make. Not my mother.

Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 05:08 am

Title: Chapter 21

thanks for updating yu are di bomb. Delia is so spilling d beans isnt she? Cant wait to hear nick's reaction.....:)!!!!!

Reviewer: klarybelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 04:40 am

Title: Chapter 21

Aw, Ellie.  Love her strength/resilience.  Funny how the birth control (before) and now Plan B didn't work.  I really think her friend Delia is wrong.   She should NOT be calling Nick and telling him. If Ellie wants him to know she WILL tell him. It's quite obvious that Nick doesn't want kids out of wedlock...he said as much even when they were having "goodbye sex."  Ellie is protecting her heart and her baby and given how Nick has reacted in the past I don't really blame her.  However, raising a baby alone is HARD.  I just think that Delia could have just called Nick and told him that he should call/check up on Ellie instead of just outright telling him.  If he calls, let Ellie decide whether to tell him or not...if he just shows up out of the blue well the cat is out the bag. Just saying.  I don't like meddling friends...good intentions or not.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter I hate how her family is acting but I am glad she has Delia to help her and be a true friend. I cannot wait until he finds out. I hope he finds out before his enemies find out and the nut

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 03:51 am

Title: Chapter 21

Ahhh i can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 21

Love it! Can't wait to read how he reacts to the news.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 03:37 am

Title: Prologue

you better put another chapter up soon for leaving us hanging all this time... keep it coming, i like it

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 21

Loved it!!

Reviewer: Tia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 03:07 am

Title: Chapter 21

Wowsers! Whats going to happen when Nick sees Ellie? Even though Nick has a right to know, I would be mad as hell at Delia for telling. Ellie would tell, I think, lol. Anyway, I still think she is doing the right thing. Boy oh boy. I cannot wait for more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 03:06 am

Title: Chapter 21

Damn, girl! You are the freaking bomb. I love these updates. Now let me go back and finish reading. I had to post a reveiw before I did because I could not believe we had another update.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 14

Well, this chapter made me like Ellie and Nick again. Nick, how could he be such an asshole one moment and the next a sweetheart?  Yeah, you're vulnerable Nick, I see you, lol.   I think the love scene was nice.  However, the time to worry about his sexual history and condom usage should have happened before you know....but honestly since this was a fictional love scene it probably would have messed the up the flow (depending on how it was written).

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 01:47 am

Title: Chapter 14

Excellent.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 01:38 am

Title: Chapter 14

You did good on the sex scene. Not a lot of detail but enough for us to get the picture, lol!

I'm not too sure Ellie won't see Nick again. I don't think he will just let her go like that without keeping tabs on her.

There will be a little Ellie and Nick coming soon!

Thanks for the update.

 

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 01:03 am

Title: Chapter 14

I have been following this story, totally love it am glad you updated!!! am crossing my fingers that you're gonna update more often.

Reviewer: klarybelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 11:01 pm

Title: Chapter 14

For your 1st time writing a love scene you did very well. I wish those 2 would stop being stubborn and be with each. I excited for the next chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 10:10 pm

Title: Chapter 14

OMG she is totally gonna get pregnant after that "goodbye sex" lol Ellie is a trip. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: MEgan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 10:09 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I hope that she gets preggars, I can't wait for Nicky to find out. I want my Hea and they are messing it up! Nicky get rid of psycho chick zjuliette she is not good enough for you Nicky! Smoking sex scenc Philloa!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Sad, but good. They both need time to themselves. It would be nice if they ran into each other maybe a year or two from now and Nick sees Ellie somewhere and she does not see him. It would be a trip if he saw Elle looking beautiful with a one or two year baby with her. Wouldn't that be some stuff, lol! Keep it coming, Philipa!!!!

Reviewer: Truth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 09:07 pm

Title: Chapter 14

This is it?

Are they really over?

I realy couldnt take it if they were fully over, no happy every after? so sad!

I feel really sorry for Ellie because he was sooooo rude to her...

UPDATE SOON< SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

UPDATE I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

Reviewer: tisha1234 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 05:32 pm

Title: Chapter 14

nicely done considering there relationship.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 01:41 pm

Title: Chapter 14

this was such a great chapter! so sad though. i thought the sex scene was good! can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 12:04 pm



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