Title: Chapter 14

perfect i cnt wait for the next chapter will hr,e figth for her uope he doeslove to see what happens nextxxx

Reviewer: liz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 11:39 am

Title: Chapter 14

Yes this is what I am talking about I am so glad she went to a hotel. I am also glad he came to his senses. This was a great chapter I LOVE HOW THEY MADE LOVE BEFORE SHE LEFT AND I AM SO GLAD THEY ADMITTED THEIR FEELINGS TO EACH OTHER. I want her to get pregnant and then maybe he finds out or someone tries to hurt her or something but can we get more chapters please. Great job

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 10:29 am

Title: Chapter 14

The chapter was great...something tells me that ellie is going to forget to get the plan b pill and get pregnant. This wasn't the last time her and nick will see each other.

Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 10:00 am

Title: Chapter 13

Whoa Nick is really bipolar sometimes. So happy you put up a new chapter and can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 06:37 am

Title: Chapter 13

i love it glad ur bk one of my favs ols update very soon longer chapter

Reviewer: liz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 02:57 am

Title: Prologue

Nick is an asshole. Honestly, I don't see this being "happily ever after."

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 13

its about time, thank you sooooooooo much for this UPDATE I needed it          

Nick can be such an asshole sometimes, he should not be forgiven at all

PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I realy can't wait, you have left us hanging long enough

Reviewer: tisha1234 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 05:53 pm

Title: Chapter 13

man, nick is acting like a real ass  - he doesn't need to throw harsh words at Ellie because despite everything she came back for him. sorry doesn't cut and maybe it's time for Ellie to let that ass *cough* i mean Nick go and be with somebody who will appreciate her kind heart because Nick is just blaaaah, lol!

thanks for the update! without a doubt you and youe story have been missed! lok to see more soon XD

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 01:45 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I hope they get back together! Ellie and Nick are meant to be! 

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 10:31 am

Title: Chapter 13

Nic and Elle need to find their way back to each other, that's the only way that they both will find happiness... Time heals all wounds right and I know that Nic can be a dick head but he truly does love her and Elle needs to take Juliette out the picture

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 10:11 am

Title: Prologue

If I was Ellie I would book a room their do some sightseeing and even bring Delia down. Even if Ellie is going to help Nick Ellie can't lose herself. I believe Nick needs someone that stands up for herself and works and does not need any money from him. If you are going to have Ellie their it would be nice if she got a part time job. So even if she is their to help him she is not losing herselfand and maybe meet a cute someone and show Nick what he is missing and that she does not need his money that she can have a life outside of being their. I really think she should be in hotel cause you made a point if the tables were turned she would not want that nut their. Please more I love your story no matter what anyone says keep it coming no matter what you write

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 10:04 am

Title: Chapter 13

I think it is nice that Ellie is trying to help. I hate how he talks to her but I see why Marta asked Ellie to come. Everyone babies Nick and gives him what he wants even Juliette she does not care. I see Ellie as strong you have to be to deal with that family.

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 08:53 am

Title: Chapter 13

Umm...Nick is such a fucking abusive piece of shit.  There is no doubt his words, his actions, everything, was absolutely and completely emotionally abusive.  If Ellie has one ounce of self respect left, she will leave that afternoon and let him come back to her, humbled and begging for forgiveness.  Like, really, I can't imagine any other scenario that would make Nick a likeable and worthy protagonist - two things he needs to undoubtedly be before Ellie considers taking him back.

We haven't ever really seen Nick be good to her or anyone else for that matter.  He's an all around flaming piece of shit.  If he doesn't redeem himself soon, I'm going to lose what little respect I have for Ellie as a heroine after she put herself through that absurd evening of sexile and ludicrous breakfast.

Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 13

Will Nick ever learn? Ellie needs to leave him. Do you plan to redeem Nick. His personality is horrible. He can't go through life treating people like garbage then throwing out "I'm sorry" whenever he wants. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 06:43 am

Title: Chapter 13

can she please go home and keep some dignity....he needs work and she can't fix him she should stop trying to play God...move on..yes it's hard but he doesn't even respect her..nick needs to grow up and take responsibility for his actions....

Reviewer: nala88 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 06:36 am

Title: Chapter 13

Glad you're back, I've missed this story! 

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 06:28 am

Title: Chapter 13

Glad you wrote another chapter. I''m sad that Ellie and Nick are still on the outs. Please write another one soon!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 06:10 am

Title: Chapter 13

Sorry doesn't cut it, Nico! Great update..

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 05:58 am

Title: Chapter 13

I really don't know how I feel about this chapter. It was kind of confusing also. In the last chapter Juliette broke up with Nick. And now all of a sudden they are back together. Why is Nick doing this actually? Why is he even with Juliette. Some things just don't make any sense. And the fact that we don't get to read more often about Nick's thoughts make it more difficult to understand him and this story.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 13

Please kill off Juliette, I really hate that ho.  Nick don't want you, you're his consolation prize.  Since Nicky can't have Ellie he'll have sex with you.  Juliette Nick will never marry you, you are just his piece!!!  I am so glad to see this story back.  Don't make hus wait to long for another uppdate!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 05:44 am

Title: Chapter 13

OMG....I love this story so much! I am glad you are back. Nick is an ass, but I love the way you write his character, the jerk, lol. Ellie, I love her too, I just do not want her taking Nick's womanly mood swings. I know he is/was hurting but, he brought all of it on himself. Ellie is/was trying to self-perserve, but walking back into his life when he is so bitter, may not have been wise. But his stinking mom, all but forced Ellie to come back. (I have not back read..so I am assuming everything is still the same) I can go on and on about the witch, but I know she loves her son and that's it. You are excellent and portraying each character's traits to a 'T'. I cannot wait for more!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 05:38 am

Title: Chapter 13

And Ellie is there, why? Delia is right. Ellie needs to leave with the quickness. And you know damn well, Nick knew Ellie could hear him and his girlfriend gettin' down and didn't care one bit. He's hurt her so many times, she doesn't owe him squat.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 05:15 am

Title: Chapter 13

Welcome back!

Ellie needs to go out and date someone else. She also needs to build up her self esteem away from Nick.

Nick needs to grow up.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 05:11 am

Title: Chapter 13

OH MY GOODNESS MY STORY IS BACK!!!!!! THANK YOU

I can tell they still love each other but I see Nick does not know how to express himself. I think he knows he wants her. I hate how the idiot is acting and having sex and screaming trying to make Ellie jealous. If I was Ellie I would move into a hotel or go out by herself and find a guy to date. I have a feeling idiots family is going to be a problem for Ellie and may go after her and that will make Nick mad. MORE chapters PLEASE

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2012 04:58 am

Title: so sorry dont hate me !

When are we getting some new chapter? I love this story. Please update

Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 07:35 pm



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