Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

I have mixed feelings about this update. Ellie is still hurting...had a feeling she would be the first person to break and call him back.  I was hoping he would have to work a little harder for her...I KNEW he was going to go back to his ex but then he's cheating on her, lol.  *Shakes head.*   Oh well...

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

I'm sorry, but the adage that to get over someone is get under someone does not necessarily work. Nick is spinning or has spun out of control. And Ellie is no better off. I feel bad for them both, particularly Ellie.

Short, but really packs a punch.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

I feel so bad for Ellie but she did the right thing. Nick has to figure out what is more important in his life. Being a criminal with the rest of his low life family (I don't care how much power and money they have, selling drugs and weapons knowing that innocent people WILL get hurt in the mix is not classy) should not take precedence over the woman who you are getting ready to call your wife. He went to college and could easily become legit. 

Ellie is hurting now, but her walking away should be a wake up call for Nick to get his shit together so they can get back to building their lives as a family. 

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 03:59 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

Oh, poor girl.  Can't live with him, Can't live without him.

Reviewer: Aiwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 03:59 am

Title: Chapter 7

OMG. I know you it's hard to let go od someone you love. And this kind of stuff happens everyday. But unless Nico is trying to help turn his family legit I do not see how homegirl could stay with him knowing she is pregnant. I am so intrigued with this story. Can't wait to read the rest. 

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

I hope they pull themselves together. They seem so  miserable without each other.

They are pretty young so I hope they will grow and realize that you have to communicate in a relationship and not hide things and say mean things to each other in the heat of an argument.

They both have some growing up to do but maybe they can do it together.

Thanks for the update. I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

Oh, poor thing. Just can't get over ick even though he's an a-hole. Sounds like Nick isn't really over her either even though he is going about it a different way! Good chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 9

I thought she would leave him. Now the question is who will give in first? At least I get a sense that he really loves her. What will his reaction be once he's over the shock?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 06:53 am

Title: Chapter 9

I loved it!!! I think it is great that she left. I was wondering what took her so long. I like the fact that Nico and Ellie are a couple, but Nico takes her for granted. So far I think she has held up very well. Nico had the nerve to tell her in not so many words to abort the baby. First off, I know she loves Nico, but after he told me what he did for a living I would not want to have is kids anytime soon. So, even though it was horrible that she miscarried, I think it also helped her take the step she needed in leaving Nico. I think Nico needs to live life without Ellie for a while. Ellie needs to live life without Nico for a while and build a successful one for herself without him. Great update. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 9

So she left but she'll be back and I think that's why Nick was like *just let her go.*  He did try to get her to stay but seemed to back off.  Also, the line about her "feeling an inkling of something" pretty much confirmed that this isn't over by a long shot...I didn't expect it to be anyway.  From this point on, let us get a look inside of each other's life apart...she's leaving so she's going home..I would like to know more about her family and friends.  Also, Nick's life...what exactly does he do?  What's it like to be a part of his family's business?  How bad does it really feel to have Ellie leave him?  Is his mother happy?  How does Ellie feel? She's numb but she obviously still loves Nick.  Will she be the first to call and try to make up?  I think he should grovel some more...come up with a plan OR something to get her back...just my take on it. I doubt he'd quit the business but...he should at least *try* really hard to get her back and prove his love.


Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 03:02 am

Title: Chapter 9

Well, I was expecting Ellie to leave but not the way she left. I thought she would talk to Nick a little more but I guess not. 

I think Ellie will come back to Nick after she has had time to cool off and everything soaks in. 

Or maybe somebody will come after her and she will need to come back to Nick to protect her.

Thanks for the update. Update again soon.

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 9

LOVED IT CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.  HOPEFULLY SOON???

Reviewer: Tracy21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 9

Excellent

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 05:02 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Yes, I did but I'm still sad for the two of them. Love sometimes isn't enough. What did he expect? To have to live in fear isn't healthy. You did a nice job with this chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 04:52 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I do feel bad for Nick, because it seems that he really loves her. But Ellie did the right thing. She is not the kind of girl that could live in the world he is living. She went trough a lot already with his family and with this, its just too much. But I do think she was kind of a bitch to even think that she needed this to be a surprise for him. Its like she wanted to hurt him on purpose.

I'm glad that Nick had let her walk out without making the matter worst. Its shows that he truthfully loves her, and if she wants to leave him than so be it. Like they say if you love something let it go.

I also don't think that Nick should get on his knees and beg Ellie to get back with him. I think that he should just leave her alone. Yes he loves her, but she is the one who decided to leave him. So its up to her if she wants to come back to him or not. Its up to her if she will choose to be with him and his lifestyle, and not because he had beg her and stuff like that. There is no point to degrade yourself and beg someone to be or stay with you. Everyone should have some self respect. If someone doesn't want to be with you anymore, there is nothing you could do about it. Begging is annoying and pointless.

Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 04:42 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I didn't expect her to leave nick. so whats next

Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 04:24 pm

Title: Chapter 9

where the rest lol x i didnt think she would leave him lol x

Reviewer: liz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 03:01 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Short & sweet & good! More please!!

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 01:14 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I did expect it. I know Ellie loves Niko but she needs time to rest and think. Ellie went through all of that by herself. If Niko had been there it may be different. Niko needs to learn that he has to show Ellie she is number one no matter what. I know she loves him and will be back but she needs to rest and will need her friends and family. Niko needs to get on his knees and beg. He needs to understand he is not the only Italian hotty.

Reviewer: Trina Mason Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 10:16 am

Title: Prologue

WASN'T EXPECTING THAT WHEN YOU SAID SHE HAD A SURPRISE FOR HIM SO SHE BROKE UP WITH HIM THEN WALKED AWY INSTEAD OF JUST SAYING SHE NEEDED TO GET AWAY OR SOMETHING   WELL I'M CURIOUS TO SEE WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT THAT KINDA THREW ME

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 08:06 am

Title: Chapter 9

Surprising update.

Am glad that Ellie has left him but I suspect that when the initial dust has settled, Nick will try furiously to get her back

Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 07:46 am

Title: Chapter 9

Yes I expected it but he obviously wasn't!! Wonder what happens now??? Do they remain separated or will they come together again??

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 07:40 am

Title: Chapter 8

All I can say is OMG! i am in no way fond of the whole Ellie and Nico situation. Which situation you ask? Pick one. And I am soooooooooo sad that she lost the baby. The writing is fantabulous and I am soo waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. I want Ellie to go straight gutter on his ass. You go girl!

Reviewer: Monique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2011 02:17 pm

Title: Chapter 8

uh oh. Will they be able to survive this? Nick shocked me with the abortion idea. Ellie might want to re-think this marriage thing, but will they let her go with what she knows. Complicated and scary.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 11 2011 12:10 pm

Title: Chapter 8

i cnt wait for the next chapter.i would like to see her struggle with the loss and see if nicky will support her and help her thougth this tough situtation.plus not forgetting the family reaction to the situation.i want elle to but wall around her and not let nicky in great chapter u have me hooked.

Reviewer: elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2011 10:36 am



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