I love love this story. I love how Chris made him talk to his sister. I actually understand what Bianca is coming from being close to her brother. It was good for Ellie and Bianca to meet away from the family. Please make Ellie independent and get a job. I love the setting as well. Update again
Author's Response:
I dont think Ellie would ever be able to live with herself if she ended up just being dependent on Nick like Nina is on Gio (not saying that's not a perfectly good career, Ellie just isnt the type of woman suited to that). Right now she's just settling in, doesnt want to get a job until she's really settled in...
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Trina Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 27 2011 12:08 pm
I'm all caught up and I love this story. I agree with Ellie, he should have told them before hand; he probably thought they wouldn't even agree to meet her, to give her a chance.Other than Marta and Bianca, it seems the rest of the family is at least trying. IMO, Nick comes off as a cold fish and not really worth the headache of dealing with his family or his job.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 27 2011 10:28 am
philipa1234, I really enjoyed this chapter because Ellie took the growup why of talking with nick, instead of getting drunk and throwing a fit.
The thing thst preplex me is that women want change a man's entire life, if this going the direction I think its going,let her except the family business and make her a stronger women. Make her stronger than Nick's mom...Just a thought.
Excellent Chapter, please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2011 10:27 am
Thanks for the update. Now I'm really curious what does Niko's family do????
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2011 09:49 am
Oh yea...you are moving along VERY well with this story. I like how Ellie has a little assumption of what Nick does, it makes her smarter. I loved the family lunch. Nick really stepped up and showed me that he truly does love Ellie.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
[Report This]Date: May 27 2011 05:11 am
well that was great how he stood up 2 them 4 her inspite of his mom & supposed closes sis now I wander what the dad wants 2 talk about plus those previous important fone calls hopefully in next 2 we will find out that & he will trust her with his secret.
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2011 05:02 am
Wow, what an explosion!! Martha was an azz!! And Bianca is acting out like a child. She really is something if she thought her actions were gonna endear her to Nico. Just childesh!! Both of them were stupido!!! They risk losing Nico because they can't get over themselves. Chris was right, Martha was the ring leader and started all the drama. So sad.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2011 03:53 am
You are doing a brillant job, this story is supreb. Nick family is a bitch, I am glad Ellie is demanding the truth.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 27 2011 01:39 am
His family is a mess. No reason to be so rude, what happend to getting to know a person first? Happy he stood up for her.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2011 01:33 am
WOW!
i love this story so much and its so good
cant wait for more!
Reviewer: leeANN Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 01:10 am
Hi, I just wanted to tell you that I love this story. I can't wait to hear what the family business is all about. P.s. I love the constant updates!
Reviewer: Kendra Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 11:12 pm
Ellie just told you that she can't marry you until she knows the truth, what the hell is your problem Nick? His mom and sister don't think that shes good enough for Nick because she is African American, but they made living being criminals. That is really rich. That was hilarious!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 10:07 pm
well that was great how he stood up 2 them 4 her inspite of his mom & supposed closes sis now I wander what the dad wants 2 talk about plus those previous important fone calls hopefully in next 2 we will find out that & he will trust her with his secret.
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 09:37 pm
I'm glad Nick stood up for Ellie instead of just letting his family insult her that way. I really can't believe they were that rude all because of her race, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 09:28 pm
Dont you dare stop the constant updating. I am sure all your fans feels like that! I wish you could update daily. This story is great. I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: brenda Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 08:52 pm
Oh wow, Bianca is something. Can't believe she was that rude to the girl without even giving her a chance first. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 06:20 pm
Fantastic story.
I hope that Ellie make it through dinner. I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 04:26 pm
Wow, so far so good with the famil;y meeting but Bianca is coming off as a b*tch. At least his parents were diplomatic even if they aren't exactly thrilled. Hope Nico checks her. As his sister she should be happy for him even if she doesn't like the girl.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 04:25 pm
Ellie needs to forgive Nick, since he's trying so hard . . . but love the update. It looks like its going to be rough . . . Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 03:41 pm
well let's C how everything goes has got off 2 a rocky start let's C mr.man step up when his family starts 2 get out of line especially the sis & parent. luv updates so do them as often as possible
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 07:46 am
great job...please do not let elli become argumentive, unsure of herself and/or the person she was in the last chapter..
Update as much as you like
Author's Response:
Thank you! I dont think she will. Despite how mean his family is she really does want them to like her so no matter what she is going to try and be the best version of herself when she is around them.
Thanks again for reading!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 07:05 am
needs some edititng but i love this story keep it up
and i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I agree, sometimes I'll read over a chapter and be like OMG what did I write. I plan to go back eventually once I near the end of the story and edit the chapters.
Thank you for reading, and the next chapter should be coming soon :)
Reviewer: sasha Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 07:02 am
I don't mind them. Keep them coming. Bianca is going to cause trouble.
Author's Response:
Bianca is the type of girl that trouble follows because she causes it, though she doesnt realize she does. I think her character is going to be a lot of fun to watch her development.
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 06:31 am
Wonderful, Ellie do not let them push you around. Nick be a man.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 06:23 am
I hope she has at least one of them that will be on her side.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2011 03:11 am