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Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! Glad Nick is going to fight for his family!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 07:25 pm
Title: Chapter 24

Hope Ellie can stay strong against Nick's mother, sister and wife. She's going to have to. She didn't want the drama, but she couldn't hide the baby forever. He deserves his father if he can have him.

I really don't understand why Nick married Juliette. He never made a secret of the fact he never loved her. Even if he felt Ellie cut him off, why drag that unnecessary drama into it. Now, it just a nasty mess!

Good stuff!

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Date: July 31 2012 07:17 pm
Title: Chapter 24

I thought the scenes between Nick and Ellie were sweet and emotionally and sensual. I hope Nick continues to fight for Ellie and his. In the end because of what Nick does Ellie is going to need Nick but more importantly Ellie and Nick still love each other. I loved the part where Nick tells Ellie he doesn't know what to do do cause he always gets what he wants but I am glad Ellie is making him work for it. His family is stupid except his brother and wife. Please update ASAP I love this story.

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Date: July 31 2012 05:30 pm
Title: Chapter 24

I really want those two together. I have a feeling it's not going to be easy. 

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 01:49 pm
Title: Chapter 24

When Elle was saying that she was the pregnant can't sleep etc. I wanted to yell whose fault is that you left and chose not to tell him about the baby. Do she can't be all indignant now. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 10:27 am
Title: Chapter 24

Yes Nick, kick the wifey to the crub. Go with your heart. As for his mom and sister they'll get over it.

And Elle parent and klder sister stop being judges. Right now Elle needs your support.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 08:33 am
Title: Chapter 24

nice update

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Date: July 31 2012 08:26 am
Title: Chapter 23

Well Ellie and Nick I not sure how this will turn out. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 06:59 am
Title: Chapter 22

I had a feeling that he was going to be married. Oh well can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012 06:52 am
Title: Chapter 21

Well didn't see Ellie getting pregnant by Nick and that was another 6 months has passed. I surprised that Delia is telling Nick about the baby. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 06:47 am
Title: Chapter 14

I feel really sad for them. I always thought that they would get back together. I actually didn't think that she would have left him 6 months ago. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 06:39 am
Title: Chapter 13

I can't believe that had sex with Juliette while Ellie was in the other room. Then the next day he is trying to have sex with Ellie wow. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 06:27 am
Title: Chapter 12

Well I can understand why Ellie apologized for leaving the way that she did. I can't wait to read Nick's POV. I thought that Juliette was done until Nick knew what he wanted. But she said that before and came back greedy ho. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 06:21 am
Title: Chapter 11

Well Marta got Ellie to the hospital. Now can she get them back together? As for Julliette she is the one that Bianca needs to be snapping at. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 06:10 am
Title: Ellie's friends photos

Thanks for the pics.

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Date: July 30 2012 06:02 am
Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

I am shocked that Nick is doing drugs. I was waiting for his mother to appear. I am also surprised that they have been broken up fir 6 months. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 06:01 am
Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

Wow I can't believe that Nick went back to his ex and has been cheating on her. Not sure why Ellie thought that she could have sex with a stranger. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 05:54 am
Title: Chapter 9

Well I am not surprised that she is trying to leave. Either she will be stopped or she will be back. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012 05:48 am
Title: Chapter 8

I think that it is sad that she is losing their baby although Nick suggested an abortion. I guess he will be pleased. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012 05:44 am
Title: Chapter 7

Why was Nick arrested? I am surprised that Ellie didn't leave him. I was also surprised that she is pregnant. I wonder what the stress is going ti do to her and her unborn child. Thanks Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012 05:36 am
Title: Chapter 6

Oh man Sammy was hit. I hope that he isn't dead. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012 05:25 am
Title: Chapter 5

Well st least Nick's dad is on his side. Nick really needs ti tell Elle about his family business. Isn't he putting her at risk by not telling her. Also why is Nick next in line and not Gio? At least the meeting between Elle and Bianca went well. Also why doesn't Nick have body guards?Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012 05:13 am
Title: Chapter 4

Wow his mother speaks her mind. Damn and his sister was just beyond rude. If I was Elle I would be running to the nearest airport. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012 05:03 am
Title: Chapter 3

Well Nick needs to be slapped for dropping that bomb that his family was going to have problems with Ellie's race. His sister Bianca is rude and ignorant. My guess their isn't a woman that is good enough for her brother. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012 04:52 am
Title: The lombardi family pics.

Thanks for the cast pics.

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Date: July 30 2012 03:59 am


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