I'm so glad Mina and Luke finally talked...communication is key. Mina still need to let Luke know about her past, since he told her he will still love her I hope that will push her to tell him.
Now she has no reason to leave, she will need the protection of Luke and his family from this mysterious person. It's cool that everyone sensed something wasn't right after Mina's graduation.
Author's Response:
You don't get to be the Alpha family with out some kind of spidey sense that trouble is lurking. Mina may not tell Luke but she will give us an understanding of her background, the role Karen played, and the mysterious caller.
As protective Luke and the Spauldings are of Mina, she is just as protective of them. Randall only knows part of the story. If he knew everything he would go ape shit and lots of people would die. You don;t f*ck witht he Spauldings. Ever.
Thanks for reading and your comments.
See you next chapter.
CL
Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed
[Report This]Date: May 03 2012 02:26 am
what's the secret............
Author's Response:
If I tell you then a kitten will die....
CL
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed
[Report This]Date: May 03 2012 01:23 am
That talk went exactly how it was supposed to. Luke just needed to tell Mina, and even though needs to probably go into more depth, he got the initial conversation out of the way. He was honest and sincere about his feelings for her so she wont have to wonder. Mina was honest about her feelings to him, and responsive to what he laid out so far. So good! Luke really doesn't need a doormat as he said because what good does that do him. He needs a strong woman to stand up to the crap she's going to get just being his woman and Mina has indicated she could met that challenge. Good!
On the flip side, Mina is gonna have to do the same, and I think, soon. People want other people dead so.....
This was a good chapter.
Author's Response:
I know Mina needs to come clean of this could lead to disaster for them both. The most important thing is to establish a trust relationship. Luke reached out to her and I think it's interesting that he knows she's holding back from him.
I was a little surprised by his restraint in demanding know everything immediately.
But yes, people are going to die. I am keeping my fingers crossed that Luke and Mina will make it.
Thanks for all of your comments. I really look forward to them. Sometimes it seems like you are in my head. So who do you think Mina called? I'm sending you a mental picture. Got it??
See you next chapter!
CL
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2012 12:25 am
I absolutely love this story and the characters are mysterious and awesome!!! Hey who was iit that she called before leaving home??? Thanks for not leaving us hanging again. Also, love the frequent updates. More pleaseeeeeeee.....
Author's Response:
Mina's caller will be revealed in the next chapter. Sorry for the mystery. But isn't this part of the fun. Feel free to speculate all you want until the next chapter or two is posted.
Somehow I doubt you'll be able to figure it out. I hope the reveal meets your expectations. But good luck.
I hope the muse stays with me until i can put this story to bed.
Thank you for reading and see you next chapter!
CL
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2012 11:49 pm
I love this story and you for the updates! xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you for following. I thought more might happen in this chapter but thought it best to end it where I did.
See you next chapter!
CL
Reviewer: DecemberUnrest Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2012 10:16 pm
I'm loving this story! Can't wait for the update.
Author's Response:
I know where this story is going to end, just not sure how we are goingto get there until I write it.
Thank you for reading and see you next chapter.
CL
Reviewer: mya Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2012 10:15 pm
LOL I like your neediness. I am glad that Lucas had the talk with her, but I think she has a few surprises of her own for him concerning her past. Even though she may be a virgin, maybe she has a few things she wants to do that will surprise him. Maybe she's read a few books and saw some interesting things on the web that got her all hot and bothered. LOL Just because you're a virgin doesnt mean you don't have an imagination and a few kinky fantasies. I'd love for her to tell him one of her fantasies that sets him back on his heels a bit, maybe something he's never done with anyone else that will be their own special kinky thing... That would be great and make him see that he hasn't experienced everything. LOL
I look forward to more, more more!!! LOL.
Author's Response: Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
[Report This]Date: May 02 2012 09:49 pm
Although I like this story, I am still troubled by the age difference especially now that he's telling about being dominant. That growling was sexy though!! I hope that they are able to protect Mina because she's stupid!! Great update!!
Author's Response: Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: May 02 2012 09:32 pm
I'm def ready for more Lucas. Anyone else?
Author's Response:
Date: May 02 2012 09:19 pm
OH THAT WAS CRUEL TO LEAVE A SISTA HANGING. THE ONLY REASON I'M NOT SWEATING BULLETS IS THAT YOU PROMIEDR AN UPDATE FRIDAY. I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN TO KAREN AND WHO IS AFTER "MINA". ALSO WHY IS MOMMA SPAULING SO OPPOSE TO HER SON BEING WITH MINA?
Author's Response: Reviewer: juno Signed
[Report This]Date: May 02 2012 09:18 pm
Love this story !!!!! It just needs to be edited. But the plot is great!
Author's Response: Reviewer: BossLady Signed
[Report This]Date: May 02 2012 09:12 pm
Friday is SO FAR AWAY!!! I'm ready to see Lucas throws it down, but I bet Mina will be pulling a few tricks out of her sleeve too. I love it.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2012 08:43 pm
Hell, forget you being needy, I am the needy one here with all my begging!! ROFLMAO!!! Perfecto as usual. I do believe that you have assuaged my appetite for now. LOL. This was a great chapter with my favoite usual clean writing that I have come to expect from you. I love how you keep me guessing on what the hell is going to happen next.
LOVE IT!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2012 07:42 pm
Honestly, I dont know what the hell is going on here now! Members of the family have introduced danger into the situation so..ummm..yeah.
Luke needs to get a hold of himself here. If Mina cant interact with people or have other (men) touch her with affection or casually (with her permission), that's going to make for a hellish kind of life with him. Now he's already said he only wants to be the Dom in the bedroom, so what's the problem.
Randall needs to talk to his wife!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: May 02 2012 01:27 am
What's the threat?!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2012 01:10 am
Hmm I wonder what can be lurking. I guess we'll find out soon enough.
Reviewer: karen Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2012 12:54 am
OK you have me on the edge of my seat, but that's where you wanted me, right. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 10:45 pm
This was real good and it raised more questions than offering answers...so I'm just going to sit back and watch everything unfold. Things are going to get real messy, real soon.
Author's Response: Reviewer: Elizablu Signed
[Report This]Date: May 01 2012 10:26 pm
omg i feel spoilt! this is amazing :D Love Lucas x
Author's Response: Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 09:58 pm
What the Freak is going on? This story has a lot of twists and turns, just enough to keep me interested keep up the good work!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 01:48 am
whew! This family is a trip! All the men are some real freaks! From the Father down they are into Beat Me, Hurt Me, Make me write bad checks! CRRRAAAZZZYYYYY!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 01:42 am
Aaahh. Not the cliffhanger... Guess I have to wait
Reviewer: madameblaque Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2012 07:40 am
Wow.So Mina may not be so innocent after all???
Reviewer: madameblaque Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2012 07:38 am
He is smoothe.....love Luke. He's so Alpha...
Reviewer: madameblaque Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2012 07:31 am
Wow. So maybe Mina is a natural submissive?? This is getting good!! Great story
Reviewer: madameblaque Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2012 07:19 am