Nothing is happening with Lucas or anyone else until she's over 18. I promise. If you'll note, she didn't even get a kiss from Luke because she's too young. But thanks for the warning about possibly getting banned. My next chapter which I should have up tonight will really advance to story and their age.
Reviewer: crocuslady Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 11:02 pm
you might want to make her over 18 because i think you will get banned or deleted good story though
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 10:40 pm
This reminds me of a story that was posted on this site already. It had a beginning similar to this, but the age difference was so broad. It started out at a graduation party too, and the girl was taken in by a rich family.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 10:20 pm
Welcome and congratulations on your first posted story!!!
Mina and Lucas sound promising.
I'm sure that the wait until she matures will be excruciating for Lucas; but it seems as though he will support her dreams and ambitions. I'm glad his father sees and understands Lucas' intentions towards Mina. What about the others?
Can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: August 17 2011 10:05 pm
great start. More please.
Reviewer: brenda Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 09:51 pm
Lucas Is aware of the age distance and is willing to wait until Mina becomes of age before he claims her.. It was nice of him to give her is bedroom and wise of him to move to the guest house..
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. This last chapter was a tease. I want to know how he knew she left the house.
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 09:16 pm
What about the girl from Lincoln Heights as Mina? I can't think of her name off hand, sorry. I like this story and I want to see where it goes. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: jannelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 08:30 pm
Excellent beginning chapter, please update soon. As for the age difference Lucas is aware that she is fifteen year old and Mina is not stupid. Please developed this story and for the people who have already started to bitch and whine about the subject matter shut the hell up. This is a work of fiction. I am tried of people coming on the chamber; thinking they can make the authors jump. The author have already stated the age difference so you know damn well not to read this story. Sorry for the sharp words but many stories have been pull and some authors have left because some people have to much time on there hands. Thank you and please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 08:13 pm
what happened to the pics? I don't see any
Reviewer: brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 08:12 pm
sounds interesting
Reviewer: brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 08:11 pm
interesting..
Reviewer: apple Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 08:07 pm
I like how you started and am interested in seeing where you go with it but, Luke to me was really intense and needs to calm down because nothing can happen for a long while.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 07:50 pm
Thanks everyone for the love. I'm not the greatest at adding pictures the cast pic chapter. I'll see what I can do in a bit.
I know that pmgayles is leary of the age difference. I completely understand. This is why Lucas has to play the waiting game. Mina has had to raise herself while her mother has worked long hours for the Spauldings.
There should be no underage sex between Lucus and Mina. But there are boys her age that Mina will want to explore with.
BTW does anyone want to help with pics or a banner? Seriously. Anyone?
I thinking that Lucas is that blond guy Phillip Winchester from Strikeback and Robinson Carusoe. Not entirely sure about Renee Elise Goldsberry for Mina.
And I am working on the next chapter now. Let's hope it works out.
Thanks for the support and feedback!
Reviewer: crocuslady Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 07:39 pm
I don't see any pics?
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 07:38 pm
Wow, strong start. Seems like you have a good story on your hands. Update soon please. You have my attention.
Reviewer: TheDescend25 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 07:36 pm
Can't wait for an update, good start, i am totally hooked....
Alex
Reviewer: Chocolatepink Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 07:27 pm
oh plez more this is addicting can't wait 4 more. Great start luv a man who nos what they want
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 07:24 pm
I am trying to read this story, but the age difference is really bothering me!! That grown man is lusting after a child. I have a niece that is 14 and this story just scares me.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 07:24 pm
please update now.lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!it was great!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 06:58 pm
I am ready for the next chapter!! This is off to a great start!!!
Reviewer: lishreed Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 06:31 pm
MORE!!! I demand more!!!!
Reviewer: ms dimples Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 06:26 pm