Title: Meet The Cast

This was good, we know that Tyler is going to be very upset & he doesn't know how 2 take no for an answer so who knows what he will do when she breaks the date!

 I hope that Keith & this new client don't become issues within their relationship, becasue they have enough problems already to work out! lol

thanks for the update!

 

Reviewer: Skip2641 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 03:28 pm

Title: Two Steps Forward and Three Steps Back

Ty is soooooooo going to be pissed if Kay cancels on their dinner tonight

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 02:04 pm

Title: Meet The Cast

Please update soon, I can't wait 2 find out what happened!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 01:33 pm

Title: Misconception A Moment of Truth

Hmm...ok....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 09:04 pm

Title: Meet The Cast

Great update,Ithink I have an idea what was in the text,he ask her can he kiss her right?

Can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: Rene Washington Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 05:09 am

Title: Misconception A Moment of Truth

WHAT DID THE TEXT SAY?

She is scared and I don't blame her. He got some issues, but I know they'll work it out.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2012 01:47 am

Title: Misconception A Moment of Truth

Ok I read it three times and I keep coming to the same conclusion that he was there. He gave her some good loving and he got some good loving. I think he left to keep from complicatiing things further. I think they both got a good nights rest To me you attention to details keeps us wondering. She passed out which gave him the opportunity to leave. Loves it.

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 05:10 pm

Title: Meet The Cast

I know that he was there, becasue she woke up sore & naked & we know that Tyler can put a hurt'n on her! LOL

 I want 2 know what the text said & why she didn't answer it!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 04:29 pm

Title: Misconception A Moment of Truth

That was good & too funny, he hit and quit it and poor thing thinks she dreamed it! LOL!!! ]

 

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 04:23 pm

Title: Misconception A Moment of Truth

OK you got me.  Was he really there or not?  I think he was there and she only thinks that she dreamed it.  LOL.  Good Chapter!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 12:36 pm

Title: Misconception A Moment of Truth

Wow that was some dream she had! Good job :)

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 10:37 am

Title: Misconception A Moment of Truth

I looooooove this story I just think its kinda slow. If that makes sense.

Reviewer: justme! Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 06:47 am

Title: Misconception A Moment of Truth

Ms. Kayla has it bad...That was so hot and steamy

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 06:36 am

Title: Misconception A Moment of Truth

Damn you got me, I thought Tyler had really shown up at her door to give her some good loving and it was only a dream.  Snap, crackle , pop that was sexy!!!  When is she going to put them both out of their misery?  Where is that damn Mike?  Is anyone going to kick his ass?  When is someone going to choke the suggaddy out of Lisa?  PLease tell me that those two situations will occur!!  I give this update two thumbs up and now I can a peaceful slumber!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2012 05:51 am

Title: Reflection, a moment in time

Kayla has a point. They need some time before a marriage can held together. Their communication skills alone needs some serious work. They REALLY dont know how to talk to each other. To me, that's been their biggest problem all along. If Tyler has trust issues concerning Kayla, well, he was right in there all the while with Kayla, so look in the mirror. He isn't some innocent in this either. I'm sick of him constantly using that card. Its not the get-out-of-jail-free card every single time he wants to get wild ideas about Kayla and use it to exonerate himself when he's wrong. That's not fair, and if he truly feels that way, then break it off and be done with it. It's beyond petty now and getting old. Kalya needs to woman-up as well. This poor kid of theirs! I can see life with them as parents already...ugh!

Also, Tyler needs to listen to Kayla about that Lisa chick. Homegirl seems to think Tyler owes her explanations about what he does with his life and who he does it with. Did he really think her reaction was normal? She's going to be a problem for him.

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 08:36 pm

Title: Reflection, a moment in time

I WISH THAT TY AND KAY WOULD HURRY UP AND GET IT RIGHT FOR THE SAKE OF THEIR OWN SANITY.

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 07:21 pm

Title: Meet The Cast

Tyler need to stop coming on too strong. Kayla will eventually forgive him but he need to let her come to him in her own way.  She has to get the trust back that was lost when he accused her of being a whore.  I love that she stood up for herself with Lisa.  Lisa is going to be more a pain in the a$$ now that Tyler announced he is engaged.  She is going to have a heart attack when she find out Kayla is expecting.  She might put a hit out on Kayla.

Reviewer: ttee72 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 07:13 am

Title: Reflection, a moment in time

I don't trust that heifer Lisa, Tyler does not want you so why are you tripping?  He told that he had met the one and you that it wasn't you.  Tyler take off the blinders.  Kyla you are so stupid, I am glad that you had dinner with Tyler but did you have to be such a *itch?  Tyler loves you and you love Tyler so what is the deal?

Lisa is not finished!!  She makes my teeth itch!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 06:22 am

Title: Reflection, a moment in time

Great chapter, I really like this couple.

 

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 03:57 am

Title: Meet The Cast

OMG!  This chapter had me crying with with laughter.

Reviewer: aiwen01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 03:55 am

Title: Reflection, a moment in time

I've been waiting patiently.

 

WHAT AN UPDATE...please update soon.

Reviewer: 100percentfan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 03:42 am

Title: Crossing the Boundary Lines

I'm truly pissed at Tyler. Now I realized why Kayla has all along been shy of relationship. To be called a liar, a cheater, a whore and accused of carrying another man's child from someone who claimed to love you is utterly devastating. Now he trying to ask for forgiveness with flowers, diamonds and dinner? Didn't he hear Kayla telling him that IT'S OVER?

Reviewer: Romantic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2012 01:38 pm

Title: Secret Love Games

For god sake, girl....END IT!!  I'm agreeing with Mike's possible motive: If you want to be with someone else, be an adult: SAY SO!"  There is no way around it...she's going to have to be a woman...stop playing games...tell him before someone else will.

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 02:32 pm

Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

Okay...I think they're both wrong.  First of all, Tyler came on TOO STRONG.  He knew she had a boyfriend when he went over there that night.  Now, he's expecting her to immediately drop her boyfriend?? C'mon now. 

Kayla is wrong for lying to Mike's face and Mike knows something is up...he waiting for her to tell him.

On this lovemaking tip, Tyler is selfish.  He knows he's too big for Kayla.  Can he try to hold back a little so she can get hers??

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 02:21 pm

Title: Blame it on the Snow

That was the perfect time to tell Mike.  She should have cried, apologized, and left....more drama because she lied to his face when he gave her an "out."

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2012 02:04 pm



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