Title: Crossing the Boundary Lines

Kayla and Tyler are both childish and argumentative. So far, they've done nothing but argue over damn near everything - but that last fight was an entirely different animal. It wasn't one of them whining about phone messages or other friendships or television shows. Tyler out and out called his pregnant girlfriend a liar and a whore and accused her of trying to push another man's baby onto him. That was just way, WAY over the line and after that, Kayla has every right to take time to reevaluate their relationship especially since, if I'm reading the timeline of this story correctly, less than a week has gone by since the blow-up.

 

Tyler seems to have a history of jealousy/trust issues with Kayla which is understandable given the way they met, but not something that anyone should have to deal with on a regular basis. If Tyler's reaction is so over-the-top hurtful, what's to stop him from reacting that way every time his trust button is pushed? They definitely both need to dial down the junior high and really talk about their issues and concerns...but is dinner on Valentine's Day REALLY the time and place for that?

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2012 11:55 pm

Title: Crossing the Boundary Lines

Things seem bad now but i know it will work out in the end and when it does i will be there.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2012 02:20 pm

Title: Crossing the Boundary Lines

What Tyler had said was hurtful, but I think that Kayla is being kind of childish. Sometimes I just find her stupid and immature. She really needs to talk to Tyler. If she can't forget and forgive him for what he had said then she needs to talk to him and break things of officially. Its not right to string him along and thinking that he still has a chance. If she is not willing to forgive him then she needs to tell him that so that he can move on. This is not about Kayla being strong or giving in to easily. Ignoring the problem will not let it go away. Communication is the key. They don't have to fall in to each others arms and continue where they left off. But they do need to TALK like to MATURE people. Let everything out. And besides, they are going to have a kid together, which should be their main concern. And Kayla ignoring Tyler is not going to make it better. Damn Kayla just works on my nerves sometimes.

Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 18 2012 11:48 pm

Title: Crossing the Boundary Lines

I love these two but I don't think Tyler had suffered enough for the pain and heartbreak his harsh words had inflicted on Kayla. Isn't he the one who gave an Ultimatum that once he's out of the door he is not coming back? Kayla needs to make sure he keep to his words and give him a wide berth for not only a few days but a few months! I like my heroine to be of strong character instead of giving in too easily. And I think another storm in the form of the jealous Lisa is approaching soon to rattle this relationship.

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2012 04:27 pm

Title: Crossing the Boundary Lines

Great update!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2012 07:22 am

Title: Crossing the Boundary Lines

I have to get this off of my chest, Kayla is working my last nerve and is making my teeth itch!!!  Grow up and talk to Tyler that loves you and he made a mistake.  Kayla you are making me ill!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2012 01:45 am

Title: Crossing the Boundary Lines

Wow! I know what Tyler said was hurtful, but Kayla does need to talk to him and let him know how she feels.  If it's over (which I doubt) then she should tell him and they talk about shared custody.  Otherwise they need to discuss what needs to be done to fix it.

Since he said that thing about his mother, I think Tyler should face his mother and tell her that he loves Kayla, is going to get married, and if she can't accept them and their baby, then she's chosen not to be a part of her son's life.  He needs to make a stand and let Kayla know that he's on her side! I feel that once his mother realizes that he's serious, she's going to do a serious attitude adjustment where she will at least be civil to Kayla.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2012 09:48 pm

Title: Crossing the Boundary Lines

Kayla better go to dinner with Tyler

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2012 09:26 pm

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

Tyler seems to have a problem with his temper which really needs to end. Kayla - to paraphrase something I read in an Erosa Knowles novel once - needs to teach him right now that he can't just say any old hurtful thing he wants in the heat of anger and then expect that an apology is gonna make it ok. Tyler slept with a virgin with no birth control and was then surprised that she turned up pregnant? Is he that stupid? Then he told the mother of his child (the woman that he supposedly loves and respects) that his mother was right about her - meaning that Kayla is a lying, golddigging whore - and expects that his piddling 'I'm sorry baby' is supposed to make that ok? Yeah right.

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 04:43 am

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

This a great story, iv'e been reading it since the begining & i'm enjoying it!

Tyler needs 2 control his temper & Kayla needs 2 have more confidence in herself & her relationship & maybe they will B able 2 work things out better!

Can't wait 4 the next update!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 04:37 am

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

OMG! Who would have thought men would gossip as much as women? Now that is what happens when Men try to help each other out! They make a freakin mess of everything instead of letting the women handle things...Ok I know Tyler didn't mean what he said...but boy if he wants to have a very unhappy life...keep agreeing with his momma about his woman/wife and he will be very unhappy! Ok let Kayla be mad a week at the most and let Tyler beg for atleast a month before she takes him back. Please.....I LOVE ME SOME THEM! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2012 05:10 am

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

Men can be so stupid. Steve need to confront his boy Mike or straigthen his mess he created out or Traci might never forgive. I feel sorry for Mike, but he was just wrong for hurting Kayla his punk ass.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2012 11:56 pm

Title: Meet The Cast

Please put them back together......

Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2012 02:17 am

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

Great chapter, now get Tyler & Kayla back together. LOL!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2012 01:58 pm

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

i want to jump in the screen and hurt Mike for causeing this drama between Kay and Ty... Steve is on the shit list.... Good chapter though

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2012 03:15 am

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

That wasn't as explosive as I was hoping that it would be, but I am glad that Kayla told her friends  what happened.  Kayla is really stubborn and it makes her stupid.  Tyler just lost his damn, when he noticed how Kayla was dressed while talking to her ex-boyfriend.  Great update!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2012 02:16 am

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

That's all Steve got?  I was hoping he would have maybe gotten his windshield broken or maybe his arm.  Anyway great update!

Reviewer: aiwen01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2012 02:14 am

Title: Meet The Cast

Well we see how much Steve values his relationship. He lied to Traci when she asked him did he hear her conversation then went running to Mike like a gossiping girl. His stupid behind was having doubts when he told Mike so he know Kayla wasn't lying but he don't want to believe his friend Mike would lie.

For the sake of his girlfriend he may need to go confront Mike about it but don't let him know how much he knows and judge his reaction then.

Kayla still has some issues she need to work on concerning herself. Heck, Tyler does too. Neither one would doubt the other otherwise. Aaron is right, Tyler need to give Kayla a few days then go talk to her without yelling. She doesn't need the added stress. If Mike still want to cause problems then let the DNA test speak for itself.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2012 01:32 am

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

It seems that Steve still wants to beleive what he wants to believe.  He believes that liar over his own woman which is wrong. 

I think Tyler just reacted in the moment.  He's going to have to do some serious groveling to make up.  Kayla needs to think about if the roles were reversed and she walked in on a woman claiming that she was pregnant by Tyler and it was really a lie, how would she react.  Hmmmm

thanks for the update and I look forward to more!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 11:59 pm

Title: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

Ok I m so happy you update. I want to open a can of whip azz on a lot of folks. Men should mind their own damn business. i hope Kayla will fight for her relationship. Tyler will have to remain on his knees begging for her forgiveness. Steve is a big old azz. Mike needs to grow the blank up. Aaron is the smart one and will get his friend to on the right track. Looking forward to your next update .

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 11:01 pm

Title: Home Sweet Home. Finally!!

I like the fact that you focus on writing one story at a time and give your very best. Hopefully, Aaron and the beautiful Veronica will be next in line after this.

Reviewer: Ria Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2012 11:53 am

Title: Home Sweet Home. Finally!!

I think Tyler is so wrong for not listening to her, or hearing to what she have to say... And Mike is just a duch bag.. why wold he do such a think.... I would have slapped the shit out of him for doing that to me. oh and Steven ohhh why you telling someone something that has nothing to do with you... he worse than a girl

Reviewer: fanfictionfantasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 02:08 pm

Title: Home Sweet Home. Finally!!

I can't believe Tyler, first of all, said the things that he said to and about Kayla, but Mike is dead wrong for what he did to both Kayla and Tyler. However, the person that is really to blame for all of this is Steve because it was none of his business to tell Mike, who was no longer involved with Kayla, anything about her health or physical condition, he had no idea whether or not they actually had a sexual relationship to be assuming that the child she is carrying was even Mike's.

But please work on correcting those run-on sentences. Punctuations exist for a reason.

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 04:24 am

Title: Home Sweet Home. Finally!!

Omg drama!!!! I love it!! When the truth comes out Tyler should be on his knees begging for ever doubting Kayla, and mike is a damn $&:hole lol

Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 04:22 am

Title: Home Sweet Home. Finally!!

If words could break one's heart into thousand pieces, then Tyler's mindless and hurtful accusations have just succeeded to do that to Kayla's. Kudos to Kayla for calling it off with him. She owed Tyler no explanation when he could not even trust her in the first place. I want to see him going crazy wondering whose the father as he will definately bump into Kayla regularly in the office building while her tummy gets bigger. And make him come crawling back to her begging for forgiveness when he finds out the truth eventually.

Reviewer: IR Reader Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2012 03:44 pm



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