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Title: Don't Let Me Be The Last To Know

Thanks for the update!  I was all ready to come smack Tyler up the head fro being an ass, but he did a complete 180 on me...

I hate it that Kayla got pregnant at this stage, becuase now Tyler's mother is really going to think she is trying to trap him with a baby...

Can't wait until they are together again; such an adorable couple...

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2012 04:52 pm
Title: Don't Let Me Be The Last To Know

I love this story. I was so excited to see an update.

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 05:19 am
Title: Don't Let Me Be The Last To Know

I am glad that Tyler called her, because she was loosing her mind.  She had her ultasound, so awesome.  Thanks for the update!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 05:17 am
Title: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

How long does it take a man to wrap his head around the fact that his woman is pregnant? 10 mins or 20 years? Makes no difference men are never ready for it....but we women have to just deal with it! Great chapter!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2012 05:40 am
Title: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

I think Tyler got too loud with Her.. He see that she was having a hard time telling him what was wrong.. and He should have not yelled at her telling her he need time.. Yes i understand that he need time to take the whole pregnancy thing in but, he should have still kept his cool... 

 

Im feeling this story though.. Its great.... Keep it up.. and please keep me updated with the story every week or so.. please.. 

 Reviewer: fanfictionfantasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2012 01:03 am
Title: Meet The Cast

Now that the truth is out, she and tyler can start to move forward and become serious.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29 2012 11:42 pm
Title: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

I'm rather disappointed in Tyler's reaction. Kayla is already feeling insecured and she needs his full support to face the wrath and accusations from his mother later on.

Like Aaron though. Hope you will pen his love story next.

 Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 29 2012 06:58 am
Title: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

Good for Kayla for telling Tyler she pregnant. Tyler didn't take the news to well,but I'm really happy to know he do want the baby.Can't wait until him and Aaron can wrap up this case and head back home.I hope Kayla don't do anything crazy because she is not sure how Tyler really feel about her being pregnant. Great update it left me wanting more, looking forward for the next one.

 Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 29 2012 05:03 am
Title: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

This is one of my favorite stories on The Chamber.  Well she finally told him the stalling was killing me.

 Reviewer: aiwen01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 29 2012 02:59 am
Title: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

Kayla and Tyler need to get it together.  Kayla is in love with Tyler but has not faith in him.  She makes my teeth itch!!  Tyler is scared, but I can't wait to read about his mothers reaction.  That hiefer is a racist piece of work!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 29 2012 02:11 am
Title: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

Poor Tyler.  LOL  I don't know what he meant by using a condom wasn't an option.  I'll have to go back and reread that chapter.  Well when you play you gotta pay, Tyler.  As for his mother, I wouldn't even tell her!  Thanks for the update!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2012 08:39 pm
Title: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

I was very disappointed in Tyler's reaction, after all of the agony & pain she went through over her decision 2 tell him, he acted like a typical immature guy & blamed her 4 becoming preagant, as if she had sex  by herself!

His response seemed a little out of character 4 him, this can't B the same guy who left the l love U Kayla message on his phone!

 

 

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2012 08:20 pm
Title: Places in the Heart & Ties that Bind us All

Tyler.......

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Date: February 28 2012 08:01 pm
Title: The Sweetest Taboo

And men talk about women gossiping!  *smh*

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 06:17 pm
Title: The Sweetest Taboo

See this is how crap gets twisted up and turned around, all because Someone named Kayla was not woman enough to tell her boyfriend that she has been keeping a secret from all her friends that she is pregnant!  If she had introduced Tyler to her friends they would all know who the baby's daddy is! Now Steve with his gossiping ass is going to congratulate Mike on his impending fatherhood and now Mike is going to know Kayla was tipping out on him while she was holding out on him! Damn What a Tangled Web we weave when we practice to deceive! Good installment! keep them coming!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 06:14 am
Title: Meet The Cast

I love this story!!!  Kayla needs to be honest with Tyler and I hope he doesnt say or do anything stupid when she does tell him the truth.  Steve is acting like a messy female, lol.  Seriously, how old is he, lol.  Keep up the good work!

 Reviewer: Antoinette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 04:53 am
Title: The Sweetest Taboo

Kayla really annoys me at times, but Tyler loves her and it's at times like this when I wonder why?  The man is away working trying to save the life of a friend, her dumb ass should have talked to him before he left.  Lying to him about a friend being pregnant instead of being a woman and telling him that you are pregnant is stupid.  Kayla you are punk!!!  Steve is real wrong for what he's about to do.  Why is everyone assuming that Kayla slept with Mike?  I am looking forward to the next update!!1

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 02:26 am
Title: It’s not the price you pay but the gift you give

Kayla is pregnant and hormonal, and Tyler is WHIPPED! Man is that one hellafied combo? She hasn't told him so he doesn't know why she is acting so strange and she doesn't know why she is acting so strange? Damn can anyone say FUNNY!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2012 06:01 am
Title: It’s not the price you pay but the gift you give

LOL looks like someone has some making up to do. 

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 01:02 pm
Title: It’s not the price you pay but the gift you give

Hi Kaleah,

I'm touched by your conscientious effort in providing regular updates for our reading pleasure. Thank you and will continue to support your work!

 Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 10:12 am
Title: It’s not the price you pay but the gift you give

I truly love this story, please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 07:55 am
Title: It’s not the price you pay but the gift you give

What the heck is wrong with Kayla? She totally bit Tyler's head off! Thanks for the update:)

 Reviewer: Meg Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 06:55 am
Title: It’s not the price you pay but the gift you give

Kayla is such a pill, why does she treat Tyler that way,  That man loves you but you know that he didn't to California on a vacation.  Give the man a break, Kayla!!  Please don't that ho Constance win, I want to see in jail!!  Or dead after she's not shot by Perry!!  Both of scenarios work for me.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 02:32 am
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

Thank you Kaleah for sharing your talent with us; however, this story is in desperate need of an editor. I can't enjoy the story because of so many grammar, syntax and sentence structure errors. I'm saying this to be mean I just really want you to be the best writer you can be but in order for people to see what a great story teller and writer you are is to present your best work. That means it should properly edited and polished.  If you need help I will gladly be your beta.  Keep writing but please be sure to polish it before you post it.

 Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2012 03:39 pm
Title: Its Been A Hard Days Night

Yeah that's what pregnancy does to you.....makes you crazy sleepy at all times. I have to give it to you with the line......"milk chocolate is his favorite dessert!" I like that alot! Keep those zingers coming and keep writting this incredible story. I love it!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 05:19 am


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