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Title: Its Been A Hard Days Night

Great update. 

Now whyis Kayla getting so upset...Tyler is working.

it appears she might be pregnant.

Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 03:37 pm
Title: Its Been A Hard Days Night

LMAO!! Aaron is too much!!!  Milk Chocolate is his favorite dessert...ha ha ha!  Tyler you need to call Kayla back.  As Aaron said your "wife" is crazy because of all the pregnancy hormones...

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Date: January 22 2012 07:08 am
Title: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

Catherine is grinning now but i wonder if she will still have that grin when Tyler comes to town. Justice will be served and the truth will always surface no matter how long it takes. Logan has left the clues, now it is Tyler's job to speak using the clues. a bitter but still well written chapter. hank you so much.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 09:43 pm
Title: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

Omg that was good, I can't wait for the next update!!!!!

 Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 05:08 am
Title: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

I hope the police find out what Cathrine is up to really quick, karma's a bitch

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Date: January 17 2012 12:00 am
Title: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

I can't wait for the next update!

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Date: January 16 2012 11:19 pm
Title: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

I am so disgusted right now, that was Perry. Maybe it's just me, but they know that she was at that resaurant so what ask the waite staff for adescription of the couple. That was Perry that did that, I know that it was.

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Date: January 16 2012 04:00 pm
Title: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

I am so disgusted right now, that was Perry. Maybe it's just me, but they know that she was at that resaurant so what ask the waite staff for adescription of the couple. That was Perry that did that, I know that it was.

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Date: January 16 2012 04:00 pm
Title: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

Ooh!  I want her to get hers for setting up Alex and I know she will!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 03:36 pm
Title: Murder, Justice, Dead Redemption

How are these people connected to Kayla and Tyler?



Author's Response:

Hello Moni their connected to Tyler's through Aaron. Alex is Aaron's brother the last two chapters was just a background to why Aaron and Tyler went to LA.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 02:02 pm
Title: Behind Closed Doors

Please update! Awesome story!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15 2012 01:50 am
Title: Behind Closed Doors

Please don't let Alex serve one more minute in jail for this murderous whore!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2012 07:22 pm
Title: Behind Closed Doors

love it

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 12 2012 07:33 pm
Title: Behind Closed Doors

Wow!  This is getting even more interesting.  Can't wait to see where you go with this.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2012 05:05 am
Title: Behind Closed Doors

i can only say that she may have won the battle but not the war because what comes around goes around.  Trust when when i say that she will get what is coming to her and alex will be cleared.  Either way another great chapter.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2012 04:39 am
Title: Behind Closed Doors

That dirty low down skanky ass bitch! She is willing to set  up anyone use anyone and maybe even kill anyone who gets in her way when it comes to money! Too bad Wallace had to die...but she will eventually get hers in the end.  That was a good installment....it keeps getting better and better. Love the intrigue and suspense of the whole thing. But I have just one question? Will Jasmine get a chance to kick Catherine's ass for setting up her husband? Hope so!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2012 04:37 am
Title: Behind Closed Doors

Catherine is sick as hell,can't wait what you have plan for her.Great update looking forward for the next one.

 Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2012 03:32 am
Title: Behind Closed Doors

I so want that woman to die an horrible death, I am really disappointed that you killed Wallace.  I really liked Wallace but his wife Catherine makes my teeth itch.  Perry is so dumb, I can't wait for him to be Bubba's bitch!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2012 02:18 am
Title: Behind Closed Doors

What a bitch! She isn't going to get away with this!!!

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2012 08:23 pm
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

me likey him rough!!! lol.. does that make me weird?

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Date: January 05 2012 09:35 pm
Title: Affliction, Reflection & Expectation

What a turn of events! She is too smart for her of good like every good criminal. Catherine didn't think Alex would send the lawyer to file the paper work in the morning; how is she going to explain that? I hope she rots for being a greedy hoe.

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Date: January 04 2012 12:05 pm
Title: Meet The Cast

WOW CAN U SAY BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 03:37 am
Title: Affliction, Reflection & Expectation

Oh no...I don't like this Catherine chick...not at all!!!  I hope Aaron, Tyler, Alex and Jasmine solve this case real quick and puts Catherine's conniving ass in jail where her gold digging behind and cowardly lover, Perry, belong so that Tyler can get back to Kayla and she can tell him that she's pregnant. 

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2012 06:34 am
Title: Affliction, Reflection & Expectation

WOW!!!! That bitch is crazy as hell! But she will never get her hands on any of that money! Too bad her husband has to die tho!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2012 06:26 am
Title: Affliction, Reflection & Expectation

I don't like Catherine, and the ho needs to die with a quickness!!!  Please don't let her plan work, I like Alex and Wallace is okay in my book.  Thanks for the update!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2012 04:55 am


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