Title: Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

I knew with all the sex they were having that she would end up pregnant! Hopefully Tyler will not do or say anything stupid and piss Kayla off and they break up. His momma will try to use that against her too!

 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2012 12:07 am

Title: Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

So now she realize she could be pregnant SMH. And I hope when Taylor find out he want be too disappointed and try to remember everything happen for a reason.I'm so looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 04:12 am

Title: Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

Ok, she finally noticed how late she is and Tyler makes the comment about not wanting any kids yet!

Well, when Kayla tells Tyler, I do hope he handles it well.

Great chapter! Waiting for the next, get Tyler back quickly and let Aaron find his aquilles heel soon (the man whore LOL!).

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 04:41 pm

Title: Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

She's pregnant isn't she? Tyler will love her no matter what, I'm sure. Great update!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 09:16 am

Title: Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

Awww man... I didn't want this chapter to end

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 06:39 am

Title: Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

I hope nothing crazy happens to Kayla while they're apart...This chapter has like "caution: trouble ahead" signs all over it.  I want to know what's going to happen next...

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 06:20 am

Title: Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

I have a bad feeling, something bad is going to happen to Kayla while Tyler is gone.  That is how he will find out that she is pregnant.  Why didn't she just tell?  I hope that he doesn't react stupidly when she tells that she is pregnant.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 06:14 am

Title: Sweet Revenge and Bitter Romance

DAMN THAT INSTALLMENT WAS FREAKIN' HOT!

10!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2011 12:33 am

Title: Sweet Revenge and Bitter Romance

Is she pregnant?

Reviewer: othello Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2011 01:04 am

Title: Sweet Revenge and Bitter Romance

She needs to figure it out and tell Tyler that she is pregnant.    

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2011 12:07 pm

Title: Meet The Cast

I'm sorry I forgot to rate this. :(

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2011 06:04 am

Title: Sweet Revenge and Bitter Romance

Great update,so what's going on with Kayla is she pregnant or what? can't wait find out, and if she is I hope she don't keep it from Tyler.Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2011 06:02 am

Title: Sweet Revenge and Bitter Romance

Yes, now that was some hot, butt, naked sex!!!!  I am hoping that Kayla is getting over stupidity!!!  Is Kayla pregnant?  She is really horny and very tired, I hope that she is.  I love this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2011 05:45 am

Title: Bitter Sweet Love Far Beyond our Reach

They need to stop all this dancing around each other and make a committment to each other before dome thing happens and not for the best!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 04:32 am

Title: Bitter Sweet Love Far Beyond our Reach

I really enjoy reading your work.  Can't wait to see how you work out the issue with his mom.

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 02:50 am

Title: Bitter Sweet Love Far Beyond our Reach

Kayla is still a punk b*tch, but at least she opened up to Tyler.  Why is she so afraid of commitment?  If she continues to hold to the past she will move on and live her life and love fully.  Tyler deserves a woman that faces her fears, hear I am boo!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2011 07:34 am

Title: Bitter Sweet Love Far Beyond our Reach

Nice update...Now does Tyler mom dislike her for another reason?

Why such animosity?

So she is bi-racial.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Hey Moni to answer your question yes Kayla is bi-racial I guess to a point considering were all mix up with something or other this is how it was explained to me growing up I fall into this same pattern so here goes. Kayla's grandfather on her father side was bi-racial and her grandmother on her father side was Caucasian which made her father ¾ Caucasian and ¼ African American. Kayla's father was considered Caucasian and he looked it.

On Kayla's mother side, they were both African Americans as you can tell by the story so when Kayla was born it kind of reversed itself she was ¾ African American and ¼ Caucasian. If that makes any sense to you. Genetics is a bitch I know.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2011 04:26 am

Title: Bitter Sweet Love Far Beyond our Reach

I glad Kayla and Tyler are back together!!! I wonder when will find out she is pregnant, and will Tyler be able to keep his promise.WE all know his mother is crazy as hell and I can't see her just open her arms up to welcome Kayla into there family.Great update looking forward to next one.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2011 07:46 pm

Title: Love’s Misunderstanding The Choices We Make

Kayla appears to be pregnant. I find it strange that the sophisticated matured Kayla allowed Tyler to have unprotected sex with her when she is still not prepared for a full commitment. Tyler's mum will definately blast Kayla off for trying to trap her son into marriage.  

Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2011 04:17 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

His mother is a capital b*tch!

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 05:18 pm

Title: Love’s Misunderstanding The Choices We Make

I can't believe Tyler's Mom basically denied ever calling Kayla a whore! That woman is going to lose her son if she isn't careful.

Kayla and Tyler certainly created a show in my mind LOL okay that sounded a little weird....you did a great job with this chapter! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 10:17 am

Title: Blame it on the Snow

I love the way the story is going, but is it possible to space the story out a bit. The text is hard to read because it looks like one entire super large paragraph.



Author's Response:

I didnt do that its the chamber sorry about that i re submitted it hope you can read it now.

Reviewer: Lorrnae Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 07:38 am

Title: Love’s Misunderstanding The Choices We Make

Dayam! can you believe Tyler's momma is an under cover Klan member....who knew? And then she got an attitude when she was called on it! That was really messed up! Then the breakup...for what? Now they are both miserable.....Seven whole days...not a word from u, seven whole nights.......Yeah that what this chapter is like.....that Toni Braxton song. But I am glad they have gotten a chance to at least spend one more night together. I know Mike saw Kayla and Tyler, didn't he? Great installment!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 07:07 am

Title: Love’s Misunderstanding The Choices We Make

I wonder where Kayla's need for her rules came from??  Kayla needs to stop being overly cautious and take a leap of faith with Tyler.  She wants to be close to Tyler, but then she tries to push him away when he wants to make more of a commitment to her.  Being a little apprehensive is normal, but I think there is something more to it than that.  Kayla and Tyler need to have a honest conversation about their relationship concerns and the issue with Tyler's mother.  It was understandable that they were both upset and emotional, but they need to talk about these matters now that they have had time away from that situation.  Right now, these concerns are the two giant elephants in the room and if they are not addressed now, they will come to haunt them later...

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 04:53 am

Title: Love’s Misunderstanding The Choices We Make

Man I'm wonder what will happen if Kayla and Tyler run into Mike and Stevie I know all hell will break out. And Kayla really need to stop acting like a spoil brat and take her man back.Can't wait until Kayle find out she is pregnant, I wonder how she will tell Tyler.That was a great update looking forward for the next one.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 03:44 am



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