Title: Love’s Misunderstanding The Choices We Make

Kayla makes my teeth itch, she is a dumb ho who will be a lonely ho if she don't get it together.  Tyler momma is a mess and she is willing to lose her son over her racist rantings.  I don't like that woman and Kayla is working my last nerve.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 10:15 pm

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Ok I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoy reading this story.Yeah Tyler is having a hard time believing his mother could be so mad and say something like that.I love how he is on his way back to confront his mother.And I think Kayla is already pregnant,and if she is I know Tyler mother will really be pissed.Oh well beacause I can't see Tyler letting his mother or anyone for that matter come between him and Kayla.

Great job once again,looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 01:49 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Wow. Great job. Please hurry with the next chapter.

I wanted to slap his mom!

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 06:49 pm

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

i wonder what tyler's going to do...

Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 05:23 pm

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

I'm really pissed off at Tyler for having the nerves to ignore Kayla's call when she was the one being humilated by his mother for sleeping with him. Being called a gold digging whore by your potential future monther-in-law truly hurts. No wonder Kayla has this rule of no sex before the first six months. If only she did not break it just for Tyler........sigh. What Kayla needs to do now is to restore her pride and dignity by keeping her distance from Tyler, start afresh with her rule if he wants to have a second chance and hopefully give him some blue balls for the hurt that he has indirectly caused. In short, Tyler needs to realize that Kayla is someone special and not an easy lay as what his mum thinks. 

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 09:37 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Damn was she channeling Joan Crawford or what?Can we say "Mommy Dearest!" I mean Mrs Hollis, just came straight out of left field with some of those questions. I understand Kayla being pissed, I would have been pissed also! But what got me was Tyler thinking she was making a mistake...why do men do that? They never believe you until someone else tells them the same exact thing you just told them! It's like they need a second opinion on whatever you tell them!  Good installment. I hope nothing happens to Tyler before he gets back to his parents house!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 04:58 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

I agree with reader Anonymous. Kayla needs some time apart from Tyler. She has broken too many of her own rules to be with him. Asides from Mike, their relationship has been too smooth sailing such that Tyler has taken her for granted. Office romance is tough enough and to bring her home to his parents at such a short notice and when their relationship has just started is not a smart move. I hope to see more ups and downs of this relationship and Tyler working his ass hard enough to win back Kayla's love.

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 04:25 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Book is great so far, can't wait for the rest

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 04:16 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Wow, Tyler's mom is a SUPER B*TCH! I know it's Tyler's mom and usually most children do not want to think the worst of their parents, but REALLY? Kayla told him all of that and he had the nerve to say, 'she did not mean any harm?' Oh, that b*tch meant some harm. I loved the way Kayla conducted herself. I hope she leaves Tyler. Now do not get me wrong, I want them together but the way Annie treated Kayla and Tyler's dismissive attitude pissed my way off. I know it ended with him going back to his parents house, no doubt to confront his mom, but that's not good enough.  Like I said I love Tyler and Kayla together, but Tyler needs to know that Kayla will not put of bullshit, even if it is from his monther. I hope she scares his ass and leaves. Granted Tyler is not the one to be mad at, it's his mother, but if she has to be the one getting beat up in secret all the time Kayla should be pissed. Annie is putting up a front, what a b*tch. Anyway, I loved you update. I cannot wait for more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2011 03:52 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Mrs. Hollis is crazy!!!

Reviewer: othello Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2011 01:59 pm

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Mrs. Hollis is wrong for that and she knows it. Tyler should set her straight before she does more damage. I feel sorry for Kayla. She shouldn't have been talked to like that, especially with Mrs. Hollis knowing Kayla didn't have any family left. The NERVE of that woman!! Thanks for the update!! Excellent!!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2011 11:19 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Poor Kayla...Tyler's mom just attacked her.  There are some underlying issues there. That was not cool at all.  I hope that Tyler gets to see his mom from that more negative perspective because Kayla was completely uncomfortable and did not deserve that type of rude and nasty behavior from anybody at any time, but especially on Christmas from a person whose son invited her into their home. 

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2011 05:24 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Kayla you had every right  react as you did,  but Tyler is  not is mother. This is an hard one becasue he won't believe her unless he hears his mother spewing that filth.  I hope that he does, so that he can put her in her place.  She was all kinds of wrong for coming at Kayla that way!!  I love this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2011 01:38 am

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

WOW.... That didn't go so well, hopefully Tyler is going to go and set his mother straight

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 11:17 pm

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Please another update

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 10:40 pm

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Please another update

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 10:40 pm

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Please another update

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 10:40 pm

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Please another update

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 10:40 pm

Title: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

It is getting good. His mom is crazy. I am glad that she held her cool and got know the rest of the family. I loved the interaction with her and his father and brother. I am upset that he tried to take up for his mom. I hope that he goes and tells his mom off.

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 10:39 pm

Title: Can’t Lose What You Never Had

Office romances are difficult and I can understand why she wants to keep theirs a secret, but sometimes things happen and you are unable to do so. I like your train of thought on this. Also, him asking her at the last minute to meet the parents....yes that was sneaky and low down, but when a man is not sure or feels desperate he will do desperate things and that is what he did. I understand that also. Kayla has broken all the rules when it comes to Tyler, but when it comes to love, All is Fair, right? And the grandbabies part...yeah it's coming, he wants the longterm with her and that includes marriage and babies. I hope she is ready for the long term with him!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2011 03:03 pm

Title: Can’t Lose What You Never Had

Kayla is really working that last nerve, I just want to put my size ten boot on her neck.  Tyler loves you fool, just let.  That heifer is really scared of being in love.  I love this story and I can't to read about her meeting his parents.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2011 01:48 am

Title: Can’t Lose What You Never Had

I'm loving that she's sorta breaking all her rules for him.  Love will make you do the darndest things. Can't wait to see how she's received by the family.   

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2011 08:39 pm

Title: Forever and Always in Love with You

So glad you were able to update...I love some Tyler and Kayla.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 01:37 pm

Title: Forever and Always in Love with You

I really do love this story!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 05:56 pm

Title: Forever and Always in Love with You

love it

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 06:47 am



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