Title: Forever and Always in Love with You

He's whipped, she's whipped, they are so in love it is sickening to the outside world, but hey, the only people that do not like it are haters. Keep up the good work with this story I like it alot. They have a very strong and powerful love, it just needs to be harnessed! They both have the potential to hurt each other because of the love they have for each other!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 04:53 am

Title: Hold Me, Love Me, Kiss Me

Ok she should know that her girls were going to bug her until she spilled some of her secret romance.  But I am glad they are giving her the space she needs before delving any deeper into her personal business.  No for Mr. Tyler Hollis....he is sprung like Donkey Kong! He is about ready to pop the question isn't he?  And since Ms. Kayla has given him permission to use the spare key and keep it....Oh yeah it is getting super serious with those two!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 03:44 am

Title: Forever and Always in Love with You

I am glad that Kayla told him about the pendant, why is she so closed off and secretive?  Kayla admit that you love Taylor and let him love you in return.



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles thanks for the feed back, and I dont think she's being secretive she just has a hard time talking about her parents.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 10:50 pm

Title: Hold Me, Love Me, Kiss Me

I'm loving this story.  You keep mentioning that it's moving slow, but I don't feel that way.  I actually think Tyler started talking about love way too quick.  I mean the sex is awesome so isn't that more like lust, because he doesn't really even know her.  Keep up the good work and consider getting a beta to help with proofing if the typos and grammatical errors really bother you.  Either way I'm thankful you're sharing your gift. 

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 12:58 am

Title: Hold Me, Love Me, Kiss Me

Is she preganant already?

Where will things go with them?

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2011 11:58 am

Title: Seasons Change My Love For You Wont

Skucky, sh  They are moving on in their relationship but why is Kayla still wanting to hide thier relationship?  This Lisa person, I really don't like her, she is an old bitter bidy.  The man didn't want you so get over it please!!  Aaron is an hoot, I love him.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2011 11:09 pm

Title: For Once In My Life Almost Doesn’t Count

Ok, I don't think I like the way it ended with Mike, and I don't think he is out of the picture totally yet, but dang if the sex isn't hot with the Kayla and Tyler, he seems to be into that dominating thing....if she likes it....hey I love it. Keep up the good work and keep the story coming and hotttt!  I can see this relationship coming into some tests in the future, but in the end it will be worth it.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2011 10:59 pm

Title: For Once In My Life Almost Doesn’t Count

I am absolutely loving this. I'm glad she finally got rid of Mike, it went on too long. I hope he doesn't turn out to be psycho.

 

I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next chapter.

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2011 09:00 am

Title: Blame it on the Snow

Wow. I'm really enjoying this story. I don't know if  you've looked at this chapter, but something went wrong with the spacing.

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2011 08:30 am

Title: For Once In My Life Almost Doesn’t Count

Poor Mike!! Glad she let him go, she would have hurt him more by stringing him along. Hope she and Tyler can make it work.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2011 04:31 am

Title: For Once In My Life Almost Doesn’t Count

This is the most honest that Kayla has been and I am proud of her.  Tyler should have hit Aaron in his mouth for the mess in that bar.  Kayla let Tyler into your heart you know that you want to.  Tyler is your man and you are his woman!!!  Claim it, own it and love him!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2011 03:17 am

Title: Secret Love Games

Kayla is seriously getting on my nerves. I can't stand her anymore. she put herself in this situation and she can't even break it off with Mike. she just wants to put her foot in both shoes. I am really sorry for Mike and Tyler...poor guys. The fisrt one doesn't even know she has been cheating on him, breaking her 6 months rule....kind of a hypocrite, and Tyler knows the situation, he wants to be with her, and it seems like she wants to be with him too, so what is she wating for? She's gonna loose both of them if she keeps going on like that. So before that happens she needs to make her mind up and finally break up with Mike if that's what she wants.

Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 11:52 pm

Title: Secret Love Games

Frankly speaking, I kind of feel sorry for Mike. He is a gentleman for respecting Kayla's six months rule but at the same time confused as to why Kayla is giving him the cold shoulder. That being said, I am still rooting for a Kayla-Tyler's HEA. Hopefully, you can give the sexy Mike (I love his cast picture) a new ebony love in your next story. 

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 11:48 am

Title: Secret Love Games

Kayla needs to break up with Mike. For her sanity as well as his. Tyler is like a tiger stalking his prey...love it. Nice update! Keep it coming!!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 09:40 am

Title: Secret Love Games

Both Tyler and Kayla need to get it together. Tyler seems volatile and forges ahead without forethought and Kayla as usual continues to be indecisive. She needs to be truthful to herself and stop stringing Mike along. Feel bad for him. Its like she's using both of them without thought for their feelings.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 06:18 am

Title: Secret Love Games

JEALOUS MUCH? DAYAM! I kayla needs to stop playing with Mike....if she wants tyler she needs be a woman and break it off with mike before tyler does something really stupid and ends up in jail behind her indecisive ass!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 06:17 am

Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

DAYAM......In the work place? That is just asking for trouble...And Tyler is rather possessive, don't you think?  Heck if I didn't know any better, I would think this is one of those Werewolf finding his mate kind of stories....and if you know them, you know that once a Wolf finds his mate......he is HELA JEALOUS!!!!! But damn the sex with them is always........WHEW! WOW!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 05:59 am

Title: Blame it on the Snow

DAYAM!!!! HELL THAT TYLER he put his stamp on KAYLA didn't he? I mean he has claimed the Kitty as belonging to him and him only! Ms. Kayla needs to go ahead and break it off with Mike and Tyler needs to let Lisa know it is over, before they hurt gets any worse! But again.....DAYAM He put that kitty in lock up!  That was a damn good sex scene.....almost to the point of rape...maybe? I knew it was going to happen when she opened the door!  10

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 05:35 am

Title: Born To Give My Love To You

Tyler is thinking....He has to make this thing with Kayla right.  He knows he messed up and wants to apologize to her...he does not have her phone number but he knows where she lives.....So he will apologize in person. So he can get some...Sleep! Sounds pausible right?

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 05:00 am

Title: Pieces of my Heart

Backstory, every good story needs some backstory (or background) info on all the main characters.  I am happy to know you are thinking ahead and behind to make this story have more dimensions. There is nothing like a bland/flat story line. Again I spotted some errors, nothing major...but grammar errors. 9 for the backstory. Oh well, Tyler has assumed more than what is really happening with Kayla.....he is going to look foolish when he finds out it is not what he thinks it is.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 04:40 am

Title: If Loving you is Wrong

I don't think it was that bad....I think it is a needed chapter inorder to get every character in place for the "fun."  I think it is an eight. I did find a few errors with spelling and grammar, but all in all it was pretty good! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 04:23 am

Title: A Chance Meeting with you

Hummm, do I detect alot of chemistry between Tyler and Kayla? There is nothing like chemistry between two strong personalities....makes for a lot of fireworks in the relationship! I think this is going to be a good one!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 04:12 am

Title: Secret Love Games

Ok maybe I am being a little hard on Kayla, and calling her a selfish bitch may be a little too extreme. But she is not the victim here. The fact is that she did cheat on her boyfriend. And yes Tyler knew what he had got himself in too and he shouldn't have go back to her house and her office. But lets face it. He did not forced Kayla to sleep with him. She could have said no but she didn't. And on top of that she treats Mike, her boyfriend as shit, as if he is doing something wrong. So she is acting as a selfish bitch. Don't get me wrong, I like Tyler and her together. The sex is hot!!!!!!! But what she is doing now is just wrong. She needs to make her choice.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 01:20 am

Title: Secret Love Games

I m really enjoying your story.

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 12:30 am

Title: Secret Love Games

No Kayla is not having a hard time. She is a bitch. She is the one cheating on her boyfriend and apart from that, she also treats him as shit. She should have broke things off with him. She is one selfish bitch and she knows it. Mike does not deserve this. While I do like the romance between her and Tyler, I still think that this is wrong. Tyler needs to leave her sorry ass alone. She is the one who wants to be in this predicament. Tyler know he shouldn't have get involved with her, because she has a boyfriend. But at least he is staying away from her until she breaks up with him. So he is trying to make things right, while Kayla wants to continue sleeping with him and still be in a relationship with Mike. Kind of sluttish if you ask me. If she at least care about Mike, then she will break up with him and let him find someone better. Someone who will love him back.



Author's Response:

I think your being a little hard on Kayla how could you call her a selfish bitch, yes she likes Tyler and is very attracted to him. You sound like your blaming Kayla for the whole affair when Tyler was the one who started it, she didn't ask him to come back to her house that night. Tyler knew with he was getting himself into she went two week avoiding him and trying to forget what had happened between them it was Tyler who came to her office for the second time around.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 05:46 pm



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