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Title: Secret Love Games

Mike sounds controlling and I love that Tyler is taking up for Kayla. I cannot wait for them to see they belong to each other. It is sweet how they are both acting. Please update another chapter

 Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 05:18 pm
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

Tyler is every girl's dream man and Kayla's hesistation might lead to Lisa's gain.

Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 09:46 am
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

Hmm, Kayla needs to stop stringing one of them and make a choice. She's so indecisive.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 07:23 am
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

Sparks are flying already! Love the cast pictures.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 05:09 pm
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

I would say that he has every right to be upset.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 02:15 pm
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

Kayla is blessed to have Tyler who is fully committed to her and so in love with her. Imagine how she would feel if he is the one who is loving her and at the same time seeing Lisa. Devastating isn't it? Am also eager to find out what "large secret" Tyler is trying to control over the years.

BTW, hope you will also regularly update Deceit, Regret, Confession, another of my favorites, thanks.

 Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 03:36 am
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

Wow! Yes he is more than pissed, he loves her and it's like Kayla doesn't hear his declarations of love.

The issue is with her and not him. She cannot admit to her feelings for some reason, although she doesn't want to hurt Mike, she is hurting Tyler.

This story is really good, I want to see where it goes.

Thanks for writing it.

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 04:01 pm
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

WOW! I like Tyler acting this way, lol. But that statement he made would piss me off, ' If you can't make up your mind, I'll do it for you,' NO HE DID NOT, lol! So, I guess that meant he would put Kayla on blast to Mike? He has it bad, but he needs to let Kayla come to him on his own. Keep it coming!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 02:57 pm
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

This is too exciting...what is Kayla going to do? Is there going to be a show down betwen Mike and Tyler?

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 01:54 pm
Title: Blame it on the Snow

This chapter was written in paragraph mode and it was hard to read BUT IT WAS FULL OF HAWWWWTNESS.
At first I thought she was dreaming ... Tyler didn't seem the type to take charge, but I guess he did. KAYLA doesn't know what she got herself into.

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 01:51 pm
Title: Meet The Cast

Nice!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 01:41 pm
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

Kayla don't want Tyler to make up her mind for her!!  What is the womens problem?  What is she scared of?  There is an obvious attraction and the sex was hot!!  The man said I love you, she deserve you boo!!!  I will kiss it and  make it better Tyler.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 09:11 am
Title: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

Man, Kayla better get her act together!! Screw Mike! Go for Tyler!! Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next one!! 

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 08:48 am
Title: Blame it on the Snow

ooooh, there's going to be trouble. No protection?

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2011 07:29 am
Title: Blame it on the Snow

Oh wow, Tyler went back and had sex with Kayla.  Aren't they dating other people. This can't be good.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2011 05:01 am
Title: Born To Give My Love To You

Thanks for a great update.  It seems that Tyler is determined to date Kayla.  

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2011 04:58 am
Title: Meet The Cast

She had the perfect opening to break up with Mike right then and there.  Loving this story.

 Reviewer: aiwen01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2011 04:42 am
Title: Blame it on the Snow

Loving this story.

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2011 04:12 am
Title: Born To Give My Love To You

Tyler is impulsive in a controlled kind of way, if that makes sense. :)

He is so going over to see Kayla. What will happen, there's no telling. The way he's feeling and the way she's feeling, ANYTHING, and I do ANYTHING can happen. I just want to be there to see it. great story and great storytelling, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 04:42 pm
Title: Born To Give My Love To You

My bet is that Tyler is going back to Kayla's place. Can't wait to read what they're gonna say to each other. Please update asap. BTW, love these two lovely characters.

 Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 08:30 am
Title: Born To Give My Love To You

Can'f wait to find out where Tyler is going!

 Reviewer: Faye Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 06:30 am
Title: Born To Give My Love To You

Loved the update. Poor Tyler sure having a hard time!! He needs to stay cool ,calm and collected when dealing with her.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 05:42 am
Title: Born To Give My Love To You

They must have corrected the how it appeared on the page, because I could read it.  Tyler kissed Kayla and it was smoking!!!  It was so good that Kayla freaked out.  Now Tyler has to break up with Lisa since it ain't feeling her anyway.  Thanks for the update!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 05:15 am
Title: Born To Give My Love To You

This as typed is very hard to read,  paragraphs are always appreciated.  I can't read this Kaleah!!!  Please get some help with formating.



Author's Response:

Sorry you cant read it but my formating is ok its not me putting it all together it the chambers set up not mine it even doing it on my pc when i look at it.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 01:39 am
Title: Born To Give My Love To You

Tyler is on his way to Kayla's.

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2011 11:44 pm


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