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Title: Pieces of my Heart

Hmm, interesting so far. Feel for Tyler. Hope he and Kayla can make it work.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2011 06:57 am
Title: Pieces of my Heart

My dear Tyler, be a man and just quit fantasizing and go get your girl ! 

Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2011 03:27 am
Title: Pieces of my Heart

Great update.  Glad that Tyler doesn't work at her company.  As for Mike dude is a litlle pushy and obsessive.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2011 03:12 pm
Title: If Loving you is Wrong

Great update.  I don't blame her for not wanting to date in the work place it can cause a lot of problems if things don't work out.  But what about the eye candy in the elevator? Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2011 03:09 pm
Title: Pieces of my Heart

It's not right to lead Mike on when Kayla's heart is with the gorgeous green eyed Tyler. I'm an old fashion kind of girl who believes sex is beautiful only with the one that you truly loves. Tyler should go after Kayla if he really wants her to be the mother of his children.

 Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2011 04:20 am
Title: Pieces of my Heart

I love any story with Michael Vartin in it!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2011 09:33 pm
Title: If Loving you is Wrong

Kayla handle your business, Kayla is the shiznit!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2011 09:22 pm
Title: If Loving you is Wrong

I love slow burn.............it makes the ultimate surrender so much more sweeter and well worth the wait (one of my favorite in The Chamber is Kept). Instead of a quickie, story that focuses on the ups and downs of a relationship strikes a core in me as I can share the joy, despair, pain and wonder of love with the H/H.

Just like Deceit, Regret and Confession, make this another good and memorable story worth re-read. Go girl!

 Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2011 03:59 am
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

Thanks for a great read.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 03:35 pm
Title: Meet The Cast

Good cast.  I like the fact that you give a brief blurb about each character.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 03:33 pm
Title: If Loving you is Wrong

Sounds good so far!

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 06:56 am
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

Please continue the story!

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 01:23 am
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

Interesting start.More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2011 05:55 am
Title: Meet The Cast

This is about to be a very interesting story.

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Date: October 04 2011 01:34 am
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

Great start

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Date: October 03 2011 09:05 am
Title: Meet The Cast

love the line-up

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2011 09:01 am
Title: Meet The Cast

Hi Kaleah,

Could you please not restrict your new story Forever and A Day with You only FOR MEMBERS ONLY? Being a non-member and someone living in Asia, I could not have a chance to read it. I truly love your intense and emotional writing after falling head over heels in love with Deceit, Regret, Confession. Hope my wish will be granted, thanks..............................Amelia.

 



Author's Response:

Sorry Amelia didn't realize that I had did that please fore give me.

 Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 03 2011 05:11 am
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

This story is going to be hot and sexy, I can tell already.  I love Michael Vartin, so thank you for using him as the male lead in this story as well.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2011 05:03 am
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

A good start to this story. I can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2011 03:48 am
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

great start

 Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2011 03:27 am
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

OK...I want more!!

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Date: October 03 2011 03:19 am


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