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Title: Why we do the things, we do

Tyler's jealousy if getting in the way. Argh can't we all just get along? «•_•»

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 10:25 am
Title: For Once In My Life Almost Doesn’t Count

I find it a bit off-putting how every sexual encounter seems to hurt or that he thought "I know I'm hurting her, but" ... that's a bit too much like rape to me. Not the actual sex, but just the dialogue around it. I mean I know he's big, but it'd hard to find merit in the sex scene described as painful...

 Reviewer: TheDaezy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 08:38 am
Title: Why we do the things, we do

Great update.

So, more drama...they will end up at the same club and Tyler is a jealous man for sure.

thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 03:40 am
Title: Meet The Cast

Another great chapter.  Thank you!

 Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 02:57 am
Title: Love Has No Bounders

I love them! I don't care if his momma doesn't like Kayla...I know they are meant to be!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 02:49 am
Title: Why we do the things, we do

Well it is forever and a day, the thrill is gone. I'm just tired of these two too much drama in every chapter...it's exhausting.I would still like to see the end which means it's a good story. Thank you...

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2012 11:44 pm
Title: Why we do the things, we do

Traci is has got an attitude, Kayla doesn't you want you in her business leave the woman alone.  Traci is working my nerve and why do I get the feeling that Kayla and Tyler will run into each on thier night out.  Please don't make us wait too long for another update.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2012 11:04 pm
Title: So Sorry Not a Chapter

Goodness gracious...I can't believe I've been passing on this fantastic story for so long...so sorry...please forgive me...I spent all day yesterday afternoon getting caught up in Kayla and Tyler's world...what was I thinking to be missing such a wonderful story...again, sorry for my tardiness...but I promise to be with you and them for the duration...and thanks for giving us this little gem...

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2012 02:50 am
Title: So Sorry Not a Chapter

Disappointed yes, but it will be worth the wait. I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story! You have written it so well. I would have paid to read this story, so I hope you are an up and coming writer.

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2012 01:57 am
Title: So Sorry Not a Chapter

Looking forward to the update.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2012 12:22 am
Title: So Sorry Not a Chapter

Looking forward to the update.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2012 12:22 am
Title: Meet The Cast

aww...i thought this was an update :( looking forward 2 the real one! lol

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 27 2012 10:41 pm
Title: So Sorry Not a Chapter

I got so excited and than read that this wasn't a chapter

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2012 10:05 pm
Title: Meet The Cast

looking forward to an update soon!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 27 2012 03:26 am
Title: Meet The Cast

Please update soon!

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 10 2012 12:58 am
Title: Driven To a Better Understanding

Tyler need to calm his butt down before he ruins thing for good. Why doesn't he ever listen to Aaron.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 11:40 pm
Title: A Chance Meeting with you

I am loving this story.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 11:38 pm
Title: Driven To a Better Understanding

He needs to keep his temper in CHECK. That green monster is going to get him in trouble.

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 02:18 am
Title: Meet The Cast

Tyler is bugging....sometimes his behavior borders on abusive! He has 2 make some big changes before they can B truley happy!

Tyler listen 2 your friend before U lose the mother of your child!

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 05:11 am
Title: Driven To a Better Understanding

LOL  I like Aaron.  Tyler needs to get a grip!  Hope the boss isn't too hard on Kayla.

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 11:42 am
Title: Driven To a Better Understanding

Tyler needs therapy...seriously.  The number one cause of death in pregnant women is homicide at the hands of the childs father.  Kayla has no family, few friends, no acceptance coming from her baby's grandmother...she needs time away from Tyler. Imagine losing her job and being financially dependant on him.  No good.  From the physical pain during sex to emotional abuse...they need time away from each other. He more so than her needs to get his head together.

 Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 06:46 am
Title: Driven To a Better Understanding

Oh geez Tyler better get his act together!

 Reviewer: MeganRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 05:58 am
Title: Driven To a Better Understanding

He is soooo stupid. Tyler is too jealous

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 05:30 am
Title: Finding My Way Back Home

I hope there's an update soon - I want to see what mayhem and foolishness Tyler comes up with next!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 01:17 am
Title: Meet The Cast

need an update...please!

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2012 02:31 am


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